Part 1
Examinador
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Candidato
For me it depends on the language. If it's Chinese, I can usually remember people's name immediately, but for other languages such as Taiwanese, English or Japanese I can't remember learn so quickly because I'm less familiar with their songs and name structures.
Examinador
How do you remember people's names?
Candidato
I try to remember the pronunciation first because sounds help me recall names later. It is a Chinese name. I often ask them to write it down so I can remember the characters visually, which makes it much easier to remember.
Examinador
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Candidato
I felt a bit disappointed when people can't remember my name because my name is quite uncommon. For example, and I always remember is and that made me feel careful. But someone often calls me by something else, so I usually correct him politely.
Examinador
Do you often forget people's names?
Candidato
Yes, I sometimes forget people names, especially friends I haven't seen for a long time. It's felt quite embarrassing when it's happened. But I'm trying to impose by rehearsing names in my head and using memory trees like associating names with faces.
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 回答思路清晰,也进行了对比,但有明显语法和搭配问题。应将“people's name”改为“people's names”,将“can't remember learn”改为“can't remember them as quickly”,并避免把“Taiwanese”与语言混用(可说“Taiwanese names”或“languages such as English and Japanese”)。“songs and name structures”不太自然,建议说明是对发音或拼写不熟悉。
Ejemplo: It depends on the language. I can usually remember Chinese names immediately, but English or Japanese names are more difficult for me because I’m less familiar with their pronunciation and spelling. I often need to hear them a few times before I can remember them.
How do you remember people's names?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答直接,使用了because和which,逻辑较好,也有具体方法。不过“It is a Chinese name”与上下文衔接不清,建议改为“If it’s a Chinese name”。同时可使用“the sound of the name”和“visual image”等更自然的表达,并保持不超过三到四句。
Ejemplo: I usually remember the pronunciation first because the sound of a name helps me recall it later. If it’s a Chinese name, I may ask the person to write it down so I can remember the characters visually. This combination of sound and visual memory works quite well for me.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: 回答表达了情绪和应对方式,但时态不一致:一般情况应使用“I feel”,过去经历才用“I felt”。“For example, and I always remember is...”句子不完整,影响理解;“correct him”也应根据对象改为“correct them”。建议删除无法表达清楚的例子,改用一个完整、具体的例子,并用“However”连接转折。
Ejemplo: I feel a little disappointed when people forget my name, especially because it’s quite uncommon. However, I understand that some names are difficult to remember. If someone calls me by the wrong name, I usually correct them politely and remind them of the correct pronunciation.
Do you often forget people's names?
Puntuación: 64.0Sugerencia: 回答有直接回答、原因和解决方法,内容较完整。但应将“people names”改为“people's names”,“It's felt quite embarrassing”改为“It feels quite embarrassing”,“when it's happened”改为“when it happens”。“trying to impose”用词错误,应为“trying to improve”。“memory trees”不够常见,建议说“memory techniques”或直接解释联想方法。
Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes forget people’s names, especially if I haven’t seen them for a long time. It feels quite embarrassing when that happens, so I’m trying to improve my memory. For example, I repeat names in my head and associate each person’s name with their face or a memorable detail.
× For me it depends on the language. If it's Chinese, I can usually remember people's name immediately, but for other languages such as Taiwanese, English or Japanese I can't remember learn so quickly because I'm less familiar with their songs and name structures.
✓ For me, it depends on the language. If it's Chinese, I can usually remember people's names immediately, but for other languages such as Taiwanese, English, or Japanese, I can't remember people's names so quickly because I'm less familiar with their songs and name structures.
“People's”表示“人们的”,后面所指的是多个人的名字,因此应使用复数“names”,而不是单数“name”。注意:当一个名词指多个事物时,通常需要加复数词尾“-s”。
× For me it depends on the language. If it's Chinese, I can usually remember people's name immediately, but for other languages such as Taiwanese, English or Japanese I can't remember learn so quickly because I'm less familiar with their songs and name structures.
✓ For me, it depends on the language. If it's Chinese, I can usually remember people's names immediately, but for other languages such as Taiwanese, English, or Japanese, I can't remember people's names so quickly because I'm less familiar with their songs and name structures.
“Can't remember learn”中同时使用了两个动词,但结构不正确。“Remember”后面可以直接接名词或代词,所以应改为“can't remember people's names”。避免在情态动词“can/can't”后错误地连续使用两个动词。
× I felt a bit disappointed when people can't remember my name because my name is quite uncommon.
✓ I feel a bit disappointed when people can't remember my name because my name is quite uncommon.
这句话描述的是一种经常发生或一般性的感受,不是过去某一次的感受,因此应使用一般现在时“feel”,而不是一般过去时“felt”。句中“can't remember”也使用了一般现在时,前后时态应保持一致。
× For example, and I always remember is and that made me feel careful.
✓ For example, I always remember people's names, and that makes me more careful.
原句中“and I always remember is”结构不完整,动词排列混乱,无法形成清晰的主谓结构。修改后使用“I always remember people's names”作为完整句子,并用“that makes me...”表达前面这件事带来的结果。
× Yes, I sometimes forget people names, especially friends I haven't seen for a long time.
✓ Yes, I sometimes forget people's names, especially friends I haven't seen for a long time.
这里表达“人们的名字”,需要使用所有格“people's”,而“names”指多个名字,所以要用复数形式。正确结构是“people's names”。
× It's felt quite embarrassing when it's happened.
✓ It feels quite embarrassing when it happens.
这句话描述的是忘记别人名字时通常产生的感受和情况,应使用一般现在时“feels”和“happens”。“It's felt”不是这里需要的自然表达;应直接使用主语“It”加现在时动词“feels”。