Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, and organise into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unfinished thoughts. Mention specific examples (types of flowers or medicinal uses) to add content and use correct verb forms (e.g., "I'm a big fan", "I developed").

Ejemplo: Yes — I'm a big fan of flowers. I have a large collection of colorful blooms, such as marigolds and lavender, and I often use some of them for medicinal teas and skincare. I developed this interest while studying food and nutrition, because I was fascinated by the health benefits flowers can provide.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two clear supporting points linked logically. Reduce filler words and hesitations (uh). Provide specific examples of what he teaches and where. Use correct grammar and sentence variety.

Ejemplo: Yes — my husband loves flowers and works as a florist. He teaches both children and adults in our neighbourhood about different species, such as roses and chrysanthemums, and shows them practical methods for growing plants at home or on terrace gardens.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with specific supporting details and examples. Correct grammar ("I've been living", "many different kinds", "under artificial conditions"), avoid sentence fragments and finish thoughts. Mention particular flowers or methods used for off-season growing.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. I've lived in a semi-rural area for ten years and we cultivate a wide variety, including marigolds, jasmine and hibiscus. Because some flowers don't bloom year-round, we also use greenhouse and potted techniques to grow them out of season.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and briefly, then add one concrete reason. Avoid long, vague explanations and religious or incomplete statements unless relevant. Use natural phrasing ("I don't usually take photos", "I prefer to enjoy them in the moment"). Finish sentences and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Not usually — I don't often photograph my flowers because I prefer to enjoy them in the moment rather than post them on social media. For example, when I water my jasmine in the morning I focus on appreciating the scent instead of taking pictures.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion with a brief explanation and one example. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Use linking words (e.g., "previously", "now") and precise vocabulary ("send flowers as gifts", "to express sympathy or celebrate events").

Ejemplo: Yes, sending flowers has become more popular recently. Previously it wasn't common, but now people often send bouquets for birthdays, anniversaries or as sympathy gestures because flowers create an immediate emotional connection.

× I'm incredibly fan of flowers and I have huge collection of many different flowers in vibrant colors and I also use them for medicated purpose.

✓ I'm an incredible fan of flowers, and I have a huge collection of many different flowers in vibrant colors. I also use them for medicinal purposes.

Use of adjective/adverb: 'incredibly fan' is incorrect; 'fan' needs an article and 'incredible' should be the adjective 'incredible' or better 'an avid fan'. Also 'huge collection' requires 'a'. 'Medicated purpose' is wrong form and collocation; use 'medicinal purposes'. Improve by adding articles and using correct adjective forms. Suggestion: say 'I'm an avid fan of flowers' or 'I'm an incredible fan of flowers'.

× I develop this interest when I started working on food and nutrition and amazed by the role of flowers in our daily life and moreover these.

✓ I developed this interest when I started working on food and nutrition and was amazed by the role of flowers in our daily life.

Tense consistency: 'develop' should be past 'developed' because 'started' is past. 'amazed' needs an auxiliary 'was' to form passive 'was amazed'. The trailing 'and moreover these' is unclear and removed. Suggestion: keep past tense and complete the clause: '...and was amazed by the role of flowers in our daily life.'

× My husband, he is also a florist, moreover he is teaching lots of kids and adults in my nearby and explain them about the variety of flowers.

✓ My husband is also a florist; moreover, he teaches many children and adults nearby and explains to them the variety of flowers.

Pronoun redundancy and verb agreement: 'My husband, he' duplicates subject — use one. 'Is teaching' can be simple present 'teaches' for habitual action. 'Lots of kids and adults in my nearby' is incorrect preposition and noun choice; use 'many children and adults nearby'. 'Explain them' needs 'explain to them' and verb 'explains' to agree with singular subject. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and correct prepositions.

× Moreover, a method to uh grow the flowers in the home garden or as well as on the terrace garden.

✓ He also teaches methods to grow flowers in a home garden and on a terrace garden.

Sentence fragment and gerund usage: original lacks a main verb and is a fragment. Use 'teaches methods to grow' to provide verb + infinitive/gerund structure. 'As well as' was redundant; simplify to 'and'. Suggestion: provide a full clause: 'He teaches methods to grow flowers in a home garden and on a terrace.'

× Being a florist, he has immense knowledge in this.

✓ Being a florist, he has immense knowledge about this.

Preposition and article: 'knowledge in this' is not idiomatic; use 'knowledge about this' or 'knowledge of this'. No definite article required. Suggestion: use 'about' or 'of' to express subject matter.

× I am living in semi rural area for a decade and since that time we are growing many different kind of flowers.

✓ I have been living in a semi-rural area for a decade, and since then we have been growing many different kinds of flowers.

Tense and article: use present perfect continuous 'have been living' for an action that started in the past and continues. 'Semi rural' should be hyphenated 'semi-rural' and needs the article 'a'. 'Since that time' better as 'since then'. 'We are growing' should be 'we have been growing' for ongoing activity. 'Many different kind' should be 'many different kinds'.

× Now we have a huge biodiversity.

✓ Now we have great biodiversity.

Word choice/adjective: 'a huge biodiversity' is awkward; 'biodiversity' is an uncountable noun so omit 'a' and use adjectives like 'great' or 'high'. Suggestion: 'Now we have great biodiversity' or 'a huge variety of species'.

× We know it is hard to grow flower in every season, so we also started growing flowers on under artificial conditions to get.

✓ We know it is hard to grow flowers in every season, so we also started growing them under artificial conditions to do so.

Quantifier and noun number: 'grow flower' should be plural 'grow flowers'. 'On under' is incorrect preposition sequence; use 'under'. Sentence ending 'to get' is incomplete — clarify purpose 'to do so' or 'to ensure year-round blooms'. Suggestion: '...under artificial conditions to ensure blooms throughout the year.' },{