Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), avoid repetition, and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. Use linking words to add one specific reason and an example. For instance, say you love roses and why (scent, color) with one short supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. I find their colour and scent very uplifting, which immediately improves my mood. For example, when I see roses at a market I often stop to admire them because their fragrance is calming.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “very opposite in flowers”) and keep sentences coherent. State who and one concise reason with a linking word. Correct pronouns and verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She buys new bouquets every week because she believes fresh flowers brighten the home and lift everyone’s spirits. For example, she often chooses lilies for their fragrance.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement about your neighbourhood or home, use correct grammar (verbs, plurals), and be concise. Use a linking word to connect the reason and give one specific detail about frequency or location.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers at home because my mother buys fresh bouquets every week. As a result, it’s common to see vases of flowers on our table and windowsill.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear past example with correct past tense and concise structure. Avoid repetition and fix sentence fragments. Use linking words to explain why and who you share with, and one brief specific detail about the photo.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph flowers. For example, last week I saw a lovely display outside a shopping mall and took several photos. I usually send these pictures to my family and close friends to share something beautiful that made me happy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition (don’t say “especially” twice). Use correct collocations (e.g., “on birthdays”, “show you care”). Give one or two typical occasions and a short reason with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions such as birthdays and anniversaries. For me, I give flowers on someone’s birthday to show I care because flowers are a simple way to express respect and good wishes.

× Well, of course I really love flowers, especially they have the beautiful and the colorful appearance because I think these beautiful things can make me in a good mood.

✓ Well, of course I really love flowers, especially because they have a beautiful and colorful appearance, and I think these things can put me in a good mood.

The original sentence misuses the pronoun 'they' with awkward structure and has redundant articles 'the beautiful and the colorful appearance'. Replace 'they have the beautiful and the colorful appearance' with 'because they have a beautiful and colorful appearance' to make the pronoun clearly refer to flowers and remove unnecessary definite articles. Also simplify 'these beautiful things can make me in a good mood' to 'these things can put me in a good mood' for natural phrasing.

× Especially I really love the flowers which is the Rose.

✓ Especially I really love the flower which is the rose.

The clause uses singular/plural inconsistently: 'flowers which is the Rose' mixes plural 'flowers' with singular verb 'is' and a specific noun 'Rose'. Use singular 'the flower' or plural with 'are'. Here 'the flower which is the rose' matches singular 'is'. Also 'rose' should be lowercase unless referring to a specific named rose.

× Well, I think the first person pops in my mind was absolutely my mom.

✓ Well, I think the first person who pops into my mind is my mom.

Use the relative pronoun 'who' for people and the verb phrase 'pops into my mind' (not 'pops in my mind'). Also keep present tense 'is' because the question asks generally; the original 'was' wrongly places the sentence in past.

× She was always very opposite in flowers and she really like to change the flowers once a week because she think the flowers in our home will make our family members stay in a good mood whenever we thought this beautiful thing.

✓ She has always loved flowers and she really likes to change them once a week because she thinks the flowers in our home help our family stay in a good mood when we see them.

'Opposite in flowers' is incorrect; use 'loved flowers'. Fix subject-verb agreement: 'she really likes' and 'she thinks'. Replace 'change the flowers once a week' with 'change them once a week' (pronoun for flowers). 'Make our family members stay' is wordy; use 'help our family stay'. 'Whenever we thought this beautiful thing' is tense and phrasing error; use 'when we see them'.

× So I think. English, my mother.

✓ So I think my mother is an example.

The original contains fragments 'So I think. English, my mother.' which lack clear structure. Provide a complete sentence conveying the intended meaning. If speaker meant 'For example, my mother,' use that phrasing.

× Oh, yes, of course, as I mentioned, my mother was really love the flower.

✓ Oh yes, of course, as I mentioned, my mother really loves flowers.

'Was really love' incorrectly mixes past 'was' with base verb 'love'. Use present 'really loves'. Also plural 'flowers' is more natural.

× So, uh, she usually buy a lot of flower ones, uh, time and she would change it once a week.

✓ So she usually buys a lot of flowers at a time and she changes them once a week.

Use correct verb form 'buys' for third person singular and plural noun 'flowers'. 'A lot of flower ones' is incorrect; use 'a lot of flowers at a time'. Match pronouns: 'changes them' rather than 'change it'.

× Yes, of course I still remember the last times I take a photos for the flowers was last week I going to the shopping mall and I thought a beautiful flowers outside there.

✓ Yes, of course I still remember; the last time I took photos of flowers was last week when I went to the shopping mall and I saw some beautiful flowers outside.

Use past tense 'took' (verb in past participle/simple past) and 'went' not 'going'. 'Take a photos' incorrect article and number; use 'took photos of flowers'. 'I thought a beautiful flowers' should be 'I saw some beautiful flowers' for correct verb and plurality.

× So I'm really like to take the photos and send the photos to my family and my close friend to share the daily life beautiful to learn beautiful land.

✓ So I really like to take photos and send them to my family and close friends to share the beauty of daily life.

Remove incorrect 'I'm really like' (use 'I really like') and use correct plural 'friends'. Replace awkward phrase 'to share the daily life beautiful to learn beautiful land' with 'to share the beauty of daily life'. Use pronoun 'them' for photos.

× I think it. To make us feel happy.

✓ I think it makes us feel happy.

The original is fragmented. Combine into a complete sentence 'I think it makes us feel happy' to express the idea clearly.

× Yes, of course, especially, uh, especially the special times, uh, such as the anniversary or the birthday or birthday.

✓ Yes, of course, especially on special occasions such as anniversaries or birthdays.

Use 'on special occasions' rather than repeated 'especially the special times'. Use plural 'anniversaries or birthdays' for general statements.

× I for me, I always give the flowers when, sometimes, uh, when somebody birthdays because I think uh, giving the flowers can show your respect and you cared for someone and.

✓ For me, I always give flowers sometimes when it's somebody's birthday because I think giving flowers can show your respect and that you care for someone.

Fix pronoun and possessive: 'when it's somebody's birthday'. Remove redundant 'I for me'. Use 'that you care' instead of 'you cared'. Remove extra conjunction at end.

× All can make them stayed in a good mood, so I think it's quite.

✓ All of this can make them stay in a good mood, so I think it's nice.

Use infinitive 'make them stay' not 'make them stayed'. 'It's quite' is incomplete; replace with 'it's nice' for clear opinion.