Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn; tránh câu không liên quan (ví dụ “I love to live” không phù hợp). Dùng 1 câu chủ đề rồi 1-2 câu bổ sung cụ thể. Chú ý ngữ pháp và chia động từ đúng.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I enjoy their colors and fragrance, and they make my home feel more cheerful.

Sugerencia: Cần sử dụng trật tự từ và thì đúng, đồng thời dùng từ số nhiều khi nói chung (flowers). Bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với chi tiết cụ thể về người đó.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother really loves flowers. She often grows roses and lilies in our small garden and spends time caring for them every weekend.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và giải thích nguyên nhân bằng câu hoàn chỉnh; tránh cấu trúc không đúng như “not getting”. Nên nêu địa điểm, miêu tả ngắn về môi trường xung quanh.

Ejemplo: No, there are not many flowers near my house because I live in an apartment building with little outdoor space, so there is only a few potted plants in the hallway.

Sugerencia: Trả lời trực tiếp, sửa lỗi danh từ số nhiều và cụm từ “photo of the world” không rõ nghĩa. Nên nêu tần suất và mục đích chụp kèm ví dụ cụ thể.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially when I visit parks or markets. I usually take a few pictures to post on social media or to practice my photography skills.

Sugerencia: Cần tránh dùng “I do” khi nói về người khác; trả lời tổng quát rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể về dịp. Nên nối câu bằng liên từ để mạch lạc và dùng danh từ số nhiều.

Ejemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions. For example, it's common to give bouquets on Valentine's Day, birthdays and traditional holidays.

× Yeah, I do, and I love to live.

✓ Yeah, I do, and I love to look at/keep/live with flowers.

The original sentence 'I love to live' is incorrect in this context. The student likely meant they love to 'live with' or 'look at' flowers or 'keep' plants. Use correct present tense verbs and appropriate collocations: 'love to live' without an object is unnatural. Suggest using verb phrases that collocate with 'flowers' such as 'live with flowers', 'look at flowers' or 'keep flowers'.

× Yet I do my mom really like flower.

✓ Yes, I do. My mom really likes flowers.

Errors: incorrect adverb 'Yet' and missing full stop; 'my mom' is third person singular so the verb requires an -s ('likes'); 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when speaking generally. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use 'Yes' instead of 'Yet', add -s to verbs for he/she/it, and pluralize countable nouns when general.

× No, because my house is not getting.

✓ No, because my house doesn't have many flowers/There are not many flowers near my house.

'Is not getting' is an incomplete and incorrect use of progressive tense here. The student likely intended to say their house doesn't have many flowers or the area isn't suited for many flowers. Use simple present negative 'doesn't have' or 'there are not many' to describe a general state. Avoid 'getting' without an object or time reference.

× Yeah, I do, but I don't often take photo of the world.

✓ Yeah, I do, but I don't often take photos of them/flowers.

Problems: 'take photo' should be plural 'take photos' or 'take a photo'; 'of the world' is unnatural—use 'of flowers' or 'of them'. Also when speaking generally use plural countable nouns. Maintain simple present for habits.

× Yeah, I do, but people give people flower in Valentine. Or. Holiday.

✓ Yes, people give flowers to others on Valentine's Day or during holidays.

Several issues: 'give people flower' wrong word order and singular 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'; 'Valentine' should be 'Valentine's Day'; preposition 'on' is used with days and 'during' with periods like 'holidays'. Also remove extra short sentences and correct word order to 'give flowers to others'.