Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, correct noun names, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. My favorite is hydrangea because I admired them when I visited Japan; even in late summer, their faded colors looked beautiful. I especially liked how clusters of small flowers changed color over time.

Sugerencia: Make the subject and verbs agree, use linking words and be more specific about who and why. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences with clear reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, many of my friends like flowers. For example, one friend especially enjoys receiving flowers from her boyfriend because it makes her feel appreciated and brightens her day.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., ‘parks’, ‘gardens’), and explain briefly what you are doing about it using linking words. Keep it natural and concise.

Ejemplo: Not really. Because I live in the city center there are few parks or gardens nearby. However, my partner and I are planning to grow a small container garden on our balcony, so we can enjoy flowers at home.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence, correct tense and phrasing, and give one specific example or reason. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I find them beautiful. For instance, I photograph street blossoms with my phone so I can remember places I visited and practise my composition skills.

Sugerencia: Be more precise and grammatical: explain typical occasions and use linking words to organize ideas. Avoid filler words and generalizations; give one concrete example.

Ejemplo: Yes, people send flowers on special occasions. For example, my grandparents often send me flowers for my birthday, and couples frequently exchange bouquets on anniversaries or Valentine’s Day.

× Yes, I do love our my favorite one is Haiden Ruya.

✓ Yes, I do love flowers. My favorite one is Haiden Ruya.

The original sentence mixes pronouns and possessive determiners incorrectly ('our my') and combines two clauses without proper structure. Split into two sentences and use correct pronoun 'flowers' and possessive structure 'My favorite one'. Use simple sentence structure to improve clarity.

× I remember that when I'm going to Japan and I think the month is dry and near death is really beautiful.

✓ I remember that when I went to Japan, I thought the month was dry and the trees looked like they were nearly dead but still very beautiful.

Tense inconsistency: 'I'm going' (present continuous) conflicts with 'I remember' (past). Change to past tense 'went' and 'thought'. Also correct awkward phrase 'near death' to 'nearly dead' and clarify noun 'trees'. Maintain past perspective for a remembered event.

× Yes, most of my friend love flower and especially one that have boyfriend.

✓ Yes, most of my friends love flowers, especially those who have boyfriends.

Plural forms needed: 'friend' should be 'friends', 'flower' should be 'flowers'. Also 'one that have boyfriend' is incorrect: use plural 'those' and 'have boyfriends' to agree in number.

× She really love when her boyfriend give her a flower.

✓ She really loves it when her boyfriend gives her a flower.

Subject-verb agreement for third person singular: 'She' requires 'loves' not 'love'; 'boyfriend' requires 'gives' not 'give'. Also add 'it' for natural phrasing and 'a' before 'flower'.

× Sadly no, since I live in the city center, there are not many natural park to have our goals.

✓ Sadly no. Since I live in the city center, there are not many natural parks for us.

'There are' must agree with plural 'parks' (not 'park'). 'To have our goals' is unclear and unidiomatic; likely meant 'for us' or 'to visit', so replace with 'for us'. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× But uh me and my Marco, we are planning some in my house.

✓ But Marco and I are planning some in my house.

Pronoun order and subject form: use 'Marco and I' (not 'me and my Marco'). Remove unnecessary comma and extra 'we' because it's redundant. 'Some' refers to 'flowers' from context; keep sentence concise.

× Yes, I usually found that every type of flowers I have it's on beautiful so I usually take the photo to like keep the memory longer.

✓ Yes, I usually find that every type of flower I have is beautiful, so I usually take photos to keep the memory longer.

Use present simple 'find' for habitual action instead of past 'found'. 'Every type of flowers' should be 'every type of flower' (singular with 'every') and 'it's on beautiful' is incorrect; use 'is beautiful'. 'Take the photo' should be plural 'take photos' for general habit. Remove filler 'like' and correct infinitive phrase to 'to keep the memory longer' or better 'to preserve the memory'.

× Yes, it is depend on the organizations like my grandparents often send me a flower on my birthday, which is uh, pretty cute.

✓ Yes, it depends on the occasion. For example, my grandparents often send me a flower on my birthday, which is pretty cute.

Verb 'depend' needs third person singular form 'depends'. 'Organizations' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'occasion' or 'situation'. Split into two sentences and use 'for example' to illustrate. Maintain present simple for general facts.

× And since I mentioned before that uh, people who in the relationship like couple are send it to.

✓ And as I mentioned before, people who are in a relationship, like couples, send flowers to each other.

Several issues: word order and missing verbs ('people who in the relationship' should be 'people who are in a relationship'). 'Like couple' should be 'like couples'. 'Are send it to' is ungrammatical; use active 'send flowers to each other'. Use present simple for general statement and add 'each other' for reciprocity.