Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and use concise, specific details. Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–3 sentences. For example, say why you like flowers (color, scent) and give one brief example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because of their bright colours and pleasant scents. For example, I often buy a bouquet of lilies to brighten my room and their fragrance helps me relax.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence, fix grammar and use linking words for coherence. Be specific about the garden and name a detail or reason your mother likes those flowers.

Ejemplo: Yes — my mother loves flowers. She has planned a small garden full of daisies and roses because she likes daisies for their cheerfulness and roses for their strong fragrance.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and use correct sentence structure. Give a brief specific detail about where flowers are found (gardens, parks) and avoid filler words like 'umm'.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers near my home, especially in my mother’s garden and the local park, where beds of seasonal blooms are planted each spring.

Sugerencia: Give a clear negative or positive answer, correct grammar, and add a reason plus one contrasting detail. Keep it concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Not really. I don’t usually photograph flowers because I see them often, though I sometimes take a photo when I find an unusual variety or an especially pretty arrangement.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, improve grammar, and give one or two specific occasions when flowers are sent. Use linking words to make the response coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, absolutely. In my country people often give flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and funerals, and they are commonly used to express love or sympathy.

× Yes I do, I really love flowers but it's a bright color more of a flowers always have it on scent so I really like it.

✓ Yes, I do. I really love flowers, but they have bright colors and pleasant scents, so I really like them.

The student misused singular forms and adjectives/adverbs. 'It's a bright color' refers to a singular thing; 'more of a flowers always have it on scent' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'they' for 'flowers', plural noun agreement 'colors', and 'pleasant scents' (noun) rather than 'on scent'. Combine with commas and periods to separate ideas. Suggestion: refer to flowers in plural and use clear adjective-noun pairs (bright colors, pleasant scents).

× Yes I do. It is my mom who really love flowers.

✓ Yes, I do. It is my mom who really loves flowers.

The relative clause 'who really love' must agree with its antecedent 'my mom' (singular), so use third person singular verb 'loves'. Suggestion: match verb number to the subject (mom -> loves).

× She already planned a garden of flowers with all of her favorite flowers, especially Daisy and rose.

✓ She already planned a garden with all of her favorite flowers, especially daisies and roses.

'Garden of flowers' is wordy; 'garden' suffices. Use plural common nouns 'daisies and roses' not capitalized unless proper names. Also 'all of her favorite flowers' is fine but use consistent plural form. Suggestion: use plural nouns for flower types and avoid unnecessary articles/capitalization.

× Yes, definitely. My mom has a garden away, many flowers was planted so umm yes.

✓ Yes, definitely. My mom has a garden nearby where many flowers are planted.

'Garden away' is unclear; likely 'nearby'. 'Many flowers was planted' has wrong verb form and voice: plural subject needs plural verb and present passive or present simple: 'are planted' or 'grow'. Suggestion: use clear adverb (nearby) and correct subject-verb agreement and verb form ('are planted' or 'grow').

× Not really because I have seen it many times so I don't have interesting with it.

✓ Not really, because I've seen them many times, so I'm not interested in them.

Use present perfect contraction 'I've seen' and plural pronoun 'them' for flowers. 'I don't have interesting with it' is incorrect; use adjective 'interested' with preposition 'in'. Suggestion: use 'interested in' and match plural pronouns to noun.

× So I don't often, uh, take photos of it in my daily life.

✓ So I don't often take photos of them in my daily life.

Replace 'it' with plural 'them' to refer to flowers. Move filler words appropriately and avoid comma splice. Suggestion: use 'take photos of them' and place adverb 'often' before main verb.

× Yes, absolutely. In my country, sending flowers is another way to say I love you to other people.

✓ Yes, absolutely. In my country, sending flowers is another way to say 'I love you' to other people.

Main issue is punctuation around quoted phrase; grammar otherwise acceptable. To be consistent, quote the phrase or use commas. Suggestion: present set phrase clearly as a quoted expression.

× For example in. In many special case occasions, people always give flowers to other.

✓ For example, on many special occasions, people always give flowers to others.

'For example in.' is fragment. Use 'For example,' then 'on many special occasions' (correct preposition and collocation). 'to other' should be 'to others'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and use correct prepositions 'on' with 'occasions' and plural 'others'.