Hometown— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答是否了解，再简要说明原因和未来计划。“haven't got insight to”不自然，可改为“don't know much about”；避免把“了解历史”和“询问导游”用不清楚的结构连接起来。

Ejemplo: I don't know much about my hometown's history because some of it seems quite complicated. However, I'd like to learn more when I have time, perhaps by visiting a local museum or asking a guide.

Sugerencia: 回答重点是童年是否学过家乡文化；目前主要说历史，建议补充博物馆里接触到的文化内容。注意“memories”是复数，前面应使用“clear”，并避免句末表达含糊。

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned a little about it when I visited a local museum as a child. I remember seeing exhibits about traditional customs, although I can't recall many details now.

Sugerencia: 先明确家乡的地理位置，再用一两句介绍周边环境。地名在回答中前后不一致（Ingle、New York City、Taipei），请核实；“a good transportation”应改为“good transport”，并补完整最后一句。

Ejemplo: My hometown is in New Taipei City, Taiwan. It's a quiet suburban area, a little far from the city centre, but it's a comfortable place to live.

Sugerencia: 直接说明家乡是小镇或小型城区，再用通勤时间解释。注意“quite a small town”的语序，以及避免重复提到台北市；“takes much time”可改为“takes a long time”。

Ejemplo: It's a fairly small town in New Taipei City. It's quite far from central Taipei, so commuting there can take a long time.

Sugerencia: 先清楚表达喜欢，再给一个优点和一个缺点即可。“Here's”应改为“Yes”；“cultural”应为名词“culture”，“have to renovate by”应改为被动语态“need to be renovated”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. My hometown has a rich history and a distinctive culture, which I really appreciate. However, some old buildings need to be renovated by the local government.

Sugerencia: 内容具体，能提到市场、老街和手工艺品；继续保持这些细节。注意主谓一致（markets and streets可用“they”）、“culture”词性，以及“sell”的过去分词是“sold”；删掉重复词。

Ejemplo: I like the local markets and traditional streets the most because they show the area's distinctive culture. Some vendors sell handmade crafts, which are popular with visitors from other cities.

Sugerencia: 直接指出不喜欢的地方，并说明可能造成的影响即可。将“builders”改为“buildings”，并用“need to be renovated”表达需要翻修；避免重复“so”，也要完整结束句子。

Ejemplo: Yes. Some buildings in my town are very old and may be unsafe, so I think they should be renovated. The local government could also restore historic buildings to protect our heritage.

Sugerencia: 时长已经回答清楚，可用“since I was born”或“for seventeen years”择一表达，避免重复。后面的父母喜好和“永远住在这里”与问题关联较弱，可补充自己熟悉这里的原因。

Ejemplo: I've lived there all my life—about seventeen years. My family has always lived there, and I'm very familiar with the neighbourhood and its community.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，也提到了社区氛围。注意“although”不能与“but”同时使用；“things have to be improved”前应加“that”，并删去“forever for a long time”这类重复表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy living there. Although some things could be improved, the friendly atmosphere created by the local residents makes it a comfortable place to live.

Sugerencia: 先明确说明未来是否会留下，再用一两个理由支撑。“when I getting older”应为“when I get older”；“basic city”不自然，可改为“city centre”。避免声称家乡适合“每个人”，改成个人感受。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I'll stay there for a long time, even when I get older. It's a peaceful place with a welcoming atmosphere, and I feel comfortable living there.

Sugerencia: 按“位置—环境—感受”的顺序描述，避免重复说氛围舒适。请统一家乡名称和城市名称；“a sense of refreshing”可改为“a refreshing feeling”或“a sense of peace”。

Ejemplo: My hometown is a quiet suburb in New Taipei City. It's a little far from the city centre, but it feels peaceful and refreshing, so it's a pleasant place to live.

Sugerencia: 用完整句说明家乡以什么闻名，并补充具体特色。“lots sales”和“many hands craft”表达不完整，可改为“busy markets”和“handmade crafts”；注意“history”通常用单数，此回答也需要完整收尾。

Ejemplo: My hometown is known for its traditional streets and local markets. Visitors can find handmade crafts there, and the old neighbourhood reflects the area's rich history and culture.

