Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it's slightly repetitive and a little long. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "a very good scent" → "a pleasant scent", and "if I'm sad and upset about a thing" → "when I'm feeling sad").

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. They have a pleasant scent and seeing them usually lifts my mood when I feel sad. For example, I often buy a small bouquet to brighten my room after a difficult day.

Sugerencia: The content is good, but the answer contains unclear phrasing, hesitations and grammatical errors. Give a direct topic sentence, then specify who and add one concise reason or example. Avoid filler words and fix grammar (e.g., "a lie some of the person" is incorrect).

Ejemplo: Yes, several people in my family love flowers, especially my mother and my aunt. In fact, I probably love them the most because my bedroom is full of potted plants and bouquets, so it feels like a small garden.

Sugerencia: You repeat the same idea several times. Give a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details about where the flowers are (e.g., gardens, streets, parks) and correct grammar ("they makes" → "they make", "on my view" → "in my opinion"). Use a linking word to connect your reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in the parks and along the main streets. Because of that, I enjoy walking outside, as the blooms smell nice and always improve my mood.

Sugerencia: Good short answer but grammatically incorrect and a bit vague. Use a clear topic sentence and correct structure (e.g., "Half of my photos are of flowers"). Add a brief detail about why you photograph them or how you use the photos.

Ejemplo: Yes, about half of my photos are of flowers. I often photograph them because I like their colours and I share the best shots on social media.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar and clarity issues. Use a direct statement, then give a specific cultural detail and correct grammar (e.g., "roses equal romance", "people give flowers to women"). Avoid fillers like "uh" and vague phrases like "you know."

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions. For example, roses are seen as a symbol of romance, so many people give them to women on Valentine's Day.

× They are my personal favorite thing and why I love flowers is because flowers have a very good scent and they make my feelings much better if I'm sad and upset about a thing.

✓ They are my personal favorite thing, and the reason I love flowers is that they have a very pleasant scent and they make me feel much better when I'm sad or upset.

The sentence mixes awkward structures and verb forms. 'Why I love flowers is because' is redundant; use 'the reason... is that'. 'A very good scent' is better as 'a very pleasant scent'. 'They make my feelings much better' is unnatural; use 'they make me feel much better'. Also replace 'if I'm sad and upset about a thing' with 'when I'm sad or upset' for natural time reference and parallel structure.

× Yes, I indeed know a lie some of the person who loves flowers includes my mom, my aunt, my whole family actually, and the one who loves flowers the most is me because my bedroom is just like a huge park if.

✓ Yes, I do know a lot of people who love flowers, including my mom, my aunt and actually my whole family. The person who loves flowers the most is me because my bedroom is just like a huge park.

Multiple pronoun and word-choice errors: 'I indeed know a lie' is incorrect; use 'I do know a lot of people'. 'Some of the person' should be 'people'. Use 'including' to list examples. 'The one who loves flowers the most is me' is acceptable but more natural as 'The person who loves flowers the most is me'. Remove trailing 'if' which is extraneous.

× Indeed, there's a lot of flowers.

✓ Indeed, there are a lot of flowers.

Subject-verb agreement with there is/are: 'flowers' is plural, so use 'there are' instead of 'there's' which contracts 'there is'.

× The reason why I choose to live there is because there's a lot of flowers.

✓ The reason I chose to live there is that there are a lot of flowers.

Tense mismatch: choosing a place to live is a past decision, so use past tense 'chose'. Also avoid redundancy 'the reason why... is because'—use 'the reason... is that'. Use 'there are' for plural 'flowers'.

× They smell very nice, they makes my feelings better, and they're just nice in every angle on my view.

✓ They smell very nice, they make me feel better, and they're pleasant from every angle in my view.

'They makes' is incorrect; plural subject requires 'make'. 'Makes my feelings better' is awkward—use 'make me feel better'. 'Nice in every angle on my view' is unidiomatic; use 'pleasant from every angle in my view' for correct preposition and adjective use.

× I actually half of my photos is flowers and the other half is just funny photos.

✓ Actually, half of my photos are of flowers and the other half are just funny photos.

Verb agreement and noun phrase: 'half of my photos' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Also use 'photos are of flowers' or 'are of flowers' to indicate subject matter.

× Yes, in my country roses equals to romantic.

✓ Yes, in my country roses are associated with romance.

'Equals to romantic' is incorrect phrase. Use 'are associated with' or 'symbolize' and use the noun 'romance' rather than the adjective 'romantic'. Also 'roses' plural requires 'are'.

× So, uh, often on Valentine's Day people, you can see lots of mail giving flowers to the females because you know, they're romantic.

✓ So often on Valentine's Day you can see many people giving flowers to women because, as you know, it is a romantic tradition.

Awkward word order and incorrect nouns: 'lots of mail giving flowers to the females' is incorrect; 'mail' is wrong and 'the females' is unnatural—use 'people giving flowers to women'. Clarify 'it is a romantic tradition' rather than 'they're romantic', and remove filler 'uh'.