Name— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect singular/plural forms.

Ejemplo: I find it difficult to remember most people's names, but I can easily recall the names of close friends and family. For example, my sister and two best friends are easy to remember because I see them often and talk to them about personal matters.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: give a clear method first, then one or two specific examples. Use correct tense and complete sentences; use linking words such as "for example" or "also". Make the example coherent and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: I try to remember names by repeating them and linking them to a distinctive trait. For example, when I met Shubam I repeated his name twice and linked it to the fact that he taught me to ride a bicycle, so his name stuck in my memory.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence about your feeling, then explain briefly why. Avoid filler phrases and repeated words; use linking words like "because" to make the reason clear.

Ejemplo: I don't mind when people forget my name because I understand that it happens to everyone. For example, busy schedules or meeting many new people can make remembering names difficult, so it doesn't bother me.

Sugerencia: State clearly whether you often forget names now, then give a reason with a specific detail. Use correct time expressions and avoid vague phrases like "etc." Use linking words such as "nowadays" and "because."

Ejemplo: I used to forget people's names a lot when I was a child, but nowadays I usually remember them because I make an effort to build strong connections and meet people regularly.

× Well, it's not quite easy for me to remember people's name but the one who are closer to me like the friends, the family member, I'll say it's much easier for me to remember their name and

✓ Well, it's not quite easy for me to remember people's names, but the ones who are closer to me, like friends and family members, I'll say it's much easier for me to remember their names.

Incorrect use of singular/plural nouns: 'people's name' should be 'people's names' because 'people' is plural. 'the one who are' should be 'the ones who are' to match plural. 'the friends, the family member' should be pluralized to 'friends and family members' for parallel structure. Suggestion: ensure nouns and their determiners agree in number and keep parallel items in the same form.

× When I meet someone new, I try to remember their name during our first interaction by noticing how they behave and repeat.

✓ When I meet someone new, I try to remember their name during our first interaction by noticing how they behave and by repeating it.

Pronoun and verb phrase clarity: 'repeat' lacks an object and parallel structure; add 'it' to indicate the name and use parallel 'by' before both gerunds for clarity. Also 'their' is acceptable as singular gender-neutral pronoun. Suggestion: include the object after 'repeat' and keep parallel structure when using multiple 'by' phrases.

× The name's once or twice, linking the name to a distinctive trait or a small story about them helps me to recall their names as well.

✓ I repeat the name once or twice; linking the name to a distinctive trait or a small story about them also helps me recall their names.

Tense and sentence structure: 'The name's once or twice' is ungrammatical; use a subject and verb ('I repeat the name once or twice'). Also 'helps me to recall' is acceptable but 'helps me recall' is more natural. Suggestion: use a clear subject and consistent verb tense and connect ideas with proper punctuation.

× Like my friend's name is Shubam and I know him since I do he has taught me to ride bicycles.

✓ For example, my friend's name is Shubam, and I have known him since he taught me to ride a bicycle.

Pronoun and tense errors: 'I know him since I do he has taught me' is incorrect. Use present perfect 'I have known him since' with a clause explaining the starting point: 'he taught me to ride a bicycle.' Also 'bicycles' should be singular 'a bicycle' in this context. Suggestion: use 'have known... since' plus a past simple clause for the event that started the relationship.

× To begin to begin with I'll say it's pretty common and I don't feel anything shared sad or happy any emotion it's pretty common that people can forward many and it's such a common phenomenon.

✓ To begin with, I'll say it's pretty common and I don't feel particularly sad or happy; I don't experience any strong emotion. It's a common phenomenon that people forget names.

Run-on sentence and unclear wording: The original has repetition ('To begin to begin with'), mixed phrases ('shared sad or happy any emotion'), and ungrammatical fragments ('people can forward many'). Break into clear sentences, correct collocations ('feel sad or happy', 'experience any strong emotion') and use the correct verb 'forget' instead of 'forward'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use clear collocations, and split long ideas into separate sentences.

× It's not a big issue for me in day to day life.

✓ It's not a big issue for me in day-to-day life.

Compound adjective and hyphenation: 'day to day' used attributively should be hyphenated as 'day-to-day'. This fixes a grammatical convention rather than number. Suggestion: use hyphens for compound adjectives before nouns.

× Initially in childhood days I often forget people's name but in nowadays I generally remember everyone's name because I used to create a good connection with them in terms of relationship, friendship, etc.

✓ Initially, in my childhood I often forgot people's names, but nowadays I generally remember everyone's name because I used to create good connections with them in terms of relationships and friendships.

Tense and number agreement: 'I often forget' should be past tense 'I often forgot' to match 'Initially, in childhood'. 'people's name' should be 'people's names'. 'in nowadays' is incorrect; use 'nowadays'. 'create a good connection' should be plural 'create good connections' to match 'everyone'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent when referring to past habits, correct plural forms, and use standard adverb 'nowadays'.