Sugerencia: 先用“Yes”或“No”直接回答，再解释学校课程是否涉及家乡历史。当前答案缺少清晰主句；“get inside it”不适合表达深入了解，可用“learn more about it”，并避免重复“learn about”。

Ejemplo: Not really. At school, we mainly studied world history, so we didn't spend much time learning about local history. I'd like to explore it more in the future.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点，也给出了年轻人较少的原因。注意“young people most live”应改为“most young people live”；“elders and people who are older than me”重复，可简化为“older people”。

Ejemplo: Not really. Since my hometown is far from the big cities, many young people choose to live closer to the city centre for work or study. As a result, the community has quite a large number of older residents.

Sugerencia: 观点和距离这一理由是相关的，但结尾表达不清。“have joined the Gen job opportunities”应改为“have access to more job opportunities”；说明年轻人可能需要去市中心找工作，并删去重复的“for me/I think”。

Ejemplo: I wouldn't say so. My hometown is quite far from the city centre, where most major companies and job opportunities are located. Young people may need to commute or move closer to the city to build their careers.

× I haven't got insight to the history of my Homejown because I think it is complex and hard to understand but in the future if I have enough time I would like to learn about it and the information of my hometown or ask some local guides.

✓ I haven't gained insight into the history of my hometown because I think it is complex and hard to understand. But in the future, if I have enough time, I would like to learn about it or ask some local guides for information.

表示“对……有深入了解”时，insight 后面通常接介词 into，而不是 to。表示向导那里获取信息，应说 ask someone for information。

× Yes, when I was a child, I visited a museum to learn about the history of my hometown, but now I think I don't have a clear memories that can tell about the history for a really long time.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I visited a museum to learn about the history of my hometown, but now I don't have clear memories that can tell me much about its history from a long time ago.

memories 是复数名词，前面不能使用不定冠词 a。应删除 a；也可以改成单数 a clear memory。

× My hometown is in Ingle, which is located in New York City. It's quite a remote area that's in the suburban area and it doesn't have a good transportation to speak cities such as Taipei, but it's good for us to live in without

✓ My hometown is in Ingle, which is located in New York City. It's quite a remote area in the suburbs, and it doesn't have good transportation to nearby cities such as Taipei, but it's a good place for us to live.

transportation 在这里表示“交通运输”，是不可数名词，通常不加 a。原句末尾的 without 后面缺少宾语，句子没有完整结束；这里改成完整表达。

× My hometown is in Ingle, which is located in New York City. It's quite a remote area that's in the suburban area and it doesn't have a good transportation to speak cities such as Taipei, but it's good for us to live in without

✓ My hometown is in Ingle, which is located in New York City. It's quite a remote area in the suburbs, and it doesn't have good transportation to nearby cities such as Taipei, but it's a good place for us to live.

句子以 without 结尾，但 without 后通常需要接名词或动名词，因此原句结构不完整。应补全意思，或删去 without 并将句子结束在完整表达处。

× It's a quite small town that's located in Neil Taipe City and it's really far away from the centre of Taipei City, the biggest city in Taiwan and it's because it takes much time to commute from the city and suburban area.

✓ It's quite a small town located in New Taipei City, and it's really far from the centre of Taipei City, the biggest city in Taiwan. It takes a long time to commute between the city and the suburbs.

表示在两个地点之间通勤，应使用 between A and B，而不是 from A and B。

× Here's I really like my hometown because it's rich in history and cultural, but I think the only disadvantage is some buildings are too old and have to have to renovate by government or a new policy that can adopt them.

✓ Yes, I really like my hometown because it's rich in history and culture. However, the only disadvantage is that some buildings are too old and need to be renovated by the government under a new policy.

Here's 不能用来引出“I really like...”这样的完整句子，应使用 Yes。disadvantage 后的内容需要用 that 引出；原句中重复的 have to 也应删去。

× Here's I really like my hometown because it's rich in history and cultural, but I think the only disadvantage is some buildings are too old and have to have to renovate by government or a new policy that can adopt them.

✓ Yes, I really like my hometown because it's rich in history and culture. However, the only disadvantage is that some buildings are too old and need to be renovated by the government under a new policy.

rich in 后面需要接名词。cultural 是形容词，应改为名词 culture。

× Here's I really like my hometown because it's rich in history and cultural, but I think the only disadvantage is some buildings are too old and have to have to renovate by government or a new policy that can adopt them.

