Name— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason. The phrase “takes my friends every day” is unclear and does not explain why names are easy for you to remember. Use a natural expression such as “I have a good memory for names,” then add a brief supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m usually good at remembering people’s names because I make an effort to listen carefully when I meet someone. I also try to use their name during our conversation.

Sugerencia: Explain your method clearly and avoid repetition. “Like,” “all the way,” and “all the time” make the answer less fluent, and following someone on social media does not necessarily explain how you learn their name. Give one specific strategy, such as repeating the name or connecting it with a detail about the person.

Ejemplo: When I meet someone, I repeat their name once or twice during the conversation. I also try to connect it with something I remember about them, which helps me recall it later.

Sugerencia: Your answer gives a relevant comparison, but reduce the repeated words and correct the conditional phrasing. Say “if it’s a family member or close friend” and “I wouldn’t feel too upset if it were someone I’d just met.” Finish with a concise explanation of why the difference matters to you.

Ejemplo: It depends on who forgets my name. I’d feel a little hurt if it were a close friend or family member, because I’d expect them to remember me. If it were someone I’d just met, I wouldn’t mind very much.

Sugerencia: You answer the question and give a personal detail, but some wording is unnatural and the answer is repetitive. Use “my friends tell me,” “look people up on social media,” and “even people I’ve just met.” Avoid calling yourself a “stalker” unless you mean it humorously; a softer description will sound more natural.

Ejemplo: No, I rarely forget people’s names. My friends joke that I’m very curious because I sometimes look people up on social media after meeting them. That helps me remember who they are and what their names are.

× I remember people's names by following them on social media, on every platform. Because of that, I can like remember all their names, but all the way all the time.

✓ I remember people's names by following them on every social media platform. Because of that, I can remember all their names all the time.

The phrase 'but all the way all the time' does not form a clear grammatical continuation and makes the second sentence structurally incomplete. Remove it and use 'all the time' to express the intended meaning. 'Like' is a filler here and can be omitted for a clearer answer.

× Well, it depends on who's the one that forgot my name.

✓ Well, it depends on who the person is who forgot my name.

In this embedded clause after 'depends on,' use statement word order: 'who the person is,' not question word order. This makes the sentence structure grammatical.

× But it's if it's someone new to my my my friends, I don't really, I don't really be that sad.

✓ But if it's someone new among my friends, I don't really be that sad.

The repeated 'it's' creates an ungrammatical structure; use 'if' to introduce the condition directly. The repeated 'my' is a speech disfluency and should be said once. The verb form is also incorrect: with the subject 'I,' use 'am,' not 'be.'

× But it's if it's someone new to my my my friends, I don't really, I don't really be that sad.

✓ But if it's someone new among my friends, I am not really that sad.

For a present-time statement with the subject 'I,' use the present form 'am.' 'Be' is the base form and cannot be used this way in a standard present-tense sentence.

× So like just new friends.

✓ I mean, they're just new friends.

The original is a fragment because it has no main verb. Adding 'they're' gives the sentence a subject and a verb.

× Actually, no, I'm not the person that forgets the people's names because all my friends always tells me that I'm the biggest stalker in Jordan.

✓ Actually, no, I'm not the person who forgets people's names, because all my friends always tell me that I'm the biggest stalker in Jordan.

The subject 'all my friends' is plural, so the verb must be 'tell,' not 'tells.' Use 'who' for people in the relative clause. The article in 'the people's names' is unnecessary when speaking generally.

× I always search for any anybody, even if I don't know him, for the social media, so I always remember every name.

✓ I always search for anybody, even if I don't know him, on social media, so I always remember every name.

Use 'on social media' to describe the platform where you search. 'For the social media' uses the wrong preposition and an unnecessary article. Also, 'any' and 'anybody' are redundant together, so use only 'anybody.'