Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify the topic sentence and correct word choice. Keep answer concise (1–3 sentences) and use relevant vocabulary (e.g., a specific flower name or color). Avoid unclear phrases like “red because it's so low.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I absolutely love flowers. My favorite flowers are red roses because their color is vibrant and they have a lovely fragrance.

Sugerencia: Improve fluency and remove repetitions. Provide a clear reason with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Use linking words like “because” or “so” once to connect idea and reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, my best friend loves flowers. She always keeps a red rose in her room because it smells wonderful and brightens the space.

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and organize ideas: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Eliminate fillers (uh, um) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because many neighbors grow different types of ornamental plants, so I often see colorful flowers in gardens and on balconies.

Sugerencia: This answer is mostly clear but can be improved by tightening sentences and correcting grammar (subject-verb agreement). Use a linking phrase to explain why you take photos and give a specific example or frequency.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily routine and send them to friends on Snapchat because they appreciate the pictures and it makes me feel happy.

Sugerencia: Use correct vocabulary and avoid literal translations (e.g., “it is a trend”). Give one clear sentence with examples and correct repetition errors. Use linking words like “for example” or “such as.”

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a common trend to send flowers for special occasions, such as weddings, anniversaries and birthday parties.

× My favorite type of flower is red because it's so low.

✓ My favorite color of flower is red because it is so lovely.

The adjective 'red' describes color, not 'type'; 'type' should be 'color' or specify a flower type (e.g., rose). 'low' is incorrect and likely intended to be 'lovely' or 'beautiful'. Replace 'it's' with 'it is' and use 'lovely' to convey positive quality. Suggestion: Say 'My favorite color of flower is red' or 'My favorite flower is the red rose.'

× She always kept 1 flower in in her room, specially red roses because it's because there's because the red wrist smells very wonderful.

✓ She always keeps one flower in her room, especially red roses, because the red roses smell wonderful.

Verb tense/agreements: 'kept' should be present 'keeps' to match habitual action. Use 'one' instead of numeral '1' in formal speech. Remove duplicated 'in'. 'specially' should be 'especially'. Remove redundant fillers 'because it's because there's because'. 'red wrist' is incorrect; likely 'red roses'. Use plural agreement: 'roses smell' not 'smells'. Suggestion: Simplify the sentence to 'She always keeps one red rose in her room because red roses smell wonderful.'

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

This sentence is correct; it correctly uses 'are there' for existence questions in the present. No correction needed.

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live as uh, na innocent times, Mary, uh, my neighborhoods people are naturally uh, grown between different types of beautiful flowers, so I can easily say I can easily see a lot of flowers.

✓ Yes, there are many flowers where I live. In my neighborhood people naturally grow many different kinds of beautiful flowers, so I can easily see a lot of them.

The original contains fillers ('uh', 'na', 'Mary'), unclear phrases ('innocent times'), and incorrect forms ('my neighborhoods people', 'are naturally grown between'). 'Many' is more natural than 'a lot of' in formal reply; 'grow' should be active 'people grow'. 'Different types of' can be 'different kinds of'. Avoid repetition 'I can easily say I can easily see'. Suggestion: Practice removing fillers and use clear subject-verb order: 'In my neighborhood, people grow many kinds of flowers.'

× Yes, in my daily routine I usually take photos of different types of flowers and I usually send to my friends with the help of Snapchat.

✓ Yes, in my daily routine I usually take photos of different types of flowers and I usually send them to my friends using Snapchat.

Missing object: 'send' requires an object, so add 'them' (the photos). 'with the help of Snapchat' is awkward; use 'using Snapchat'. Repetition of 'usually' is acceptable but can be reduced. Suggestion: 'I usually take photos of flowers and send them to my friends using Snapchat.'

× It make me more happy and more content.

✓ It makes me happier and more content.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' requires 'makes' (third person singular). Use comparative adjective 'happier' rather than 'more happy'. Keep 'more content' as natural collocation. Suggestion: 'It makes me happier and more content.'

× Yes, in current world it is a train.

✓ Yes, in the current world it is a trend.

Missing definite article: 'in the current world' instead of 'in current world'. 'train' is a misspelling of 'trend'. Preposition 'in' is fine but article needed. Suggestion: 'Yes, in the current world it is a trend.'

× It is a trend to send flowers to others on special occasions such as wedding anniversaries, weddings and birthday birthday parties.

✓ It is a trend to send flowers to others on special occasions such as wedding anniversaries, weddings, and birthday parties.

Redundant repetition 'birthday birthday' should be single 'birthday parties'. Add commas in list. Article use is fine here; main issues were repetition and punctuation. Suggestion: '...on special occasions such as wedding anniversaries, weddings, and birthday parties.'