Name— Part 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Candidato

Actually, I'm not good at remembering people's names and I always can't match their names to their faces, so I often can't recognize them correctly. It made me very sorry.

Examinador

How do you remember people's names?

Candidato

Actually, I don't have the exact ways to remember people's name. The only things I like to do is that I always have a lot of conversations with others and repeat their name in this conversation frequently.

Examinador

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Candidato

I never mind it because I think it is very common for people to not remember people's name. Remembering name needs a lot of time. As for me, I always forget someone's names so I can understand them who can't remember my name.

Examinador

Do you often forget people's names?

Candidato

Actually, yes. However I think it's really impolite. I really try to remember their names and I failed to do this. Remembering them needs a lot of efforts of me and I will try a new method to remembering them, such as taking their names down.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Puntuación: 62.0

Sugerencia: 先直接回答“是否容易”,再解释原因或举例。注意避免不自然表达:用“find it difficult to...”代替“I'm not good at...”,用“match names to faces”描述记名字与认人的联系;“It made me very sorry”不自然,可改为“It's embarrassing”或“I feel bad about it”。

Ejemplo: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I sometimes recognize someone's face but can't recall their name, which can be a little embarrassing.

How do you remember people's names?

Puntuación: 58.0

Sugerencia: 回答中提到重复名字是有效方法,但开头和后续表达不够自然。可说“I don't have a specific method”,并把“the only things”改为单数结构;不要说“repeat their name...frequently”,可说明在谈话中自然地重复一两次,避免显得刻意。

Ejemplo: I don't have a specific method, but I try to use a person's name naturally during our conversation. For example, I might say, “That's interesting, Sarah,” to help the name stick in my memory.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Puntuación: 66.0

Sugerencia: 态度明确,也用自己的经历解释了原因。注意名词所有格和单复数:用“people's names”和“remembering names”;“I can understand them who...”语法不自然,可改为“I understand why they forget”。还可以补充一个具体感受,让回答更完整。

Ejemplo: I don't really mind if someone forgets my name because it happens to everyone. I sometimes forget other people's names too, so I understand why it happens. As long as they make an effort to remember me next time, I'm fine with it.

Do you often forget people's names?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 直接回答了问题,也提出了改进方法,但转折逻辑不清:可以说明“虽然我经常忘记,但我认为这样不太礼貌”。注意使用“I fail”或“I'm not always successful”,而不是“I failed”;“a lot of effort”不可数,且“a method to remember”比“a method to remembering”自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do, although I think forgetting someone's name can seem impolite. I try to pay attention when I'm introduced to someone, but I don't always succeed. To improve, I sometimes write their name down after meeting them.

Gramática

20: Incorrect adverb placement(副词位置错误)

× I always can't match their names to their faces.

✓ I can never match their names to their faces.

表示“总是无法做到”时,通常把 never 放在情态动词 can 后面;“always can't”语序不自然。可以记住“情态动词 + never + 动词原形”的结构。

1: Singular and plural issue(名词单复数问题)

× I don't have the exact ways to remember people's name.

✓ I don't have the exact ways to remember people's names.

people 指多个人,因此其对应的名字也应使用复数 names。修改时注意名词所有格后面的名词要与所表达的数量一致。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors(主谓一致错误)

× The only things I like to do is that I always have a lot of conversations with others and repeat their name in this conversation frequently.

✓ The only thing I like to do is have a lot of conversations with others and repeat their names frequently during these conversations.

主语中心词是单数 thing,因此后面的系动词应为 is。可先找出句子的主语中心词,再判断谓语动词的单复数。

1: Singular and plural issue(名词单复数问题)

× The only things I like to do is that I always have a lot of conversations with others and repeat their name in this conversation frequently.

✓ The only thing I like to do is have a lot of conversations with others and repeat their names frequently during these conversations.

谈论不同人的名字时,应使用复数 names;与 many conversations 对应,后面也应使用 these conversations,而不是 this conversation。注意根据所指对象选择单数或复数。

1: Singular and plural issue(名词单复数问题)

× I think it is very common for people to not remember people's name.

✓ I think it is very common for people not to remember people's names.

这里泛指许多人的名字,应使用复数 names。另将否定词放在不定式标记 to 前更自然;练习时可记住“not to + 动词原形”的常见结构。

1: Singular and plural issue(名词单复数问题)

× Remembering name needs a lot of time.

✓ Remembering names takes a lot of time.

这里泛指记住别人的名字,name 应使用复数 names。此外,英语中常用 take time 表达“花费时间”;可积累常见动词搭配。

1: Singular and plural issue(名词单复数问题)

× As for me, I always forget someone's names so I can understand them who can't remember my name.

✓ As for me, I always forget people's names, so I can understand people who can't remember my name.

someone 是单数概念,不能与复数 names 搭配;表达一般情况时可用 people's names。修改时要确保限定词与名词的单复数一致。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× As for me, I always forget someone's names so I can understand them who can't remember my name.

✓ As for me, I always forget people's names, so I can understand people who can't remember my name.

them 是宾格代词,不能直接放在关系从句 who can't remember my name 前作先行词。此处应直接用 people 作先行词,再接 who 引导的定语从句。

6: Present tense issue(现在时错误)

× I really try to remember their names and I failed to do this.

✓ I really try to remember their names, but I fail to do this.

句子描述通常发生的情况,前面的 try 使用一般现在时,后面的 fail 也应保持一般现在时。描述习惯或反复发生的情况时,要保持时态一致。

1: Singular and plural issue(名词单复数问题)

× Remembering them needs a lot of efforts of me.

✓ It takes a lot of effort for me to remember them.

effort 在 a lot of effort 这一表达中通常作不可数名词,不加复数词尾 -s。可记住“a lot of effort”表示“很多努力”。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词后接 -ing 形式错误)

× I will try a new method to remembering them, such as taking their names down.

✓ I will try a new method to remember them, such as taking their names down.

这里的 to 表示不定式,而不是介词,因此后面接动词原形 remember,不能接 remembering。可以区分“to + 动词原形”和介词 to 后接动名词的用法。

Vocabulario

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
Sorry— Sad; Full of pity; Regretful; Pitiful; Apologies
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