✓ Yes, I really like my hometown because it's rich in history and culture. However, the only disadvantage is that some buildings are too old and need to be renovated by the government under a new policy.

建筑物是“被翻新”的对象，因此需要使用被动语态 be renovated，而不是主动形式 renovate。

× I really like the local markets and traditional streets because it can show our distinctive cultural and some of the vendors have have selled their handmade craft which is really unique and special for the people who is from other cities.

✓ I really like the local markets and traditional streets because they can show our distinctive culture. Some vendors have sold their handmade crafts, which are really unique and special to people who are from other cities.

distinctive 后面需要接名词；cultural 是形容词，这里应使用名词 culture。

× I really like the local markets and traditional streets because it can show our distinctive cultural and some of the vendors have have selled their handmade craft which is really unique and special for the people who is from other cities.

✓ I really like the local markets and traditional streets because they can show our distinctive culture. Some vendors have sold their handmade crafts, which are really unique and special to people who are from other cities.

现在完成时由 have/has 加过去分词构成。sell 的过去分词是 sold，不是 selled；同时原句重复使用了 have，应删去一个。

× I really like the local markets and traditional streets because it can show our distinctive cultural and some of the vendors have have selled their handmade craft which is really unique and special for the people who is from other cities.

✓ I really like the local markets and traditional streets because they can show our distinctive culture. Some vendors have sold their handmade crafts, which are really unique and special to people who are from other cities.

先行词 people 是复数，因此关系从句中应使用 are，不能使用 is。markets and streets 也是复数，后面应用 they can，而不是 it can。

× Yes, like I think some of the builders in my town is too old and have to be renuvenated immediately, so I think the government should take action to implement a new policy that can rebuild and restore our heritage because it may be unsafe, so it's a high time for government to

✓ I think some of the buildings in my town are too old and need to be renovated immediately. The government should take action to implement a new policy to restore our heritage because the buildings may be unsafe. It's high time the government took action.

some of the buildings 指多个建筑物，因此谓语动词应使用 are，不能使用 is。

× Yes, like I think some of the builders in my town is too old and have to be renuvenated immediately, so I think the government should take action to implement a new policy that can rebuild and restore our heritage because it may be unsafe, so it's a high time for government to

✓ I think some of the buildings in my town are too old and need to be renovated immediately. The government should take action to implement a new policy to restore our heritage because the buildings may be unsafe. It's high time the government took action.

句子的意思是建筑物需要被翻新，所以应使用被动结构 be renovated。原句结尾没有完成 to 后面的不定式，调整后补成完整句子。

× Yes, like I think some of the builders in my town is too old and have to be renuvenated immediately, so I think the government should take action to implement a new policy that can rebuild and restore our heritage because it may be unsafe, so it's a high time for government to

✓ I think some of the buildings in my town are too old and need to be renovated immediately. The government should take action to implement a new policy to restore our heritage because the buildings may be unsafe. It's high time the government took action.

原句以 to 结尾，后面缺少动词，属于未完成的句子。应补全句意并避免用多个 so 将过多内容串在一个句子里。

× Yes, I really enjoy living in my hometown because although there are some things have to be improved but overall the atmosphere that's created by residents is really good and comfortable for us to live there forever for a long time.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy living in my hometown because, although there are some things that have to be improved, the atmosphere created by the residents is really good and comfortable overall.

things 后面需要用 that 引出修饰它的从句。although 和 but 不能在同一个让步结构中同时使用，删除 but 并调整句子结构即可。

× Yes, I think in the future I will keep living there even when I getting older because as I say before it's far from the basic city and the atmosphere there is really good and comfortable for us. So I think it is suitable for everyone.

✓ Yes, I think I will keep living there in the future, even when I get older, because, as I said before, it's far from the big city and the atmosphere there is really good and comfortable for us. So I think it is suitable for everyone.

when 引导表示将来的时间状语从句时，通常使用一般现在时，而不是进行时。这里应说 when I get older。

× Yes, I think in the future I will keep living there even when I getting older because as I say before it's far from the basic city and the atmosphere there is really good and comfortable for us. So I think it is suitable for everyone.

