Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds and repetitive phrases. Also correct grammar (e.g., singular/plural, verb forms) and clarify unclear parts like "scent to another one another person."

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they make me feel peaceful and cheerful. For example, I often buy roses and lilies for my home since their fragrance lifts my mood.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details with correct grammar and linking words. Remove repetitions and hesitation. Use past/continuous forms appropriately (e.g., "is making a garden" or "has made a garden").

Ejemplo: Yes, my neighbor loves flowers. She is making a small garden at home and spends time watering and pruning the plants every week.

Sugerencia: Answer directly to the question with a clear statement about your area, then support it with one specific example and linkers. Fix tense and clarity issues (e.g., "I don't live in that area" unclear). Avoid contradiction in sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really, there are not many flowers in my neighborhood. However, one neighbor has a small garden with many fresh blooms, so I often enjoy looking at those when I pass by.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and one specific detail about frequency or reason. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "often".

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially when I go for a walk. I enjoy capturing their colours and shapes because they look beautiful and lift my spirits.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear general statement about customs, then give specific occasions and a personal comment using linking words. Fix grammar (articles, plurals, word order) and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, people usually send flowers on special occasions such as birthdays and anniversaries. Personally, I often give fresh flowers because they make people feel happy when they receive them.

× Yes, I love flowers umm because it gives me peaceful and cheerful mood and I love fresh flowers and I love buying roses and lilies and scent to another one another person.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they give me a peaceful and cheerful mood, and I love fresh flowers; I enjoy buying roses and lilies and giving their scent to other people.

Original uses singular pronoun 'it' for plural 'flowers' and awkward phrase 'another one another person'. Change to plural 'they' to match 'flowers' (subject-verb agreement) and rephrase for clarity. Also add articles ('a peaceful') and use 'giving' to express transferring scent to people.

× Yes, I know someone who loves flower umm she loves fresh flowers and she already making her garden.

✓ Yes, I know someone who loves flowers. She loves fresh flowers and she is already making her garden.

Use plural 'flowers' when referring generally. Missing auxiliary 'is' for present continuous 'is making'. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× She she preferred fresh flowers and she take care of plants and.

✓ She prefers fresh flowers and she takes care of her plants.

Use simple present 'prefers' and 'takes' for third-person singular (subject-verb agreement). Add possessive 'her' for clarity. Remove duplicate 'She' and trailing 'and'.

× No, I didn't live that area, there was a lot of flowers but I loved to watch fresh flowers.

✓ No, I didn't live in that area; there were not a lot of flowers, but I loved watching fresh flowers.

Use 'live in that area' (preposition 'in'). For negative past, 'didn't live' requires context; likely meant 'I didn't live in that area' or 'I don't live in that area'. 'There was a lot of flowers' should be 'there were not a lot of flowers' or 'there weren't many flowers' (plural agreement). Use 'watching' after 'loved' (verb + -ing form).

× Umm, my neighbors making a small garden at home and she prefers fresh flowers.

✓ My neighbor is making a small garden at home and she prefers fresh flowers.

Use singular 'neighbor' to match singular pronoun 'she', and present continuous 'is making' for ongoing action. If plural neighbors were meant, use 'they' instead of 'she'.

× Yes I do take photos of flowers sometime because I like flowers colors and shapes and when when I went for a walk I take a pictures.

✓ Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers because I like their colors and shapes, and when I go for a walk I take pictures.

Use adverb placement 'sometimes' not 'sometime'. Use possessive 'their colors'. Consistent tense: use simple present 'go' and 'take' for habitual actions. Remove duplicate 'when' and incorrect article 'a pictures'.

× I loved fresh flowers and I set for some time and watching flowers and feel.

✓ I love fresh flowers; I sit for some time to watch flowers and enjoy the feeling.

Use present tense 'love' for general preference. 'Set' should be 'sit'. Use infinitive 'to watch' or gerund 'watching' with proper structure. 'Feel' needs an object or rephrase to 'enjoy the feeling'.

× The usually this 2 for occasion like birthdays, birthday parties and anniversaries by but I love often to send fresh flowers because it feels happy and I loved when person seen fresh flowers and they make happy.

✓ Usually people send flowers for occasions like birthdays and anniversaries, but I often like to send fresh flowers because they make people happy; I love when someone sees fresh flowers.

Remove extraneous 'The' and numeric '2'. Use plural 'people' and correct preposition 'for occasions'. Use 'often' before verb. Replace 'it feels happy' with 'they make people happy' and use correct verb forms: 'I love when someone sees'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article usage ('someone' not 'person seen').