Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence and give one brief supporting detail. Correct grammar: use present continuous or simple present consistently, and say "I study at college" or "I'm a college student."

Ejemplo: I'm a college student. I study law and I'm currently in my second year, focusing on family law courses.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct tense and simplify the structure. Mention your current status (studying/working) and explain briefly how it relates to your goal. Avoid redundant words and run-on sentences.

Ejemplo: I work in my hometown while I study law. I'm training toward becoming a family lawyer, so I assist local families with legal paperwork and advice.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion sentence then support it with specific reasons. Use correct collocations ("satisfying workplace") and avoid repetition. Limit to two supporting points linked with a connector like "because" or "and."

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a good place to work because it's in my hometown, so I can go home every day and spend time with my family. Also, the atmosphere at work is friendly and satisfying.

Sugerencia: Be concise and natural. Start with a topic sentence expressing your feeling, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Correct pronoun reference: say "I like my job" not "I like his job."

Ejemplo: Yes, I like working there. Because it's close to my home I can spend time with my family, and my boss is very supportive, which makes the job enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Give a clear plan statement and provide specific details about the type of law, steps you will take, or outcomes you hope to achieve. Use natural phrasing like "answer their legal questions" or "resolve family disputes."

Ejemplo: I plan to become a family lawyer. I want to specialize in divorce and child custody cases and help families resolve disputes and understand their legal options.

× I'm a student now, I study in a college.

✓ I'm a student now; I study at a college.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect for attending an institution; use 'at' for schools/colleges. Also replace the comma splice with a semicolon or conjunction to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'I'm a student now, and I study at a college.'

× I'm working in my hometown to be a lawyer because I started in my university for law in four years and I specialize in family law, so I help help local families with legal issues.

✓ I'm working in my hometown to become a lawyer because I started law at my university four years ago, and I specialize in family law, so I help local families with legal issues.

Multiple issues: 'to be a lawyer' is better expressed as 'to become a lawyer' (infinitive purpose). 'Started in my university for law in four years' is ungrammatical; correct to 'started law at my university four years ago' to indicate when the study began. 'Specialize' fits present simple as ongoing fact, and duplicate 'help' removed. Use commas and conjunctions to join clauses clearly.

× Sure, because my workplace is my hometown, I can go back to home every day and I have a satisfaction workplace to work.

✓ Sure, because my workplace is in my hometown, I can go back home every day and I have a satisfying workplace.

Use 'in my hometown' to indicate location. 'Go back to home' is incorrect; use 'go back home'. 'A satisfaction workplace to work' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'satisfying' to describe the workplace. Avoid redundant 'to work'.

× Yes, it's a good place to work because my workplace is my hometown. I can go back to my home every day and I can spend time with my family. And my boss is very nice, so I like his job.

✓ Yes, it's a good place to work because my workplace is in my hometown. I can go back home every day and spend time with my family. My boss is very nice, so I like my job.

Use 'in my hometown' for location and 'go back home' rather than 'go back to my home'. Remove redundant 'I can' repetition by combining verbs. 'I like his job' incorrectly refers to the boss's job; the student should say 'my job' to indicate they like their own job.

× I plan to be a lawyer in the future and help people solve their questions about their families and other lawyer questions.

✓ I plan to be a lawyer in the future and help people with family legal issues and other legal questions.

Phrase 'solve their questions about their families' is awkward; use 'help people with family legal issues'. 'Other lawyer questions' is unnatural; use 'other legal questions'. Maintain parallel structure with 'help people with X and Y'.