Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “I’m currently a student”), avoid filler words (uh, um), correct small grammar issues (e.g., “I have just finished my +2 examinations” or “I recently completed my +2 exams”), and use one or two supporting details about plans. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I’m currently a student. I recently completed my +2 examinations and I’m planning to study abroad. At the moment I’m preparing for university applications and visa procedures.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repeating the question. Use one clear sentence to state you don’t work, then give a specific reason with linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”). Remove hesitations and shorten to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don’t work at the moment because I’m preparing for my bachelor’s studies in South Korea. Therefore I’m focusing on visa and application procedures rather than taking a job here.

Sugerencia: Be specific about which place you mean (if hypothetical or past). Use one topic sentence stating your opinion, then give 1–2 concise reasons with linking words like “because” and avoid repetition. Replace vague phrases ("interesting place") with clearer adjectives ("pleasant", "supportive").

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it’s a good place to work because the atmosphere is calm and employees aren’t pressured. For example, managers encourage teamwork and allow flexible schedules, which makes the job less stressful.

Sugerencia: Keep it concise: state your attitude in one sentence, then provide specific supporting details (colleagues, manager, tasks) and a clear future intention. Remove repetition and hesitations, and correct awkward phrasing ("give my two to three years" → "work there for two to three years").

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to work there because colleagues are supportive and the manager is friendly. I feel comfortable in that environment, so I would be happy to work there for two or three years.

Sugerencia: Give a clear plan: start with a topic sentence outlining your main goal, then add specific steps (e.g., take IELTS, apply for universities, find part-time work). Use linking words ("first", "then", "after that") and avoid fillers. Be specific about the country or type of work if possible.

Ejemplo: My plan is to study and then work abroad, particularly in South Korea. First, I’m preparing for the IELTS exam; then I will apply for bachelor’s programs and look for part-time work while studying, with the aim of finding a full-time job after graduation.

× Uh, right now I'm not involved in any kind of UH work.

✓ Uh, right now I'm not involved in any kind of work.

Redundant filler 'UH' should be removed for clarity. The present continuous 'I'm not involved' is correct; remove unnecessary interjection to make the sentence natural.

× I am a student who recently cleared my +2 examinations and I am seeking for abroad studies for my future.

✓ I am a student who recently cleared my +2 examinations and I am seeking to study abroad for my future.

Incorrect verb+preposition combination 'seeking for abroad studies' is ungrammatical. Use the verb phrase 'seeking to study abroad' or 'seeking opportunities to study abroad'. This corrects verb pattern and placement of 'abroad'.

× But now I'm not in doing any kind of work, I'm a student.

✓ But right now I'm not doing any kind of work; I'm a student.

Incorrect use of 'in doing' is ungrammatical. The present continuous 'I'm not doing' correctly expresses current non-employment. Also combine clauses with a semicolon or period for clarity.

× I said I don't work and I'm not involved in any kind of work right now.

✓ I said I don't work; I'm not involved in any kind of work right now.

Redundant repetition can be streamlined. The original is understandable but using semicolon improves structure. No tense change needed; present simple/continuous are appropriate.

× Uh, since I am, uh, preparing for my bachelor's studies in South Korea, I don't think I would do any kind of work in Nepal right now since I'm preparing for my visa.

✓ Since I am preparing for my bachelor's studies in South Korea, I don't think I will do any work in Nepal right now because I'm preparing for my visa.

Mixing conditional/modal 'would' with present intention is incorrect. Use 'will' for future intention. Also remove filler 'uh' and duplicate 'since'; replace second 'since' with 'because' for clarity.

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Is it a good place to work?

No grammatical error; sentence is correct as a question about suitability of the place to work.

× Yeah, it's definitely a really interesting place to work.

✓ Yeah, it's definitely a very interesting place to work.

'Really' is informal but acceptable; however 'very' is slightly more appropriate in this context. Tense and structure are correct.

× I really love the working environment of the place and it's really peaceful working there because we don't, we are not forced and we are not pressurized for doing work and only work.

✓ I really love the working environment there, and it's peaceful because we are not forced or pressured to do work all the time.

Awkward phrasing 'working environment of the place' and 'pressurized for doing work and only work' should be corrected. Use 'there' and 'forced or pressured to do work all the time'. 'Pressurized' is less common than 'pressured'. Simplify repetition for clarity.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Would you like the place where you work?

This question is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× I definitely love the place where I work because the colleagues are very supportive and the manager is also really, uh, friendly.

✓ I definitely love the place where I work because my colleagues are very supportive and the manager is also really friendly.

Replace 'the colleagues' with 'my colleagues' for natural possession. Remove filler 'uh'. Tense and verb forms are correct.

× So it's not a place where I get suffocated working.

✓ So it's not a place where I feel suffocated while working.

'Get suffocated working' is unnatural. Use 'feel suffocated while working' to express the emotional/mental sensation. Maintain present tense.

× I love the working environment of the place and I would love to work there.

✓ I love the working environment there, and I would love to work there.

Streamline 'working environment of the place' to 'working environment there'. The modal 'would love' is acceptable for expressing desire.

× I would love to give my two to three years now.

✓ I would love to commit two to three years now.

'Give my two to three years' is unnatural in English. Use verbs like 'commit' or 'spend' with time periods: 'commit two to three years' or 'spend two to three years'.

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

Question is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× Uh, talking about my future, I am planning to do my best in some foreign countries, I would say.

✓ Talking about my future, I am planning to do my best in some foreign countries, I would say.

Remove filler 'Uh'. The sentence is slightly awkward; consider 'I plan to try my best in some foreign countries.' The original mixes phrases but is understandable; present continuous 'am planning' is acceptable.

× So I am preparing my IELTS examination, uh, for that I am doing really well and I would love to work there in where I study.

✓ I am preparing for my IELTS examination; for that, I am studying hard, and I would love to work where I study.

Correct preposition: 'preparing for' not 'preparing my'. Replace filler 'uh'. 'Doing really well' is vague; 'studying hard' is clearer. 'Work there in where I study' is ungrammatical; use 'work where I study' or 'work in the country where I study'.