Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, keep it concise (max 5 sentences), and add specific details about which flowers and how they make you feel. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct vocabulary (e.g., "fragrant" not "sensed").

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they are colorful and often fragrant, which makes me feel calm and refreshed. For example, last month I bought three small potted geraniums for my dorm, and now their leaves and flowers have grown a lot. I enjoy watering them twice a week and watching them bloom because it brightens my room.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and fluency by using a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words. Be specific about the person and her routine (which varieties, how she cares for them). Avoid repetition and keep to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my colleague loves flowers, especially roses. She often buys different varieties, such as tea roses and climbing roses, and grows them in pots by her window. She waters them every evening and prunes dead stems regularly to keep them healthy.

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct grammar, use linking words to structure your answer, and provide specific contrast (e.g., greenery vs. flowers). Replace unclear phrases like "plan to flowers" and "greenery wipes" with precise descriptions.

Ejemplo: Not really. I live in a dormitory in an industrial area, so there are more trees and green spaces than colorful flower beds. People here usually plant shade trees rather than decorative flowers, so bright floral displays are quite rare.

Sugerencia: Make the response natural and correct awkward phrases (e.g., "Good Wife" is unclear). Be specific about when and why you take photos, and use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it concise and relevant.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I come across attractive displays on my way to class. If I see brightly colored blossoms, I usually photograph them on my phone because looking at the pictures later helps me relax and cheer up.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and correct tense usage. Use linking words to explain when people send flowers and for which occasions. Keep it under five sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers for special occasions such as birthdays, graduations and anniversaries. For example, at my graduation three years ago, my parents and friends gave me several bouquets of mixed flowers, which made me very happy.

× I do love flowers because there are so colorful and also have a place and sensed that can make me feel calm and refresh.

✓ I do love flowers because they are so colorful and also have a scent and appearance that can make me feel calm and refreshed.

The original uses 'there are' incorrectly; 'there are' indicates existence and is not appropriate for describing characteristics of 'flowers'. Use the pronoun 'they' to refer to flowers. 'Sensed' is incorrect; the noun 'scent' refers to smell. 'Refresh' needed past participle/adjective 'refreshed' to describe the feeling. Also 'appearance' fits better than 'place' for something flowers have. Suggestions: replace 'there are' with 'they are', change 'sensed' to 'scent', and use 'refreshed' to describe the resulting feeling.

× For example, last month I just buy the free flowers into my dorm and right now they're so grown up.

✓ For example, last month I just bought some free flowers for my dorm and right now they've grown a lot.

The sentence refers to a past event ('last month') so the verb should be past tense 'bought' not present 'buy'. 'Free flowers' should be 'some free flowers' or simply 'free flowers'; 'into my dorm' is incorrect preposition use for bringing items to a place — use 'for my dorm' or 'to my dorm'. 'They're so grown up' is unnatural; use 'they've grown a lot' to describe growth. Suggestions: use past tense for past actions, correct preposition to 'for' or 'to', and use natural phrasing for growth.

× Yes I do. She is my colleague and she say that she loves flowers especially the roses because she always buy the variety of roses into her dorm and grow them and also water the plants every day.

✓ Yes I do. She is my colleague and she says that she loves flowers, especially roses, because she always buys different varieties of roses for her dorm, grows them, and waters the plants every day.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun issues appear: 'she say' should be 'she says' and 'she always buy' should be 'she always buys'. 'The roses' can be 'roses' in general. 'Buy the variety of roses into her dorm' has incorrect preposition and article; use 'buys different varieties of roses for her dorm'. Also combine verbs with commas and 'and' for clarity. Suggestions: ensure verbs agree with third person singular by adding -s and use 'for' instead of 'into' when indicating purpose/place.

× I think it's not that much because I lived in the dorm and also in the industrial area and people do not plan to flowers, they just buy the trees and I think all of the environment have a greenery wipes more than colorful wipes.

✓ I think there are not that many because I live in a dorm in an industrial area and people do not plant flowers; they just buy trees, and I think the environment has more greenery than colorful plants.

Tense consistency: use present 'I live' to match 'I think' (present). 'It's not that much' is vague — use 'there are not that many' for countable 'flowers'. 'Lived' should be 'live'. 'Plan to flowers' is incorrect verb/preposition; use 'plant flowers'. 'Have a greenery wipes more than colorful wipes' is ungrammatical — replace with 'has more greenery than colorful plants'. Suggestions: maintain present tense for habitual situations, use 'plant' not 'plan', and correct comparative phrasing.

× Yes indeed, but it depends on the opportunity that I found the flowers along the path.

✓ Yes indeed, but it depends on the opportunity when I find flowers along the path.

The clause refers to a general or repeated situation so use present simple 'find' not past 'found'. 'Depends on the opportunity that I found' is awkward; use 'depends on the opportunity when I find' or 'if I find' for conditional. Suggestions: use present tense for habitual actions and replace 'that I found' with 'when I find' or 'if I find'.

× For example, if I see the colorful one, I always capture them in my phone because I think this picture can give you a refreshment and also a Good Wife when you see it.

✓ For example, if I see a colorful one, I always capture it on my phone because I think the picture can refresh you and also give you a good feeling when you see it.

Pronoun agreement: 'the colorful one' is singular so use 'it' not 'them'. 'Capture them in my phone' should be 'capture it on my phone'. 'Give you a refreshment' is unnatural — use 'refresh you' or 'give you a refreshing feeling'. 'Good Wife' is erroneous; likely meant 'good vibe' or 'good feeling' — corrected to 'good feeling'. Suggestions: match pronouns to noun number, use 'on my phone' for photos, and choose natural collocations like 'refresh you' and 'good feeling'.

× Yes, they do. And I think it depends on the special occasions. For example, when it was my graduation days back then in three years ago, my parents and my friends always give me a variety of flowers and I'm so happy with that.

✓ Yes, they do. I think it depends on special occasions. For example, at my graduation three years ago, my parents and my friends gave me a variety of flowers and I was so happy about that.

Tense errors: 'when it was my graduation days back then in three years ago' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'at my graduation three years ago'. Since the event is in the past, use past tense 'gave' not 'give', and 'I'm so happy' should be 'I was so happy' to match past time. Suggestions: simplify time expressions, use past simple for completed events, and keep tense consistent within the sentence.