✓ Yes, I think I will keep living there in the future, even when I get older, because, as I said before, it's far from the big city and the atmosphere there is really good and comfortable for us. So I think it is suitable for everyone.

as I said before 指之前已经说过的内容，因此要用 say 的过去式 said。

× My hometown Engel is located in the remote area in New Type City and it can be a suburb of the city and the atmosphere is really good for people to live in and it is quite comfortable because it always gives a sense of refreshing and it's peaceful.

✓ My hometown, Engel, is located in a remote area in New Taipei City. It can be considered a suburb of the city, and the atmosphere is really good for people to live in. It is quite comfortable because it always gives a sense of refreshment and is peaceful.

area 是可数名词单数，泛指某个偏远地区时需要使用不定冠词 a，不能说 in the remote area，除非前文已特指该地区。

× My hometown is really famous for traditional streets and local markets, lots sales, many hands craft. And because our city is old and are rich in histories. So there are a lot of local culture can shared with

✓ My hometown is really famous for its traditional streets, local markets, lots of sales, and many handmade crafts. Our city is old and rich in history, so a lot of local culture can be shared.

原句中的 lots sales 和 many hands craft 不是完整、清楚的并列成分；because 引导的部分也没有构成完整句子。应将相关内容整理成完整句子，并避免用 And 和 So 将句子拆成不完整片段。

× My hometown is really famous for traditional streets and local markets, lots sales, many hands craft. And because our city is old and are rich in histories. So there are a lot of local culture can shared with

✓ My hometown is really famous for its traditional streets, local markets, lots of sales, and many handmade crafts. Our city is old and rich in history, so a lot of local culture can be shared.

主语 our city 是单数，因此不能和 are 搭配。改为 Our city is old and rich in history。

× My hometown is really famous for traditional streets and local markets, lots sales, many hands craft. And because our city is old and are rich in histories. So there are a lot of local culture can shared with

✓ My hometown is really famous for its traditional streets, local markets, lots of sales, and many handmade crafts. Our city is old and rich in history, so a lot of local culture can be shared.

can 后面应接动词原形；被动语态需要使用 can be shared，不能省略 be。

× And our school because we learn about the world and we don't have time and curriculum to learn about and to learn about specific things like my tenth. So I think if in the future I have time I would like to get inside it too instead of

✓ At our school, we learn about the world, and we don't have time in the curriculum to learn about specific things like my hometown. So, if I have time in the future, I would like to learn more about its history, too.

原句以 And our school because 开头，缺少完整的主句；结尾的 instead of 后面也没有接宾语或动名词，导致句子不完整。调整后每个句子都有完整的主谓结构。

× Not really because my hometown is far away from the big cities so young people most live in the area that's near the city. But in my hometown, the majority of people will be elders and people who are older than me.

✓ Not really, because my hometown is far away from the big cities, so most young people live in areas near the city. But in my hometown, the majority of people are older adults and people who are older than me.

表示“大多数”的 most 应放在 young people 前面，构成 most young people；most 不应放在动词 live 前来修饰整个句子。

× Not really because my hometown is far away from the big cities so young people most live in the area that's near the city. But in my hometown, the majority of people will be elders and people who are older than me.

✓ Not really, because my hometown is far away from the big cities, so most young people live in areas near the city. But in my hometown, the majority of the people are older adults and people who are older than me.

表示“大多数人”时，应使用 the majority of the people 或 most people。不能说 the majority of people 来表达这里的特定群体。

× Not really because my hometown is far away from the big cities so young people most live in the area that's near the city. But in my hometown, the majority of people will be elders and people who are older than me.

✓ Not really, because my hometown is far away from the big cities, so most young people live in areas near the city. But in my hometown, the majority of the people are older adults and people who are older than me.

这里是在描述家乡目前的人口情况，应使用一般现在时 are，而不是表示将来的 will be。

× For me, I would say no because my city is a suburban area that's really far from the center of the city. So I think for those younger people it is good for them to pursue their career and have joined the Gen job opportunities in the city of Center.

✓ For me, I would say no, because my city is a suburban area that's really far from the city centre. I think it's difficult for young people to pursue their careers and find job opportunities in the city centre.

主语 young people 是复数，因此表示他们的职业时应使用复数 careers，而不是单数 career。