Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid awkward phrases (e.g. "smelling the taste", "stuffness") and reduce repetition. Aim for 2–3 sentences, using precise vocabulary like "fragrance" and "relaxation."

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance and colours make my home feel more peaceful. For example, when I walk past the rose bushes near my house, I immediately feel more relaxed and less stressed.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a specific example. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" and correct collocations (e.g. "close to nature", "live near flowers"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid vague phrasing like "a lot of individual."

Ejemplo: Yes, several people I know love flowers because they enjoy being close to nature. For example, my neighbour grows a small garden of lilies and says the scent helps her concentrate when she works from home.

Sugerencia: Be specific and avoid fillers. Start with a short direct answer, then give concrete details about locations and types of flowers. Use correct phrases like "filled with flowers" or "rose garden." Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Our local parks and private gardens are filled with roses, marigolds and jasmine, so you can often smell floral scents when walking around the neighbourhood.

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct phrases. Use a direct topic sentence then a brief example of frequency and reason. Avoid unclear words like "natural substances" or "as a eater." Use linking words like "however" or "sometimes."

Ejemplo: I sometimes take photos of flowers, but not every day. For example, when I visit the park on weekends I often photograph colourful tulips to remember the visit and share the pictures with friends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer and a specific example of occasions when flowers are sent. Use correct vocabulary ("wedding ceremony", "occasion") and remove hesitations. Keep it to 2 sentences with a linking word like "for example."

Ejemplo: Yes, people here often send flowers on special occasions. For example, it is common to send bouquets for birthdays, weddings and funerals to express congratulations or sympathy.

× Definitely yes, I am fond of smelling the taste of flowers as flowers can help the individual to bring a sense of beauty in their life and also you can even stand beside the flower.

✓ Definitely yes, I am fond of smelling flowers because they can bring a sense of beauty to a person's life, and you can stand beside a flower.

The original uses inconsistent pronouns ('the individual' and 'you') and awkward phrasing ('smelling the taste of flowers'). Use 'smelling flowers' and a consistent general pronoun ('a person' or 'you') to improve clarity and naturalness. Also use 'bring a sense of beauty to' rather than 'in'. Grammar problem type id: 12

× Then the fragrance of flowers will reduce the stuffness as well as the stress of human mind.

✓ The fragrance of flowers can reduce stuffiness and relieve stress in the human mind.

'Stuffness' is not a standard noun; use 'stuffiness'. 'Reduce' and 'relieve' pair better with 'stuffiness' and 'stress'. Word order and collocation were corrected for natural English. Grammar problem type id: 13

× Definitely yes I have known a lot of individual who are very related or close related to the flowers as they love to live besides the flower.

✓ Definitely yes, I know many individuals who are closely connected to flowers because they enjoy being near them.

'I have known' is acceptable but 'I know' is more natural here. 'A lot of individual' should be 'many individuals' (plural). 'Closely connected' replaces 'very related or close related'. 'Live besides the flower' is incorrect; use 'being near them'. Pronouns and plurality fixed. Grammar problem type id: 12

× As the flowers fragrance help them to stay connected with the nature and as well as also they remain more productive if this melts the fragrance of flowers.

✓ The fragrance of flowers helps them feel connected to nature, and it also makes them more productive when they smell it.

Subject-verb agreement ('fragrance help' -> 'fragrance helps') and awkward phrasing ('melt the fragrance') were corrected. Use 'connected to nature' and 'when they smell it' for clarity. Grammar problem type id: 13

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

This question is grammatically correct as written; no change needed. Grammar problem type id: 3

× Definitely, yes. Uh, there are a lot of flowers or uh, the parks or the gardens are uh, fulfilled with the flowers as it is a kind of nature that helps the individual to be more related with the natural resources.

✓ Definitely yes. There are many flowers; the parks and gardens are full of them because nature helps people feel connected to natural resources.

'Fulfilled with the flowers' is incorrect; use 'full of them'. 'Individual' should be 'people'. Simplified and corrected prepositions ('related with' -> 'connected to'). Grammar problem type id: 12

× So the place where I live is fulfilled with the all the flower species such as the Rose garden.

✓ So the place where I live is full of many flower species, such as rose gardens.

Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'all the flower species' and use 'rose gardens' in lowercase unless proper name. 'Fulfilled with' -> 'full of' is natural. Grammar problem type id: 22

× Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

✓ Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

The question is acceptable; no grammatical correction needed. Using 'take photos' fits the present simple for habitual actions. Grammar problem type id: 10

× Definitely, yes, but uh, it is not quite uh, often in my daily routine, but uh, sometimes whenever I get a later time to uh, spend with the natural substances, then I prefer to take some pictures of flowers as a eater, help me to stay connected with the nature as well as also it help me to create a memory with the natural substances such as flowers.

✓ Definitely yes, but I do not take photos often in my daily routine. Sometimes when I have free time to spend in nature, I prefer to take pictures of flowers because they help me feel connected to nature and create memories.

Fixed adverb placement ('not often' instead of 'not quite...often'), removed filler words, corrected 'later time' -> 'free time', 'natural substances' -> 'nature', and grammar ('help' -> 'helps' when referring to 'they' or rephrased). 'a eater' was nonsensical and removed. Grammar problem type id: 20

× Uh, well, to be honest, I am not familiar with the sharing things such as the flowers to other individual by any person.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am not familiar with people giving flowers to others as a common practice.

'Sharing things such as the flowers to other individual by any person' is ungrammatical. Rephrased to natural expression 'people giving flowers to others'. Pluralization and pronouns fixed. Grammar problem type id: 12

× But uh, I have came to know about a lot of information that uh, people often like to share the flower with each other on some occasions such as birthday party or the wedding serenison.

✓ But I have learned that people often give flowers to each other on occasions such as birthday parties or weddings.

'Have came' is incorrect; use 'have come to know' or better 'have learned'. 'Share the flower' -> 'give flowers'. Correct plural forms 'birthday parties' and 'weddings'. 'Serenison' seems to be a mispronunciation of 'ceremony' or 'celebration'; replaced with 'weddings'. Grammar problem type id: 5}]} подклейка