Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar and reduce redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a specific reason or example (e.g. why red roses are special). Watch verb forms and avoid unclear phrases like “lifted it like it left my mood.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially red roses. I often receive them on my birthday, and their scent and color cheer me up when I’m feeling down. For example, last year a bouquet of roses brightened my day after a stressful exam.

Sugerencia: Be more organized and avoid fillers (uh). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details about the person and link reasons with words like because or so. Mention a brief example of what she does in gardening to add concreteness.

Ejemplo: Yes. Many people I know like flowers, but my cousin Barbara loves them the most. She spends hours gardening every weekend and grows roses and herbs because she enjoys caring for plants and watching them bloom.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity, keep the answer concise, and use specific vocabulary (e.g. “front yards,” “rose bushes”). Use linking words to explain when and why people plant flowers. Avoid incorrect phrases like “rose bats.”

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers in my neighborhood. Most residents are keen gardeners, so every summer they plant rose bushes and tulips in their front yards to brighten the street.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation sounds and use natural phrasing. Give a clear topic sentence, then one specific example with correct nouns (avoid unclear terms like “Julie Beds”). Mention frequency and purpose to add content.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photography and often photograph flowers and landscapes. For instance, last week I took a close-up of a bed of jasmine flowers in the park because I liked their delicate petals and scent.

Sugerencia: Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement) and be concise. Start with a direct statement about past vs present, then give a clear reason or example and use linking words like however or nowadays correctly.

Ejemplo: In the past, sending flowers was uncommon in my country. However, nowadays many young people send bouquets for occasions like birthdays, graduations, or job promotions as a way to show congratulations.

× My most favorite part is red rose.

✓ My favorite is the red rose.

'Most favorite' is redundant; 'favorite' already implies the superlative. Also need the article 'the' before 'red rose' to specify that rose; without it the noun phrase is incorrect. Use 'the red rose' or 'red roses' depending on meaning.

× I like to receive it during my birthdays.

✓ I like to receive it on my birthday.

Use the pronoun 'it' for the rose is acceptable, but 'during my birthdays' is incorrect: 'birthday' is a singular event each year, and the correct preposition is 'on' for days. If you mean multiple years, 'on my birthdays' could work but 'on my birthday' is more natural.

× It lifted it like it left my mood whenever I am feeling down.

✓ It lifts my mood whenever I am feeling down.

The original has extra pronouns and incorrect verb tense/structure. 'Lifted it like it left my mood' is ungrammatical. Use simple present 'lifts' for habitual effect and remove extra 'it' and 'left' to express that flowers improve mood.

× If I have to pick one particular person who loves flowers, uh, unconditionally, as my cousin, her name is Barbara.

✓ If I had to pick one person who loves flowers unconditionally, it would be my cousin Barbara.

The sentence mixes structures and has an unnecessary pronoun 'her' and filler words. Use conditional 'If I had to pick' with 'it would be' to present a hypothetical. Place the name directly after the noun, and remove extra commas.

× Yes, the place where I am residing right now has lot of flowers in the neighborhood.

✓ Yes, the place where I am residing right now has a lot of flowers in the neighborhood.

'Lot' requires the article 'a' as in 'a lot of'. Also 'residing' is formal but acceptable; keeping it is fine.

× Most of the people are keen gardener and during the summers they love to plant rose bats or tulips at the front yard of their houses.

✓ Most people are keen gardeners, and during the summer they love to plant roses or tulips in the front yards of their houses.

Use plural 'gardener' -> 'gardeners' to agree with 'most people' (plural). 'During the summers' should be 'during the summer' for general habit. 'Rose bats' is incorrect; likely 'rose bushes' or simply 'roses'. Use plural 'roses' and 'front yards' (plural) and preposition 'in' the front yard.

× Whenever I am uh, seeing some good flowers or uh some good landscape I usually click picture.

✓ Whenever I see some beautiful flowers or a nice landscape, I usually take pictures.

Use simple present 'see' for habitual actions rather than 'am seeing'. 'Click picture' is nonstandard; use 'take pictures' or 'take a picture'. Add articles 'a' and make plurals where appropriate. Also replace colloquial 'good' with 'beautiful'/'nice'.

× Being a nature lover, I mostly click picture of natural beauty.

✓ Being a nature lover, I mostly take pictures of natural beauty.

Again, 'click picture' is nonstandard. Use 'take pictures' and pluralize 'pictures' for general habit.

× I still remember last week I clicked a beautiful picture of Julie Beds.

✓ I still remember that last week I took a beautiful picture of some flower beds.

'Clicked' is informal and nonstandard; use 'took'. 'Julie Beds' appears to be a mistake—likely 'flower beds'. Add 'that' for clarity and correct the noun phrase.

× In the past, the trend of sending flowers to each other were not was not popular in my country.

✓ In the past, the trend of sending flowers to each other was not popular in my country.

Subject-verb agreement: 'trend' is singular so use 'was'. The original contains duplicate negatives 'were not was not'. Remove redundancy and use correct singular verb.

× However, nowadays most of the youngsters love to send flowers to their near and dear ones during some special occasion or accomplishment.

✓ However, nowadays most youngsters like to send flowers to their loved ones on special occasions or to celebrate accomplishments.

'Most of the youngsters' is wordy; 'most youngsters' is more natural. 'Love to send' is acceptable but 'like to send' is more neutral. 'Near and dear ones' is informal; 'loved ones' is concise. Use plural 'occasions' and preposition 'on' for events; rephrase 'during some special occasion or accomplishment' to 'on special occasions or to celebrate accomplishments' for clarity.