Name— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain why names are difficult to remember. Replace the unnatural phrases “business setup” and “do a round of introductions” with “business settings” and “introduce themselves.” Clarify what “from them” refers to, and use a smoother sentence structure.

Ejemplo: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names, especially in business settings. As a marketing professional, I often meet several people at once, so I usually remember only one or two names after introductions.

Sugerencia: The response is incomplete and its ideas seem contradictory: you say you rarely forget names from agencies, but then say you try to identify people only when you need something from them. Finish the answer and explain a clear strategy, such as repeating a name or connecting it with a detail about the person. Use “third-party agencies” with a hyphen.

Ejemplo: I remember names best when I have a personal conversation with someone. If I meet a new contact at work, I try to repeat their name during the conversation and connect it with their role or company. That makes it easier to recall later.

Sugerencia: Your answer responds directly and gives a relevant reason. Improve the phrasing “because likewise it's not also easy” to “because I also find it difficult,” and use “unless we’ve interacted personally or worked together” for a more natural ending.

Ejemplo: I don't feel offended when people forget my name, because I also find it difficult to remember everyone's name. I think it's understandable, especially if we've only met briefly and haven't worked together.

Sugerencia: The answer is cut off, so the main contrast is left unfinished. Complete the thought by explaining that you are more likely to forget the names of people outside your organization. Replace “if it's coming from a third party agency” with “when I meet people from third-party agencies,” and keep the answer concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often forget the names of people I meet through third-party agencies. I interact with colleagues in my organization regularly, so their names are easier to remember. However, I may forget an external contact's name if I only meet them once.

× It's not easy for me to remember people's names, especially in the business setup because as a marketing person I meet people in groups and even if they do a round of introductions.

✓ It's not easy for me to remember people's names, especially in a business setting, because, as a marketing person, I meet people in groups. Even when we go around introducing ourselves, I still find it difficult to remember names.

The clause beginning with even if is not properly connected to the rest of the sentence. Even if normally introduces a condition, but the speaker is describing a situation that happens regularly. Use even when and connect it to a complete main clause. Splitting the long sentence also makes the structure clearer.

× I only remember one or two people from them.

✓ I only remember one or two of them.

Use of them to refer to the people who were introduced. From them does not express the intended meaning here. When referring to a small number of members of a group, use one or two of them.

× I personally don't feel offended if people forget my name because likewise it's not also easy for me to remember everyone unless we have a personal interaction or we communicate for work.

✓ I personally don't feel offended if people forget my name because, likewise, it's not easy for me to remember everyone unless we have a personal interaction or communicate for work.

Likewise already means in the same way, so using also with it is redundant in this sentence. Keep likewise and remove also. The revised sentence also avoids repeating the subject we before communicate, which is not necessary because it is shared with have.