Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, accurate and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (job title and sector), correct article/noun phrases, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details about responsibilities with linking words (for example, 'mainly' or 'I mainly...').

Ejemplo: I work as a compensation and benefits specialist at a multinational chemical company. I mainly review employees' pay and design benefits packages, so they match staff needs and local regulations.

Sugerencia: Lead with a direct, short answer naming the company and location. Then give one or two specific reasons you like it, using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also') and correct phrasing ('commute from home' -> 'commute from my home').

Ejemplo: I work at BSF, a multinational chemical company, and my office is in Kuala Lumpur. I like it because the office is modern and the culture is very supportive, and it’s easy for me to commute from my home.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct awkward phrasing. Use linking words ('because', 'and') and give specific supporting details such as long service, pay/benefits, and location. Avoid hesitations and ensure grammar agreement ('benefits and salary package' -> 'a competitive salary and benefits package').

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it’s a good place to work because many employees stay long-term, and the company offers a competitive salary and benefits package. Also, the location is very convenient.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement (e.g., 'Yes, I like it') and avoid strange word choices ('confident' -> 'convenient'). Use linking words ('because', 'so') and be concise while giving specific commuting details and the hybrid arrangement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really like it because commuting is convenient — it only takes two or three train stops, about 15–20 minutes. Also, the job is hybrid, so I work at the office twice a week and the rest of the time from home.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence about your plan, correct grammar ('I haven't got my master degree' -> 'I haven't got my master's degree' or 'I don't have a master's degree yet'), and be more precise about timing and intentions. Use connecting words ('so', 'after') and avoid overusing 'maybe'.

Ejemplo: I plan to continue my studies because I don't have a master's degree yet. Next year I hope to study in Europe for a master's program, and after graduating I intend to return to corporate work.

× I'm working in one of the chemical industry in the city.

✓ I'm working in one of the chemical industries in the city.

The phrase 'one of the' requires a plural noun ('industries') because it refers to one item within a group. Use plural after 'one of the' to match the expression.

× I work as a compensation and specialist benefit.

✓ I work as a compensation and benefits specialist.

Job titles typically use 'X specialist' and the compound 'compensation and benefits' should be plural. The correct order is 'compensation and benefits specialist' to reflect the established phrase.

× So what I sorry a compensation and benefits specialist.

✓ Sorry, I meant a compensation and benefits specialist.

The original sentence lacks correct structure and contains a misused word 'sorry'. Use the common repair phrase 'Sorry, I meant...' to correct oneself. This yields a clear, grammatical sentence.

× So what I do is I review the employees compensation and provide relevant benefits that actually meets their needs.

✓ So what I do is review the employees' compensation and provide relevant benefits that actually meet their needs.

'Employees' is a plural possessive and needs the apostrophe. The verb should agree with the plural noun 'benefits' (or implied 'they'), so use 'meet' not 'meets'. Also remove the redundant 'I' after 'is' to match the cleft construction 'what I do is review...'.

× I work in BSF, It's a multinational chemical company.

✓ I work in BSF. It's a multinational chemical company.

Replace the comma with a period to separate independent clauses or use a semicolon. Also ensure capitalization after the period is correct. This fixes run-on punctuation.

× My office is based in KL.

✓ My office is based in KL.

This sentence is acceptable; 'based in KL' is correct. No change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× I like the current office because it's very modern and I love the environment.

✓ I like the current office because it's very modern and I love the environment.

Sentence is grammatical. No change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× It's very supportive and collaborative and it's easy also for me to commute to work from home.

✓ It's very supportive and collaborative, and it's also easy for me to commute to work from home.

Place 'also' before the adjective phrase 'easy' for natural adverb placement and add a comma before the conjunction to join the two independent clauses.

× Yes, I find of I'll find the overall experiences very positive.

✓ Yes, I find the overall experience very positive.

Remove extraneous words 'of I'll find' which are ungrammatical. Use singular 'experience' as an uncountable noun when speaking generally. Use present simple 'find' to describe a current opinion.

× Most of the employees there have been working in the company for many years and they offer a competitive benefits and salary package and also the location is very strategic.

✓ Most of the employees there have been working at the company for many years, and they offer a competitive benefits and salary package; also, the location is very strategic.

Use 'at the company' instead of 'in the company' when referring to employment. Add punctuation to separate ideas. Note: 'competitive benefits and salary package' is acceptable; consider 'a competitive salary and benefits package' for natural word order.

× Yes, it is very confident for me to travel or commute to work.

✓ Yes, I feel very comfortable commuting to work.

'Confident' is not appropriate for describing ease of travel; use 'comfortable'. Change structure to 'I feel very comfortable commuting to work' which is natural English.

× I only need to take a train for only two or three stations so I can reach in the office within 15 to 20 minutes.

✓ I only need to take a train for two or three stations, so I can reach the office within 15 to 20 minutes.

Remove the repeated 'only'. Use 'reach the office' (no preposition 'in'). Add comma before 'so'.

× And it's actually hybrid, so I only come to the office twice a week and the remaining three days I spend it at home.

✓ And it's actually hybrid, so I only come to the office twice a week and spend the remaining three days at home.

Do not use 'spend it at home'; say 'spend the remaining three days at home'. This corrects object use and word order.

× I'm actually planning to continue my study.

✓ I'm actually planning to continue my studies.

Use the plural 'studies' or 'my study' with a modifier; 'continue my studies' is the common collocation when referring to further education.

× I haven't got my master degree and I have been dreaming about it since I graduated from my bachelor's degree.

✓ I haven't got my master's degree, and I have been dreaming about it since I graduated with my bachelor's degree.

Use possessive form 'master's degree' and say 'graduated with my bachelor's degree'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× So next year I plan to go abroad, maybe to Europe to continue my study and maybe after that I'll come back to corporate work.

✓ So next year I plan to go abroad, maybe to Europe, to continue my studies, and maybe after that I'll return to corporate work.

Use 'continue my studies' (plural), add commas to separate phrases, and 'return to corporate work' is a more natural collocation than 'come back to corporate work'.