Name— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答，再用清晰、自然的句子说明通常需要见几次才能记住名字。原回答中的“see people once and then remembered”时态和意思不清楚；可以用“meet someone once”和“need to meet them a few times”表达。

Ejemplo: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I usually need to meet someone two or three times before their name really sticks.

Sugerencia: 回答没有完整结束，而且“read many times”没有说明读什么。可以具体说出一两个实用方法，例如重复对方的名字、把名字和长相联系起来，并用连接词组织答案。

Ejemplo: I usually repeat a person's name in my head after meeting them. If I can, I also connect their name with something memorable about their appearance, which helps me remember it.

Sugerencia: 观点和原因比较清楚：如果对方以前不认识你，你觉得忘记名字很正常，因为你的中文名字也不容易记。不过要避免重复“actually”，并修改“for even the Chinese”等不自然表达；可补充一句说明熟人忘记时你的感受。

Ejemplo: If someone has just met me, I don't mind if they forget my name because it can be quite difficult to pronounce, even for Chinese people. However, I might feel a little disappointed if a close friend forgot it.

Sugerencia: 回答方向明确，但“No, I don't”后面的表达含义不清楚，“implied”也不适合这里。建议直接说明你会努力记住别人的名字，并用一个具体方法或简短原因补充；注意使用所有格“others' names”或“other people's names”。

Ejemplo: Not very often, because I make an effort to remember other people's names. I usually repeat a name to myself after being introduced, although I still find it a little challenging sometimes.

× I can just see people once and then remembered their name.

✓ I can just see people once and then remember their names.

情态动词 can 后面应接动词原形。这里 and 连接的两个动作都受 can 支配，因此 remembered 应改为 remember。另外，泛指多个人的名字时用 names 更清楚。

× Maybe twice or three times I can't remember.

✓ Maybe I still can't remember their names even after seeing them twice or three times.

原句的语序不清楚，而且没有明确说明“看了两三次”与“记不住名字”的关系。可以补上主语 I，并用 even after 表达“即使……之后仍然……”。

× Just maybe read many times or just to see these people a lot of times so that you can be familiar with their name or just

✓ Maybe I remember their names by reading them many times or by seeing these people often, so that I can become familiar with their names.

原句缺少明确的主语和完整的句子结构，而且 read 和 to see 的形式不平行。改写后补出主语 I，并用 by reading 和 by seeing 保持结构一致。句尾的 or just 没有接完内容，应删去。

× Well, if the people don't know me before, then I just find it's very normal, very common for just don't remember my name because my Chinese name is actually actually sounds difficult for even the Chinese

✓ Well, if people didn't know me before, then I just find it very normal and common for them not to remember my name, because my Chinese name actually sounds difficult even for Chinese people.

before 表示“以前”时，这里说的是之前没有认识我的情况，因此用过去时 didn't know 更合适。

× Well, if the people don't know me before, then I just find it's very normal, very common for just don't remember my name because my Chinese name is actually actually sounds difficult for even the Chinese

✓ Well, if people didn't know me before, then I just find it very normal and common for them not to remember my name, because my Chinese name actually sounds difficult even for Chinese people.

for 后面需要有明确的逻辑主语，并用 to + 动词原形；因此 for just don't remember 不完整，应改为 for them not to remember。后面的 because 从句也不能同时使用 is 和 sounds 两个谓语动词，所以删去 is。actually 重复出现一次即可。

× No, I don't I think it's a bit of implied maybe so I'm trying hard to remember others names even though it's a little difficult for me.

✓ No, I don't. I think it may be a bit implied, so I'm trying hard to remember other people's names, even though it's a little difficult for me.

No, I don't 后面已经是一个完整句子，不能直接与 I think 连在一起，应断句。原句中的 a bit of implied 结构不完整；这里将其改为 a bit implied，并调整语序，使句子结构完整。

× No, I don't I think it's a bit of implied maybe so I'm trying hard to remember others names even though it's a little difficult for me.

✓ No, I don't. I think it may be a bit implied, so I'm trying hard to remember other people's names, even though it's a little difficult for me.

表示“其他人的名字”时，可以说 other people's names。原句 others names 缺少正确的所有格形式；people's 中的 's 表示“人的”，names 则用复数表示多个人的名字。