Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar errors, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I prefer giving flowers rather than receiving them because I enjoy seeing others' reactions. For example, I often bring roses to friends' celebrations to brighten their day.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer, correctly structured answer with specific time and reaction details. Use linking words like "for example" or "for instance" and correct tense and articles.

Ejemplo: Yes. My mother loves flowers. For instance, I gave her a bouquet on my last birthday and she was really touched; she kept the flowers on the dining table for a week.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and simply. Avoid complex conditional structures and filler words. State the situation in your hometown and contrast it briefly with another place using a linking word like "but" or "however."

Ejemplo: Not really. There are few flowers in my hometown, but if I lived in a coastal town, for example, I think there would be many more public gardens and flowerbeds.

Sugerencia: Be direct. Say whether you take photos or not, then give a brief reason and an example. Reduce hesitations and correct phrasing like "caught off guard" and "I had never thought about it."

Ejemplo: Not usually. I hadn't thought about it until now, but sometimes I take photos of flowers when I see a beautiful arrangement on the street because I want to remember the colors and shapes.

Sugerencia: Clarify whether you mean physical flowers or pictures of flowers. Answer directly, then give a specific detail about how people usually send greetings (e.g., messaging apps) and when (holidays, birthdays). Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, in my country people often send floral images via messaging apps rather than physical bouquets. For example, on birthdays and holidays many people share flower photos and stickers on WhatsApp or Telegram.

× Yeah, I think yeah, a lot of people love flowers, even I man.

✓ Yeah, I think so; a lot of people love flowers, even I do, man.

The original uses 'even I man' which misuses pronouns and omits the auxiliary 'do' required for short answers in present simple. Replace with 'even I do, man' or 'even me' in informal speech; 'I do' is grammatically correct. Also add 'so' for natural affirmation and punctuation to separate clauses.

× And I also love not to get flowers, but to give and give flowers to another person, to give them opportunity to enjoy this moment.

✓ And I also prefer not to receive flowers, but to give them to other people, to give them the opportunity to enjoy the moment.

'Love not to get' is unnatural; use 'prefer not to receive' or 'I don't like receiving.' 'Another person' is better as 'other people' for generality, and 'give them opportunity' needs the article 'the' => 'the opportunity.' Verb choice 'receive' is more natural than 'get.'

× Yeah, the first thing that's come to my mind is my mom a few years a few days ago on my birthday, I gave her bouquet of flowers and she really appreciate it.

✓ Yeah, the first thing that comes to my mind is my mom. A few days ago on my birthday, I gave her a bouquet of flowers and she really appreciated it.

'That's come' is incorrect tense/wording; use 'that comes' for a general present thought. The time phrase 'a few years a few days ago' is mixed up; corrected to 'a few days ago.' 'Gave her bouquet' needs an article: 'gave her a bouquet.' 'She really appreciate' requires past tense 'appreciated' to match 'gave.'

× I can't say, uh, this way, but if I, if I would live, if I had lived in, uh, another place, it would be, uh, quite more flowers that uh, that are existing in my hometown.

✓ I can't say for sure, but if I lived in another place, there would be many more flowers than in my hometown.

The original mixes conditional forms. Use 'if I lived' (second conditional) with 'there would be.' 'Quite more flowers' is unidiomatic; use 'many more flowers.' 'That are existing' is unnecessary; 'than in my hometown' is concise. Also add 'for sure' to clarify 'can't say.'

× All this question cut me off guard because I had never or thinking about it, but it's so it's OK for me to catch the photos of flowers, catch this moment to enjoy it.

✓ This whole question caught me off guard because I had never thought about it, but it's okay for me to take photos of flowers and capture the moment to enjoy it.

'All this question' should be 'This whole question.' 'Cut me off guard' should be past tense 'caught me off guard.' 'Had never or thinking' mixes forms; use 'had never thought about it.' 'Catch the photos' should be 'take photos' and 'catch this moment' -> 'capture the moment.' Simplify 'it's so it's OK' to 'it's okay.'

× I can say yes, and I completely agree with this statement that people in my country always send the pictures through the messaging, especially in WhatsApp or Telegram or other messaging messages.

✓ I would say yes, and I completely agree that people in my country often send pictures via messaging apps, especially WhatsApp, Telegram, or other messaging services.

'Send the pictures through the messaging' is unidiomatic; use 'send pictures via messaging apps.' 'Always' may be too strong—'often' is more natural. 'Other messaging messages' is redundant; use 'messaging services' or 'apps.' Also 'I can say yes' -> 'I would say yes' is more natural.

× And it it is widespread in our country I think.

✓ And it is widespread in our country, I think.

The sentence had a duplicated 'it' and lacked a comma before 'I think.' Remove the extra 'it' and add punctuation for clarity.