Name— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms, plurals, and articles, and avoid redundant phrases. Add a linking word when giving a reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, it's fairly easy for me to remember people's names. Because I'm a shy person and I don't have many friends, I pay close attention to conversations with new people, so I make an effort to memorise their names.

Sugerencia: Be slightly more precise and natural. Use the correct verbs and explain the method step by step, with a linking word to connect ideas. Mention a specific technique to show concreteness.

Ejemplo: I usually save new contacts on WeChat or WhatsApp and add a short note about where we met. For example, I might write “classmate” or “workshop” next to their name so I can recall the context later.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence about your general reaction, then give two contrasting specific examples linked with connectors (e.g., "however," "but"). Avoid awkward phrasing like "let me feel."

Ejemplo: It depends on how well I know the person. If I have only just met them, I might find it a bit surprising or even amusing; however, if a close friend forgets my name after a long time, I would feel hurt and disappointed.

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Give a clear direct answer first, then briefly explain why, using a linking word to connect explanation. Replace awkward phrases with natural expressions.

Ejemplo: No, I don't often forget people's names. Because I have a small circle of friends and I take relationships seriously, I make an effort to remember their names.

× Yes, of course I'm good at remember people's name because I'm a shy person and my friend are not so much and I treat each conversations with strangers very serious, so it is easy for me to remember these names.

✓ Yes, of course I'm good at remembering people's names because I'm a shy person and I don't have many friends and I treat each conversation with strangers very seriously, so it is easy for me to remember their names.

Multiple issues: 'good at remember' requires the -ing form after 'good at' (gerund). 'people's name' should be plural 'people's names'. 'my friend are not so much' should be 'I don't have many friends' (pronoun and quantifier errors). 'each conversations' should be singular 'each conversation'. 'very serious' needs adverb 'very seriously'. 'these names' better as 'their names' for clarity. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'good at', match singular/plural nouns, use correct pronouns, and adverbs for verbs.

× Well, I often aid the social media accounts on WeChat or WhatsApp and I will mark them with a note so I can see their names.

✓ Well, I often add the social media accounts on WeChat or WhatsApp and I mark them with a note so I can see their names.

The main error: 'aid' is incorrect verb; should be 'add'. Also 'I will mark' is inconsistent with habitual 'I often'—use present simple 'I mark' for routines. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'add' and keep consistent tense for habitual actions.

× Well that depend on the relationship between me and him.

✓ Well, that depends on the relationship between him and me.

'depend' must agree with singular subject 'that' so use 'depends' (subject-verb agreement). Also common English order for pronouns is 'him and me' or better 'between me and him' but 'between him and me' is more natural. Suggestion: Use correct verb form and natural pronoun order.

× For example, if I just know him for not a long time and he forgot my name, I will feel shocked and funny.

✓ For example, if I have only known him for a short time and he forgets my name, I would feel surprised and find it funny.

Tense and word choice issues: 'just know him for not a long time' should be 'have only known him for a short time' (present perfect for duration up to now). Conditional needs present simple 'forgets' in the if-clause, and main clause should use conditional 'would feel'. 'shocked and funny' incorrect; use 'surprised' and 'find it funny'. Suggestion: Use present perfect for recent acquaintance, present simple in conditional clause, and appropriate adjectives/verbs.

× But if we know each other for a long time and he can't Remember Me, let me feel sad and disappointing.

✓ But if we have known each other for a long time and he can't remember me, it makes me feel sad and disappointed.

Use present perfect 'have known' for duration. 'can't Remember Me' incorrect capitalization and pronoun case; 'can't remember me' is correct. 'let me feel' is unnatural; use 'it makes me feel'. 'disappointing' should be adjective 'disappointed' to describe the person's feeling. Suggestion: Use correct tense, pronoun case, and collocations ('make me feel').

× Well, as my previous statement, I do not have so much friends, so I treat each relationship and friendship very serious and I do not often forget a friend's name.

✓ Well, as I said earlier, I do not have many friends, so I treat each relationship and friendship very seriously and I do not often forget a friend's name.

'as my previous statement' is unnatural; use 'as I said earlier'. 'so much friends' incorrect quantifier—use 'many friends'. 'very serious' should be adverb 'very seriously'. Otherwise sentence is fine. Suggestion: Use natural phrases, correct quantifiers, and adverbs for verbs.