Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cümlelerinizi daha doğru dilbilgisiyle ve daha doğal akışla kurmalısınız. Kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından bir neden verin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini (uh, so) azaltın. Örneğin adınız ile çiçek arasındaki bağlantıyı açıklarken yanlış kelime seçimlerinden kaçının ve tekil/çoğul uyumuna dikkat edin.

Ejemplo: I love flowers, especially roses, because my name sounds similar to 'rose'. Also, I find colorful gardens very beautiful and relaxing.

Sugerencia: Genel ifadeler kullanırken doğru dilbilgisi ve daha spesifik bilgi verin. 'Every girls' yerine 'most girls' veya 'many people I know' gibi ifadeler kullanın. Kısa bir neden veya örnek ekleyin ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Ejemplo: Yes, many people I know love flowers. For example, several of my friends enjoy receiving bouquets on special occasions.

Sugerencia: Cümleyi daha açık ve doğru hale getirin; tekrarları ve anlamsal hataları düzeltin. 'Various flavour' yerine 'various types' veya 'a wide variety' kullanın. Gerekirse bir örnek verin (parklar, bahçeler).

Ejemplo: Yes, I live in Turkey and there is a wide variety of flowers, especially in parks and gardens during spring.

Sugerencia: Negatif cevap verirken daha doğal ve kısa bir açıklama yapın. 'I don't feel necessary' yerine 'I don't usually' veya 'I don't find it necessary' kullanın. Nedeninizi açıkça belirtin ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because they are common around me and I don't feel the need to photograph them.

Sugerencia: Cümleniz anlamsal olarak karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. 'A lawyer sent each other' yanlış; yerine kimin gönderdiğini ve hangi durumlarda açıkça belirtin. Cinsiyete ilişkin ifadelerde dikkatli olun. Örneğin 'people often send flowers on special days' gibi doğrudan söyleyin ve bir örnek verin.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers for special occasions, such as birthdays or holidays. Men sometimes give flowers to their partners on important days.

× Yes, I love flowers, especially roses because my name is Yosemite, so you is the same mean as rose.

✓ Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, because my name is Yosemite, so 'Yosemite' has the same meaning as 'rose'.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronoun 'you' and wrong verb 'is' for the subject; also 'mean' should be the noun 'meaning'. Use a clear subject ('Yosemite') with correct verb 'has' and the noun 'meaning'. Also add commas for clarity.

× So especially, uh, colorful garden are very fascinating for me.

✓ So especially colorful gardens are very fascinating to me.

The noun is plural ('gardens') so the verb should be 'are' (which was present) but the original omitted plural form. Also use the preposition 'to' with 'fascinating'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× Yes, every girls.

✓ Yes, every girl.

The determiner 'every' must be followed by a singular noun, so 'girls' should be 'girl'.

× Every girls loves flowers who might recognize closely.

✓ Every girl loves flowers and might recognize them closely.

After correcting to singular 'girl', the verb must be 'loves'. The relative clause was incorrect; use a coordinated clause 'and might recognize them closely' and include object 'them' to refer to flowers.

× In my environment.

✓ In my community.

'In my environment' is unnatural in this context; use 'in my community' or 'where I live'. Also it should be attached to the previous sentence rather than standing alone.

× Yes, I I live in Turkey and Turkey is Turkey has very various flavour, uh, types.

✓ Yes, I live in Turkey, and Turkey has a great variety of flowers.

The original repeats 'Turkey' and mixes 'flavour' and 'types' incorrectly. Use 'has a great variety of flowers' to convey diversity. Remove filler 'uh' and duplicate words.

× No, because I don't feel necessary.

✓ No, because I don't feel it is necessary.

Use the clause 'feel it is necessary' or 'feel the need' rather than 'feel necessary'. The dummy pronoun 'it' is required here.

× It's so I am think everywhere flowers so not necessary for me.

✓ I think flowers are everywhere, so taking photos is not necessary for me.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and tense. Use 'I think' followed by a clause, and state the object 'taking photos' to explain why it's unnecessary.

× Yes, a lawyer sent each other flowers, especially men's like special days.

✓ Yes, people often send flowers to each other, especially men on special days.

'A lawyer' is incorrect; likely intended 'people'. 'Send each other' requires plural participants. 'Men's like special days' is ungrammatical; use 'men on special days'.