Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và trôi chảy hơn; tránh lặp từ và bổ sung chi tiết ngắn gọn. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thêm mạo từ khi cần, chia động từ). (2) Nói ngắn gọn một câu chủ đề rồi thêm một chi tiết hỗ trợ. (3) Tránh dùng từ 'just' quá nhiều và dùng từ liên kết nếu thêm chi tiết.

Ejemplo: I'm a student. I'm 16 and I attend Tingmin High School, where I'm currently studying science subjects.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng chứa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, số ít/số nhiều và trật tự từ; cần trả lời trực tiếp, sửa động từ, danh từ sở hữu và làm rõ ý bằng liên từ. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng 'school' thay vì 'schools' nếu nói về trường mình. (2) Chia động từ đúng: 'has', 'are trained' hoặc 'who have advanced qualifications'. (3) Dùng liên từ như 'so' hợp lý và tránh câu dài không mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I study at Tingmin High School. The school has many well-qualified teachers, so students have plenty of opportunities to learn and explore different subjects.

Sugerencia: Ý rõ ràng nhưng lặp từ và nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng; cần cấu trúc mạch lạc với linking words. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn. (2) Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'and' để nối lý do. (3) Thay 'have more chance' bằng 'have more opportunities' và tránh lặp 'can'.

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a good place to study because students have many opportunities to interact with their peers and receive useful advice from experienced teachers.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời tốt có ví dụ, nhưng có lỗi chính tả ('came' nên là 'calm') và một vài cấu trúc cần mượt mà hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa từ sai chính tả và dùng tính từ phù hợp. (2) Giữ câu ngắn gọn, dùng linking phrase 'for example' hợp lý. (3) Tránh lặp từ 'because' nhiều lần bằng cách kết hợp lý do và ví dụ.

Ejemplo: Yes, absolutely. I enjoy being at my school because the many trees create a calm atmosphere; for example, I often sit outside during breaks to relax and focus better.

Sugerencia: Nội dung rõ nhưng ngữ pháp và diễn đạt kém; cần sửa ngữ pháp (chia động từ, cấu trúc 'want to'), sắp xếp câu và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Chia đúng: 'My future plan is to become a teacher.' (2) Dùng 'want to share' và sửa lỗi đại từ 'their'/'them'. (3) Thêm chi tiết về loại học sinh hoặc môn học để cụ thể hóa mục tiêu.

Ejemplo: My future plan is to become a teacher because I want to share my knowledge and help students learn. For example, I hope to teach English to secondary students and offer extra help to those who struggle.

× I am student in Tingmin high school.

✓ I am a student at Tingmin High School.

Incorrect article and singular noun usage: 'student' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Use 'at' for schools and capitalize proper noun. Suggestion: add 'a' before singular countable nouns and use 'at' for location of school.

× my schools has many teachers who trains with advanced quality qualifications so students can broaden all horizons.

✓ My school has many teachers who train with advanced qualifications, so students can broaden their horizons.

Subject-verb agreement: 'school' should be singular to match context and take 'has'. 'Teachers' (plural) requires verb 'train' not 'trains'. 'Advanced quality qualifications' is awkward; use 'advanced qualifications'. Possessive pronoun 'their' needed for 'horizons'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and use correct possessive pronoun.

× students can broaden all horizons.

✓ students can broaden their horizons.

Wrong determiner and redundancy: 'all horizons' is unnatural; 'their horizons' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: use common expressions like 'broaden their horizons.'

× My future work plans is uh become a teacher because I want share my knowledge with other people and become more helpful.

✓ My future work plan is to become a teacher because I want to share my knowledge with other people and be more helpful.

Number agreement and verb form: 'plans' (plural) conflicts with singular verb 'is'; use 'plan' or change verb to 'are'. After 'is' express purpose with 'to' + infinitive: 'to become'. Missing 'to' before 'share'. Repeated 'become' awkward; use 'be'. Suggestion: match subject and verb number and use infinitive forms after linking verbs.

× For example, when students have problem, I can give their them useful.

✓ For example, when students have a problem, I can give them useful advice.

Incorrect and redundant pronouns: 'their them' is wrong; choose 'them'. Missing article: 'a problem'. 'Useful' needs a noun to modify; add 'advice'. Suggestion: use correct object pronoun and include necessary articles and nouns.

× students can uh, have more chance to communicate with other students and uh, can have more useful advice from teachers.

✓ students can have more chances to communicate with other students and receive more useful advice from teachers.

Collocation and verb form: use plural 'chances' after 'more'. 'Have advice' is awkward — use 'receive' or 'get' for advice. Suggestion: choose verbs that collocate with nouns and pluralize countable nouns when appropriate.

× I really like working at my school because there are many trees, uh, which create a came and present atmosphere.

✓ I really like studying at my school because there are many trees, which create a calm and pleasant atmosphere.

Word choice and article use: 'working' is odd for a student—use 'studying'. 'came and present' are incorrect words; likely meant 'calm and pleasant'. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and ensure verbs match the speaker's role.

× I can give their them useful.

✓ I can give them useful advice.

Pronoun and missing noun: 'their them' is incorrect; use 'them'. 'Useful' must modify a noun like 'advice'. Suggestion: use direct object pronouns and provide the noun being described.

× I really like working at my school because there are many trees, uh, which create a came and present atmosphere.

✓ I really like studying at my school because there are many trees, which create a calm and pleasant atmosphere.

'There are' is fine but surrounding words were wrong. Ensure 'there are' is followed by plural noun; here 'many trees' is correct. Correct the adjectives to 'calm' and 'pleasant'. Suggestion: check adjective spelling and collocations.