Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two clear supporting reasons. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “This is a Good Wife”) and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I feel calmer and happier when I see them because their colors and scents lift my mood, so they help me relax after a long day.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly (mention someone you know) and give specific details about that person. Avoid repeating your own feelings and unclear words like “shamble” and broad generalizations like “every woman likes flowers.” Use linking words (for example, “for instance” or “also”).

Ejemplo: Yes. My older sister loves flowers. For instance, she always keeps fresh lilies on her desk because their scent helps her focus while she studies, and she says each flower reminds her of a special memory.

Sugerencia: Keep the answer direct and tidy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details about seasons or locations. Use linking words like “because” or “in spring” to organize information.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, in spring the parks are full of tulips and cherry blossoms, while in summer you can see roses and sunflowers in people’s gardens.

Sugerencia: Good content and relevance. Make sentences more natural and concise: state the habit, provide a reason and an example with linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like “capture about beautiful flowers” and extra clauses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers with my smartphone because their colors cheer me up. For example, I photograph bright marigolds in the park and look at the pictures later when I need to relax.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and improve grammar and specificity. Use linking words to give examples and avoid general mistakes (plural/singular, articles). Mention occasions and reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers in my country. For example, boyfriends commonly give bouquets to girlfriends on birthdays or anniversaries, and flowers are also sent for graduations and to congratulate someone.

× When I see flowers, I feel patient and happy.

✓ When I see flowers, I feel calm and happy.

'Patient' describes someone willing to wait; it is not appropriate for describing an emotional state caused by flowers. 'Calm' correctly describes a relaxed, peaceful feeling. Use adjectives that match the intended emotion. Suggestion: Replace 'patient' with 'calm' or 'relaxed'.

× This is a Good Wife to reduce stress.

✓ They are good for reducing stress.

The original sentence uses an odd noun phrase 'Good Wife' and incorrect capitalization and structure. The speaker likely means flowers help reduce stress. Use 'They' to refer to flowers and the gerund phrase 'for reducing stress' to express purpose. Suggestion: Refer to 'flowers' and use 'good for reducing stress' or 'help reduce stress'.

× And.

✓ (Remove fragment)

Single conjunction 'And.' is a sentence fragment without a subject or verb. Remove it or complete the thought. Suggestion: Combine with previous sentence or add a full clause.

× Yes, of course I really like flowers because they make me feel calm and leave my mood.

✓ Yes, of course. I really like flowers because they make me feel calm and lift my mood.

'Leave my mood' is incorrect collocation. The correct verb is 'lift' (or 'improve') when referring to mood. Also add punctuation between clauses. Suggestion: Use 'lift my mood' or 'improve my mood'.

× But shamble having fresh flowers on my desk helps me relax after a stressful day.

✓ Having fresh flowers on my desk helps me relax after a stressful day.

'But shamble' is unclear and likely a mis-transcription. The sentence should begin with the subject 'Having fresh flowers...' without the extraneous word. 'Having' correctly introduces the gerund subject. Suggestion: Remove 'But shamble' and start with 'Having'.

× Besides that, every flower has a meaning, value and every woman likes flowers.

✓ Besides that, every flower has a meaning and value, and many women like flowers.

The original mixes singular ('every flower') with a generalization 'every woman likes flowers' which is too absolute. Also missing conjunction punctuation. Use 'many women' to avoid overgeneralization and add 'and' to connect phrases. Suggestion: Use 'many women' or 'most women' only if you are certain; otherwise 'many' is safer.

× Where I live a life where there are lots of flowers, it depends on the season and every season has different flowers.

✓ Where I live, there are lots of flowers; it depends on the season, and each season has different flowers.

The phrase 'Where I live a life where' is ungrammatical. Insert comma after 'Where I live' and use 'there are' to state existence. Use 'each season' rather than 'every season' for clarity and add proper punctuation. Suggestion: Rephrase to 'Where I live, there are lots of flowers. It depends on the season; each season has different flowers.'.

× I'm a big fan of taking photos, especially of flowers, and I often capture about beautiful flowers with my smartphone and I see.

✓ I'm a big fan of taking photos, especially of flowers, and I often capture beautiful flowers with my smartphone.

'Capture about beautiful flowers' is ungrammatical; 'capture' should directly take the object 'beautiful flowers.' The trailing 'and I see' is unnecessary and creates a fragment. Remove 'about' and the extra clause. Suggestion: Use 'capture beautiful flowers' and omit 'and I see'.

× I save them and look at the photos later when I'm stressed because they help me feel calmer and happier.

✓ I save them and look at the photos later when I'm stressed because they help me feel calmer and happier.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no changes needed. It uses appropriate tense and structure. Suggestion: None.

× There are many people in my country who often send flowers to other.

✓ There are many people in my country who often send flowers to others.

The word 'other' is incorrect here; the plural pronoun 'others' is required to mean other people. Use 'others' as the object. Suggestion: Replace 'other' with 'others'.

× For example boyfriend often send beautiful flowers to girlfriend in anniversary or her birthday.

✓ For example, a boyfriend often sends beautiful flowers to his girlfriend on their anniversary or her birthday.

Missing articles 'a' before 'boyfriend' and 'his' to show possession. Subject-verb agreement: singular 'boyfriend' requires 'sends'. Use preposition 'on' with 'anniversary' and 'their' to match shared celebration; or keep 'her birthday'. Also add commas. Suggestion: Use 'a boyfriend often sends' and 'to his girlfriend on their anniversary or her birthday.'.

× I think it is a good way to express the love.

✓ I think it is a good way to express love.

The definite article 'the' before 'love' is unnecessary in this general statement. Remove 'the' to make it natural. Suggestion: Say 'express love' or 'express one's love'.