Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep your answer concise and correct tense and avoid mixing past tense with present facts. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your status, then add one or two specific supporting details (course focus, university, interests). Use present simple for ongoing facts and link ideas with a short connector.

Ejemplo: I am a final-year B.Tech student in Computer Science and Engineering at Navrational University. I focus on artificial intelligence and new technologies, and I’m currently working on a project related to machine learning.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating previous information. Use present tense and shorter sentences. Provide a clear statement that you do not work, then briefly expand with one specific detail about your studies or interests and a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Avoid long, vague claims like 'rising all over the globe.'

Ejemplo: I don’t work at the moment; I’m a full-time student. However, I’m very interested in software development and AI because these fields offer strong career opportunities and practical projects I can join.

Sugerencia: First, clarify whether you mean 'work' or 'study' since you are a student. Give a direct yes/no and then one or two specific reasons (facilities, environment, faculty). Use clear vocabulary (e.g., 'calm atmosphere', 'good facilities') and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, it’s a good place to study. The campus has a calm atmosphere and good facilities, such as modern labs and quiet study areas, which help me focus on my academics.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repeating earlier points. Use one linking phrase to introduce a specific benefit (e.g., 'For example'). Mention a concrete facility or person and how it helps you (library, supportive tutors). Correct word choice ('knowledge' uncountable) and keep to two sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like it a lot because the tutors are very supportive and I can get one-on-one help when needed. For example, the university library and quiet study rooms make it easy to prepare for exams and projects.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your career goal, then add one specific plan or step (e.g., internship, skills to learn, technologies). Avoid trailing off and incomplete sentences. Use parallel wording: 'UI/UX design and front-end development' and mention concrete tools or timelines.

Ejemplo: I plan to start my career in UI/UX design and front-end development after graduation. For example, I’m preparing by learning React and Figma and applying for internships next semester to gain practical experience.

× Currently, I am a student pursuing the final year of B.Tech in Computer Science and Engineering at Navrational University.

✓ Currently, I am a student pursuing the final year of a B.Tech in Computer Science and Engineering at Navrational University.

Include the indefinite article 'a' before 'B.Tech' to follow English noun phrase rules when referring to a single degree; this is a present tense statement so keep present continuous 'am ... pursuing'.

× I had a strong interest in new technology and artificial intelligence.

✓ I have a strong interest in new technology and artificial intelligence.

The original uses past tense 'had' while the student means a current, ongoing interest. Change to present simple 'have' to match the present-tense context.

× As I said earlier, I am a student and had a very strong interest in software development and artificial intelligence because nowadays artificial intelligence is becoming more popular and rising in all over the globe and it has a great opportunities in future careers also.

✓ As I said earlier, I am a student and have a strong interest in software development and artificial intelligence because artificial intelligence is becoming more popular worldwide and offers great opportunities for future careers.

Multiple issues: past tense 'had' should be present 'have' (present tense issue correction applied within sentence structure fix), 'rising in all over the globe' is ungrammatical—use 'becoming more popular worldwide', and 'it has a great opportunities' has article/number mismatch; change to 'offers great opportunities'. Rewording streamlines redundancy and corrects tense, preposition and article errors.

× Yes, it's a good place to study there and it's a quite nice MB ambience and atmosphere that you concentrate your your academics and learn new things there.

✓ Yes, it's a good place to study, and it has a quite nice, calm ambience and atmosphere where you can concentrate on your academics and learn new things.

Problems fixed: 'it's a quite nice MB ambience' is unclear—replace with 'quite nice, calm ambience'; remove repeated 'your'. Use 'concentrate on' (preposition correction) and 'where you can' to form a correct relative clause. Also remove redundant 'there'.

× Yes, definitely. As I said that it is a good place to concentrate and learn and to gain knowledge from the tutors or faculties. It also provides a library which we can learn and gain new knowledges.

✓ Yes, definitely. As I said, it is a good place to concentrate, learn, and gain knowledge from the tutors and faculty. It also has a library where we can study and gain new knowledge.

Corrections: remove unnecessary 'that' after 'said' and streamline verb forms. Use 'faculty' (uncountable or collective) not 'faculties' for staff, and avoid plural 'knowledges' (uncountable noun 'knowledge'). Use 'has a library' and 'where we can study' for clearer expression.

× I want to start my career in Design UI, UX as a front end developer and I already have like the.

✓ I want to start my career in UI/UX design as a front-end developer, and I already have some experience.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Reorder to 'UI/UX design' and hyphenate 'front-end developer'. Replace vague 'I already have like the' with a complete phrase such as 'I already have some experience' to make the sentence grammatical and meaningful.