Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and clear: give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, article use), and avoid repetition. Use linking words to add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., why you like them, where you keep them).

Ejemplo: I love flowers, especially daffodils and sunflowers. I find daffodils delicate and sunflowers cheerful, so I keep a few pots of them on my balcony to brighten my home.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, fix sentence structure and word choice, and provide one clear specific detail about the person’s habits or reasons. Use a linking word to connect the reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, my aunt loves flowers. She tends a small garden at home because she says flowers make the house feel cheerful, and she grows daffodils and daisies most of the year.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then give a clear reason with correct grammar and a linking word. Be specific about surroundings and maintenance concerns.

Ejemplo: No, there are not many flowers near my house because most neighbors do not plant them. Also, I don't grow flowers myself since they require a lot of time and care.

Sugerencia: Be direct and natural: give a simple topic sentence and one specific supporting detail (when or where you take photos). Avoid unclear phrases and correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: Not usually — I rarely photograph flowers in daily life. However, when I travel, for example to Xiamen, I sometimes take photos of attractive flowers like daffodils.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and contains many vocabulary errors. Begin with a clear statement, use correct words (e.g., ‘teachers’ occasions, ‘flowers’ types), and give a specific example and reason. Keep it concise and grammatical.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers for special occasions. For example, students sometimes give flowers to teachers on Teacher's Day, and families send flowers to celebrate birthdays or to show appreciation.

× Yes, I'm fond of a variety of flowers just like it.

✓ Yes, I'm fond of a variety of flowers like them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular and does not agree with 'a variety of flowers' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'them'. Also 'just' is unnecessary; keep 'like them' for clarity.

× Crazy daffodil and Daisy sunflowers is so attractive and beautiful that I'm so crazy about it and I have some of them in my at my home.

✓ Crazy daffodils and Daisy sunflowers are so attractive and beautiful that I'm crazy about them, and I have some at my home.

The subject lists multiple flowers (plural), so the verb should be 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). Use plural nouns 'daffodils' and refer to them with 'them' (plural pronoun). Remove extra words 'so' and duplicate 'my' for conciseness and correct word order 'have some at my home'. 'Crazy' as a modifier before a noun is informal but kept; ensure plural form.

× Yes, it's my aunt and she loves keeping flowers in gardens in at the home because I think it's cheerful and bright.

✓ Yes, it's my aunt and she loves keeping flowers in the garden at home because I think they are cheerful and bright.

'In gardens in at the home' is redundant and incorrect preposition usage; use 'in the garden at home'. 'It' refers to flowers (plural), so use 'they are' instead of 'it's'. This corrects pronoun agreement and preposition placement.

× She loves all kinds of flowers, like the daffodil in the cuisine Daisy.

✓ She loves all kinds of flowers, like daffodils and daisies.

The phrase 'the daffodil in the cuisine Daisy' is unclear and uses incorrect nouns/adjectives. Use the plural common names 'daffodils and daisies' to list examples. Remove unnecessary articles and unrelated words ('cuisine').

× No, I I don't know or see any flowers near my house because I'm not the sort of person who likes to plant flowers at my house.

✓ No, I don't see any flowers near my house because I'm not the sort of person who likes to plant flowers there.

Duplicate 'I' removed. 'Know or see' is awkward; 'don't see' is appropriate for visible flowers. Avoid repeating 'my house'—use 'there' for natural phrasing. This fixes sentence structure and redundancy.

× I think it need a lot of time to keep them.

✓ I think it needs a lot of time to take care of them.

Subject 'it' (referring to maintaining flowers) requires third person singular verb 'needs'. Also use the phrase 'to take care of them' rather than 'to keep them' for clarity. This fixes verb form and improves word choice.

× Where it depends in my daily life, I'm not a person who like to taking photos of some kinds of flowers.

✓ It depends; in my daily life, I'm not a person who likes to take photos of flowers.

Start with 'It depends' for correct structure. Use 'likes' for third person singular agreement with 'a person who', and use the infinitive 'to take' rather than 'to taking'. Remove 'some kinds of' unless specific examples are needed.

× But if I go out to have a trip, especially the yuan boy Yuan of Xiamen, I may take some pictures of the daffodil.

✓ But if I go out on a trip, especially to places in Xiamen, I may take some pictures of daffodils.

Use 'go out on a trip' or 'go on a trip'. 'The yuan boy Yuan of Xiamen' is unclear and likely incorrect; replace with 'places in Xiamen' or a specific location name. Use plural 'daffodils' for general photos. This corrects noun phrases and article use.

× It's attractive.

✓ They're attractive.

If referring to flowers (plural), use 'they're' not 'it's'. This ensures pronoun agreement in number.

× Yes, for example, if we have the teacher stay, we may send the disease or sunflowers to our teachers to replace our thanks to them.

✓ Yes, for example, if a teacher is leaving, we may send roses or sunflowers to express our thanks to them.

'Have the teacher stay' is incorrect; use 'a teacher is leaving' or 'to thank a teacher'. 'Disease' is a wrong word choice for 'roses'; replace with 'roses'. Use 'express our thanks' rather than 'replace our thanks'. This fixes vocabulary and sentence structure.

× And apart from that, if we have a modesty, we may send the doctor to our mothers is uh, enjoyable and.

✓ Apart from that, on occasions like Mother's Day, we may send flowers to our mothers, which is enjoyable.

The original sentence is unclear and contains wrong words ('modesty', 'send the doctor'). Replace with a clear event 'Mother's Day' and the correct action 'send flowers'. Use 'which is enjoyable' to finish the thought. This corrects semantics and sentence structure.