Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct minor grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers like 'umm' and correct noun/verb forms (e.g., 'flowers' and 'decorate our homes with flowers').

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. They look beautiful and many have a pleasant scent, so I often use bouquets to decorate my home and create a welcoming atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Clarify the main idea with a correct topic sentence and give specific details. Fix vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'people who love flowers', 'I have seen her often decorate', 'little bouquets'). Use a linking word like 'because' to connect reason and example.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers because she often decorates our house with small bouquets, which makes the home feel warm and cheerful.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with concrete details. Correct word choice and grammar (e.g., 'varieties of flowers', 'northern Thailand', 'suitable for growing flowers'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' appropriately and avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many varieties of flowers where I live because northern Thailand has a mild climate that is suitable for growing different kinds of plants.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer (Yes/No) and follow with concise reasons and a conditional statement. Improve grammar (e.g., 'I don't, because I live in the city and rarely see flowers') and use linking words like 'however' or 'but'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I live in the city and rarely see them, but I would photograph flowers when I travel to the countryside.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and give specific examples with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid repetition and fillers. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also' to organize ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers on many occasions. For example, sunflowers or bouquets are common gifts for recent graduates, and flowers are also a popular present for birthdays.

× I love the fact that, umm, sometimes we can decorate our homes with flower and make the atmosphere feel much better.

✓ I love the fact that sometimes we can decorate our homes with flowers and make the atmosphere feel much better.

Use plural 'flowers' (or 'a flower' if singular) when referring generally; here plural fits because 'decorate our homes with flowers' is natural. Also remove filler 'umm' for clarity.

× I suppose the persons that I know loving flavors is my mother because I seen her offense decorates our home with little brigade here and there which make our atmosphere in our house.

✓ I suppose the person I know who loves flowers is my mother because I have seen her often decorate our home with small bouquets here and there, which makes the atmosphere in our house nicer.

Multiple problems: 'persons' should be singular 'person' since referring to one; 'that I know loving flavors' is ungrammatical — use 'I know who loves flowers'; 'seen' needs present perfect 'have seen' for experience; 'offense' is wrong word, should be 'often'; 'decorates' should be base verb after 'have seen her' so 'decorate' (or use 'often decorates'); 'brigade' wrong word — 'bouquets'; 'which make' must agree with singular 'which makes'. Corrections follow grammar problem types: pronouns, verb tense, word choice, and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, there are a lot of variety and kinds of lovers in my hometowns.

✓ Yes, there is a wide variety of flowers in my hometown.

'A lot of variety and kinds of lovers' is incorrect: use 'a variety of flowers' or 'a lot of different kinds of flowers'. Also 'lovers' is wrong word; 'hometowns' should be singular if you refer to one hometown. Use singular 'is' with 'a variety' (singular noun phrase).

× I live in the north of Thailand, so the weather there is quite good for planting growing flowers.

✓ I live in the north of Thailand, so the weather there is quite good for planting and growing flowers.

Missing conjunction 'and' between verbs 'planting' and 'growing'. Also both should be gerunds; keep 'for planting and growing flowers' to be parallel.

× I'm not quite because I'm living in the city right now so I hardly seen much flowers on my daily life at the moment, but I would do so if I have a chance to travel outside the city where the beautiful flowers.

✓ Not really, because I'm living in the city right now so I hardly see many flowers in my daily life at the moment, but I would do so if I had a chance to travel outside the city where there are beautiful flowers.

'I'm not quite' is unnatural; use 'Not really'. 'Hardly seen' should be present simple 'hardly see' for current habitual situation or present perfect 'have seen' for experience. 'Much flowers' incorrect — use 'many flowers'. 'On my daily life' should be 'in my daily life'. 'If I have a chance' should be conditional past 'if I had a chance' to match 'would do so'. Add 'there are' before 'beautiful flowers' for correctness (There be issue).

× In many occasions they do send flower to other people's, for instance, the sunflower to uh, people who just freshly graduates for instance.

✓ On many occasions they do send flowers to other people; for instance, sunflowers to people who have just recently graduated.

Use 'on many occasions' not 'in many occasions'. 'Send flower' should be plural 'send flowers'. 'Other people's' is wrong possessive — use 'other people'. 'People who just freshly graduates' is ungrammatical; use present perfect 'have just recently graduated' or 'have just graduated'.

× And also it's a birthday. We also normally send flowers as a gift.

✓ Also, on birthdays we normally send flowers as a gift.

'It's a birthday' is awkward; use 'on birthdays' to express the general occasion. Article use corrected and sentence reorganized for natural phrasing.