Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar, make the answer more natural and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. They have bright colors and often look fresh, which lifts my mood, and I appreciate their symbolic meanings of love and friendship.

Sugerencia: Fix grammar and vocabulary errors and be specific. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid confusing words (e.g. 'plants' not 'pants'). Keep to 2–3 sentences: state who, then give a specific example of what they do and why it matters.

Ejemplo: Yes, a colleague of mine loves flowers. She often buys many plants and grows them on her balcony, so her plants always look healthy and colourful because she cares for them carefully.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence structure; give a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail using linking words. Correct singular/plural and use prepositions properly.

Ejemplo: Not really; I live in an industrial park, so there aren’t many flowers around. For example, there is only one large tree near my building and most of the area is concrete and factories rather than gardens.

Sugerencia: Correct word choice and grammar, and be more specific. Use linking words to explain reasons and give clear details (e.g., 'dew drops' not 'audio drops', 'bright colors' not 'cheap'). Keep answers concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos when I see flowers while I'm out. I do this because their bright colours make me happy, and I especially enjoy close-ups of petals and dew drops to remember the details.

Sugerencia: Organise the answer with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'surveyed' is wrong). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: In my area, people don’t often send flowers. They are usually busy with work and prefer to share a meal or go out together, and flowers can be quite expensive here.

× Yes, I love flowers, especially lowers.

✓ Yes, I love flowers, especially roses.

The student wrote 'lowers' which is a misspelling and incorrect word form. 'Roses' is a likely intended flower name. Use correct noun spelling; ensure specific flower names are capitalized only if proper nouns (not needed here). Suggestion: proofread for spelling and choose the correct noun.

× They come in a ring of bright color and often looks very fresh, and I appreciate their symbolic meanings of love and friendship.

✓ They come in a range of bright colors and often look very fresh, and I appreciate their symbolic meanings of love and friendship.

Errors: 'ring' should be 'range' (word choice) and 'color' should be plural to match 'range'; 'looks' must agree with plural subject 'They' so 'look' is correct. Also 'colors' plural fits grammatical agreement. Suggestion: check subject-verb agreement and word choice for collocations like 'a range of colors'.

× Yes I do. One of my colleagues love flowers, especially those.

✓ Yes, I do. One of my colleagues loves flowers, especially those.

Subject 'One' is singular; the verb must be third person singular 'loves'. Also adding a comma after 'Yes' improves fluency. Suggestion: identify the true subject of the clause ('One') and match verb form accordingly.

× She often buys loads and grows them on her balcony.

✓ She often buys many and grows them on her balcony.

'Loads' is informal and incomplete here; better is 'a lot of flowers' or 'many flowers'. The sentence also has ambiguous object: 'many' should be followed by a noun or replaced with 'a lot of them'. Suggestion: use 'a lot of flowers' or 'many flowers' for clarity: 'She often buys a lot of flowers and grows them on her balcony.'

× And her pants look really beautiful because she takes great care of them.

✓ And her plants look really beautiful because she takes great care of them.

'Pants' is a wrong word choice (clothing) instead of 'plants'. This is a lexical error, not grammatical. Suggestion: choose the intended noun 'plants' to make sense in context.

× I live in an industrial park so there are not many flower around.

✓ I live in an industrial park, so there are not many flowers around.

'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'many'. Also missing comma after the introductory clause improves readability. Suggestion: match count words like 'many' with plural nouns.

× There is only one large tree nearby building and most concrete and factory building instead of gardeners.

✓ There is only one large tree near the buildings, and mostly concrete and factory buildings take the place of gardens.

Original sentence has missing prepositions and wrong noun forms. 'Nearby building' should be 'near the buildings' or 'nearby building' needs an article; 'most concrete and factory building' should be plural 'buildings' and the idea 'instead of gardeners' is unclear; corrected to 'take the place of gardens'. Suggestion: clarify subject and use plural nouns and appropriate prepositions.

× Yes I do if I see flowers while I'm out.

✓ Yes, I do if I see flowers while I'm out.

Minor punctuation: add comma after 'Yes'. The tense 'do' and 'see' are correct for present habitual actions. Suggestion: include comma for natural speech pause.

× I always take photos because the colors and cheap make me happy and taking pictures feel very fulfilling.

✓ I always take photos because the colors and shapes make me happy, and taking pictures feels very fulfilling.

'cheap' is incorrect word choice and doesn't fit context; likely intended 'shape' or 'contrast'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'taking pictures feels' (singular gerund) requires 'feels'. Suggestion: choose appropriate noun ('shapes', 'contrasts', or 'colors') and ensure gerund verb agreement.

× I especially enjoy photographing some more detail like petals, audio drops to remember the moment.

✓ I especially enjoy photographing more details like petals and raindrops to remember the moment.

Errors: 'some more detail' should be 'more details' (plural), 'audio drops' is incorrect—likely 'raindrops'. Use 'and' instead of comma before the last item for clarity. Suggestion: use plural 'details' and correct noun 'raindrops'.

× In my area people don't often send flowers, more are very busy with work and when they surveyed they prefer to eat together or go out rather than give flowers because flowers also quite expensive here.

✓ In my area people don't often send flowers; most are very busy with work, and when they celebrate they prefer to eat together or go out rather than give flowers because flowers are also quite expensive here.

Multiple errors: 'more' should be 'most' (quantifier), 'surveyed' is wrong word choice—likely 'celebrate', missing verb 'are' before 'quite expensive'. Added punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: choose correct quantifiers, verbs, and include linking verbs ('are').