Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and relevant: start with a direct topic sentence saying whether you love flowers, avoid incorrect words (e.g., 'farmers' instead of 'flowers') and reduce hesitation. Give one brief specific reason and use a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. They brighten a room and improve the atmosphere, for example a few potted roses on my windowsill make my living room feel fresher.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct grammar: say who and give concise, specific details. Use linking words (because, so) and plural/singular agreement. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She always keeps fresh bouquets around the house because she says they make the rooms feel more welcoming, and I enjoy visiting her for that reason.

Sugerencia: Be concise and precise: state clearly whether there are many flowers and give a specific supporting detail (e.g., parks, shops). Avoid fillers and incorrect words (e.g., 'Bucky's'). Use one linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers in my hometown. For example, several parks are full of seasonal blooms and there are a few flower shops nearby where my mother and I buy bouquets.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and keep tenses consistent: say whether you take photos now and add a brief reason. Use linking words (but, so) and correct verb forms. Be specific about frequency or situations.

Ejemplo: I used to take many photos of flowers when I was younger because I enjoyed capturing their colors and details, but now I rarely do so because I live in the city and don't see flowers as often.

Sugerencia: Be natural and grammatically correct: use plural forms and give specific occasions. Combine short sentences with linking words and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, flowers are a common gift in my country. People often give them for graduations, weddings, birthdays and other special occasions because they are a polite and attractive way to celebrate.

× I love farmers because they are beautiful and also if you put some gates in your rooms, it's really help to improve your, uh, atmospheres of the rooms.

✓ I love flowers because they are beautiful, and if you put some plants in your rooms, it really helps to improve the atmosphere of the rooms.

The student used 'farmers' instead of 'flowers' (word choice/adjective meaning error) and 'gates' instead of 'plants' which makes the sentence nonsensical. 'It's really help' is grammatically incorrect: with singular subject 'it' or the noun phrase 'this' the verb should be 'helps'. 'Atmospheres' should be singular 'atmosphere' when referring to the general feel of a room. Suggestion: use accurate vocabulary (flowers, plants) and match subject and verb: 'it really helps'.

× A person that I know who's in love with Flower is my mother.

✓ A person I know who is in love with flowers is my mother.

'That' is less appropriate for people here than 'who'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' when speaking generally. Also use 'I know who is' rather than 'that I know who's' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'who' for people and pluralize general nouns referring to types (flowers).

× She love having Flower around her homes, which I really appreciate that and I always feel fresh when we go to her house.

✓ She loves having flowers around her home, which I really appreciate, and I always feel refreshed when we go to her house.

Third person singular requires verb 'loves' not 'love'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' and 'homes' should be singular 'home' when referring to one person's house. Remove redundant 'that' after 'appreciate'. 'Feel fresh' is non-idiomatic; 'feel refreshed' is more natural. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun number, remove redundant words, and choose appropriate adjective ('refreshed').

× I will say yes in my hometowns there are a lot of flowers.

✓ I would say yes; in my hometown there are a lot of flowers.

Use singular 'hometown' when referring to the student's own town, not 'hometowns'. Also 'I will say' is less natural here; 'I would say' is preferable for opinion. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural and more natural conditional phrasing for opinions.

× I mean not umm about the neighborhoods but also we have a few flower shops around our house which I and my mom loves going down large to buy a Bucky's.

✓ I mean not just in the neighborhoods, but we also have a few flower shops near our house which my mom and I love going to to buy bouquets.

Multiple issues: 'not umm about the neighborhoods' is unclear; replace with 'not just in the neighborhoods'. Word order 'I and my mom' should be 'my mom and I'. Verb agreement: 'love' (plural subject) not 'loves'. 'Going down large' is meaningless; use 'going to' and 'Bucky's' seems to be a mispronunciation of 'bouquets'. Suggestion: use clear connectors, correct pronoun order, plural verb for compound subjects, and correct vocabulary ('bouquets').

× I used to take a lot of flowers when I was younger because I like to captures details of blooms, different colors of flowers.

✓ I used to take a lot of photos of flowers when I was younger because I liked to capture details of blooms and the different colors of flowers.

Mixing tenses: 'I used to' (past habit) should be matched by past 'liked' not present 'like'. 'Take a lot of flowers' should be 'take a lot of photos of flowers'. 'Like to captures' has incorrect verb form; after 'liked to' use base verb 'capture' not 'captures'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use correct verb forms and object nouns ('photos of flowers').

× But as I love if I live in the city right now, it's quite difficult for me to have a chance to do.

✓ But since I live in the city now, it's quite difficult for me to have a chance to do that.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'But as I love if I live' is incorrect; use 'since I live' or 'because I live'. 'Right now' better as 'now'. Add 'that' at end to refer to the previous action (take photos). Suggestion: use clear subordinators ('since', 'because') and maintain logical meaning.

× Yes, of course flower is a common gift. In my country. We send flower to people as a gift when their graduations or when a special occasions like weddings or birthday party.

✓ Yes, of course flowers are a common gift in my country. We send flowers to people as gifts for their graduations or for special occasions like weddings or birthday parties.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' and use plural verb 'are'. Sentence fragments: combine the first two sentences. 'We send flower' should be 'we send flowers'. 'As a gift' better plural 'as gifts' or 'as a gift' depending on context; here use 'as gifts'. 'Their graduations' is acceptable but keep consistent pluralization: 'weddings or birthday parties'. Also remove incorrect articles 'a special occasions' -> 'special occasions'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally and ensure subject-verb agreement, fix articles and plural forms of occasions.