Hometown— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct small grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use one or two supporting details linked with a connector. Correct article and adjective use (e.g. "a quite peaceful" -> "quite peaceful").

Ejemplo: I come from Madhuripur, a small city known for its rivers and scenic countryside. Because it is quieter than big cities, living there feels peaceful and relaxing.

Sugerencia: Fix grammar and sentence structure: use a clear topic sentence then one or two specific details. Avoid fragments and subject–verb agreement errors (e.g. "makes it's" and "They are also has"). Use linking words like "also" or "in addition" correctly.

Ejemplo: I like Madhuripur mostly for its peaceful atmosphere and attractive scenery. In addition, it has green spaces and quiet streets, which make it relaxing, and there are good facilities such as the local Goody School.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and punctuation, and divide into two concise sentences: a direct answer about duration followed by one supporting detail. Correct place names consistently (Madhuripur vs Madhapur).

Ejemplo: I've lived in Madhuripur for most of my life, although I have travelled and stayed elsewhere for short periods. Because of that long history, I feel very attached to the town.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct short answer (Yes/No), then give specific reasons using correct grammar and linking phrases. Fix subject–verb agreement and article use (e.g. "they are have" -> "it has"; "good school" -> "good schools").

Ejemplo: Yes, it is. Madhuripur has good schools, healthcare services and employment opportunities, which together make it an attractive and comfortable place for young people.

× The environment is a quite peaceful compared to large cities which makes it a pleasant place to live.

✓ The environment is quite peaceful compared to large cities, which makes it a pleasant place to live.

'A' before 'quite peaceful' is incorrect because 'quite' modifies the adjective; use no article. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive relative clause 'which makes it a pleasant place to live.' Suggestion: remove 'a' and insert a comma.

× What I like most about my hometown is its peaceful atmosphere and beautiful scenery. Because of this green space and quiet streets makes it's a relaxing and comfortable place to live, especially for young people.

✓ What I like most about my hometown is its peaceful atmosphere and beautiful scenery. Because of these green spaces and quiet streets, it is a relaxing and comfortable place to live, especially for young people.

The original mixes sentence fragments and incorrect pronouns. 'Because of' should be followed by a noun phrase; use plural 'these green spaces' to match 'streets.' 'Makes it's' is incorrect: use 'it is' (or 'it's' as contraction) and remove 'makes' because 'Because of ... it is ...' is correct. Add comma after the introductory clause.

× They are also has lots of facilities such as Goody School.

✓ It also has lots of facilities such as Goody School.

Subject is 'My hometown' (singular), so use singular pronoun 'it' not 'they.' Also 'are has' is ungrammatical; use single verb 'has.' Suggestion: replace 'They are also has' with 'It also has.'

× I live there most of my life, I travel to and stayed in other place for short periods but Madhapur has always been my home so I feel very attached to it.

✓ I have lived there for most of my life. I have travelled and stayed in other places for short periods, but Madhuripur has always been my home, so I feel very attached to it.

Talking about life up to now requires present perfect: 'have lived' and 'have travelled.' Use plural 'places' and correct place name 'Madhuripur.' Split into sentences and add commas for clarity. Use consistent verb forms.

× Definitely they are have lot of facilities such as good school, good work opportunities, hospital and healthcare which makes the place more comfortable and good place for young people.

✓ Definitely, it has lots of facilities such as good schools, work opportunities, hospitals and healthcare, which make the place more comfortable and a good place for young people.

The subject 'my hometown' is singular; use 'it' not 'they.' Remove 'are have' and use 'has.' Use plural nouns ('schools', 'hospitals') or appropriate articles. 'Which make' must agree with plural noun 'facilities.' Add 'a' before 'good place.' Punctuation: use commas to separate clauses.