Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize information logically: start with a clear topic sentence (current status), then give one or two relevant supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: I have finished a bachelor's degree in Business Administration and completed two internships in human resources. Currently, I am taking professional certification courses to strengthen my HR skills while I prepare for postgraduate applications.

Sugerencia: Directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence about your current situation, then give brief supporting details using linking words. Fix unclear phrases and avoid awkward expressions.

Ejemplo: I am not working at the moment; I am preparing to study for a master's degree abroad. At the moment, I am completing application forms and gathering documents required for admission.

Sugerencia: Clarify which place you mean (current or last) and give specific reasons why it was good, using linking words to connect ideas. Correct grammar (e.g., 'offices' → 'office', 'for the rest of my life' if appropriate).

Ejemplo: If you mean my last internship, yes — it was a great place to work. The office environment was professional and colleagues were supportive, which helped me learn quickly and feel comfortable in the team.

Sugerencia: This answer is clear and relevant but a bit repetitive. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one specific example of what made the place attractive. Use linking words to avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. The office had a friendly atmosphere and supportive colleagues; for example, my supervisor gave regular feedback that helped me improve my HR skills quickly.

Sugerencia: Make your main plan clear and give one or two concrete reasons. Correct grammar ('get settled abroad', 'provide a good education for my younger sister') and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words for clarity.

Ejemplo: My plan is to move abroad to study for a master's degree and gain international work experience. This would allow me to earn better and support my younger sister's education while developing professionally.

× I I have completed my bachelor's in business administration and I have completed my a couple of internships in human resources during my entrepreneur of graduation.

✓ I have completed my bachelor's degree in Business Administration and I completed a couple of internships in human resources during my period of graduation.

Errors: unnecessary repeated 'I', wrong article before 'couple' ('a couple' is correct but placement was incorrect), missing word 'degree', incorrect phrase 'entrepreneur of graduation'. Suggestion: Remove the duplicate 'I', add 'degree' after bachelor's, use 'completed' once for clarity, use 'a couple of internships', and replace 'entrepreneur of graduation' with 'period of graduation' or 'during my final year'.

× Well, as I told you that I have just come to your mind and there is no plan for working for some time.

✓ Well, as I told you, I have just arrived in the city and I do not plan to work for some time.

Errors: 'come to your mind' is incorrect idiomatically; sentence structure awkward and tense/auxiliary issues. Suggestion: Use 'arrived in the city' or 'returned to the city' to convey location, remove unnecessary 'that' after 'told you', and use 'do not plan to work' for present intention.

× I wanted to study my masters program from abroad and I am filling up the applications and doing all the stuff which is required.

✓ I want to study for my master's degree abroad and I am filling out applications and doing all the required tasks.

Errors: tense mismatch ('wanted' should be 'want' for current intention), 'masters' needs possessive apostrophe and 'degree', 'study from abroad' should be 'study abroad', 'filling up' is nonstandard for applications—use 'filling out', and 'all the stuff which is required' should be 'all the required tasks'. Suggestion: Use present tense for current plans and standard collocations.

× So in my last internship I got a very good offices and the people which I met in during my internships are very amazing.

✓ So in my last internship I had a very good office and the people I met during my internships were very pleasant.

Errors: 'offices' (plural) should be 'office' (singular) to match 'my last internship'; extra words 'in' and wrong relative pronoun 'which' for people. Also tense consistency: 'got' is awkward—use 'had' or 'worked in'. Suggestion: Use singular 'office', remove 'in', use 'people I met', and keep past tense consistently.

× I would wish to work there for full of my life.

✓ I would like to work there for the rest of my life.

Errors: incorrect modal phrasing 'would wish' and wrong expression 'for full of my life'. Suggestion: Use 'would like to' or 'want to', and idiomatic phrase 'for the rest of my life'.

× During my last internship, I had a very good office and great ambience.

✓ During my last internship, I had a very good office and a great ambience.

Error: missing indefinite article 'a' before 'great ambience'. Suggestion: Add 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatical.

× Also, I met some amazing colleagues.

✓ Also, I met some amazing colleagues.

No grammatical error requiring change under provided list; sentence is correct. (Kept for completeness.)

× The team was very supportive and professional, so I would happily work there for the rest of my life.

✓ The team was very supportive and professional, so I would happily work there for the rest of my life.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; tense and modality suit hypothetical preference. (No change needed.)

× I wanted to get settled in abroad so that I can survive a great quality education to my younger sister and however, international experience is overall an amazing experience in working as a professional there.

✓ I want to settle abroad so that I can provide a high-quality education for my younger sister. Also, gaining international work experience would be an excellent professional opportunity.

Errors: tense mismatch 'wanted' should be 'want' for current plan; 'get settled in abroad' is awkward—use 'settle abroad'; 'survive a great quality education to my younger sister' is incorrect; use 'provide a high-quality education for my younger sister'; run-on sentence and awkward phrasing at the end—split into two sentences and use 'gaining international work experience' and 'would be' for conditional/prospective sense. Suggestion: Use present tense for plans, correct verbs 'settle' and 'provide', and break into clear sentences.