Name— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons with logical linking words. Avoid irrelevant words like “trauma” if you mean a simple feeling, and correct basic grammar (e.g., subject–verb agreement and pronouns).

Ejemplo: Not really. I often forget people's names because I feel hurt when they forget mine, so I keep my distance and don’t try to remember them. Consequently, I sometimes tell myself their names aren’t important and I move on.

Sugerencia: Give a clear method or strategy. Begin with a topic sentence describing one main way you remember names, then add a specific example using linking words like "when" or "because". Use correct grammar and complete sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually remember names when I form a personal connection with someone. For example, when I meet a colleague and we talk about shared hobbies, I repeat their name and associate it with their hobby, which helps me recall it later.

Sugerencia: Give a direct emotional response followed by a concise reason or example. Use natural vocabulary to describe feelings (e.g., disappointed, hurt) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep it to one topic sentence and one supporting detail.

Ejemplo: I feel disappointed when people forget my name because it makes me think they didn’t pay attention. For instance, at a party I feel awkward repeating my name and I might avoid talking to them again.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a specific, coherent reason. Use linking words like "because" and provide one clear example or habit you can change to improve. Avoid vague phrases like "not special to me."

Ejemplo: Yes, I often forget names because I don’t make an effort to remember them. For example, I usually don’t repeat the name when meeting someone; if I start repeating it or writing it down, I’m more likely to remember.

× No, because I think that trauma, what I felt, uh, I always remember their name, but they not remember my name.

✓ No, because I think that because of the trauma I felt, I always remember their names, but they do not remember my name.

Pronoun and subject-verb issues: 'their name' should be 'their names' (plural for people) and 'they not remember' is ungrammatical in English; use the auxiliary 'do' for negation in present simple ('they do not remember'). Clarify phrase order: 'because of the trauma I felt' is clearer than 'that trauma, what I felt'. Improve by using correct auxiliary verbs and plural forms and by reordering for clarity.

× So I do the same thing.

✓ So I do the same thing.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no changes needed. It correctly uses pronouns and verb forms.

× So I don't remember their name.

✓ So I don't remember their names.

Use plural 'names' when referring to multiple people. The rest of the sentence is correct with the auxiliary 'do' for negation.

× Uh, it depends on if I connect to that people always I will remember, but or it's give me give impact. Oh yeah.

✓ Uh, it depends: if I connect with those people, I will always remember, or if they make an impact on me.

Multiple issues: 'that people' is incorrect; use 'those people' or 'the people'. Preposition 'connect to' should be 'connect with' (see preposition list). Word order and quantifier placement: 'always I will remember' should be 'I will always remember'. 'it's give me give impact' is ungrammatical; change to 'they make an impact on me' or 'they affect me'. The correction fixes preposition, pronoun, adverb placement, and replaces unclear phrasing with standard expressions.

× If it's so sad because mine is so easily to call and so I think they just pretend do not know my name to not.

✓ It is sad because my name is easy to pronounce, so I think they just pretend not to know my name.

Several errors: 'mine is so easily to call' is incorrect; use 'my name is easy to pronounce' or 'easy to remember'. Word order 'pretend do not know' is incorrect; English requires 'pretend not to know'. Remove redundant 'to' at the end. The correction fixes adjective/adverb form, verb placement, and the infinitive negation structure.

× If it's so sad because mine is so easily to call and so I think they just pretend do not know my name to not. Uh, yes.

✓ It is sad because my name is easy to pronounce, so I think they just pretend not to know my name. Yes.

Also aligns tense and natural phrasing: use 'is' for present state and 'pretend not to know' for the habitual or repeated action. Simplify filler words for clarity.

× Yes, because I think my bad habit.

✓ Yes, because I think it's my bad habit.

Missing verb: the original is a fragment. Add 'it's' (it is) to form a complete present-tense clause. This corrects sentence structure and provides a proper subject and verb.

× Uh, because I don't remember name or people do not connect to me or umm, maybe he's not special to me.

✓ Uh, because I don't remember names, or people do not connect with me, or maybe they are not special to me.

Multiple pronoun and number errors: 'remember name' should be 'remember names' (plural). 'people do not connect to me' should be 'people do not connect with me' (correct preposition). 'maybe he's not special to me' incorrectly uses singular 'he'; use 'they' to refer to people in general. Also adjust verb forms to present simple for consistency.