Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct minor grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "I'm actually" and "in my profession" together).

Ejemplo: I work as a medical doctor. In addition to clinical practice at the university clinic, I also teach professionalism to UH students as a member of the academic staff.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatically correct sentence naming the workplace and add one specific detail. Use correct noun forms and reduce redundancy ('both of them' unnecessary).

Ejemplo: I work at Chief University, an academic institution that combines teaching and clinical practice. It has both medical departments and training facilities for students.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: start with a clear opinion, then give two specific supporting points using linking words. Correct grammar and remove hesitations. Use concrete examples instead of vague phrases like 'every necessary materials are affordable'.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work. For example, colleagues are friendly and conflicts are rare, which makes teamwork smooth. Also, the facilities are well-maintained and senior staff are cooperative and well-managed.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, then support it with two concise, specific reasons. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., 'it suits my skills' not 'it's capable with my skills').

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because it suits my skills and offers clear opportunities for promotion. In addition, the good facilities make my clinical and teaching duties easier.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence about your plans, then list one or two specific goals using linking words. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'do not stop' or 'haven't stopped') and more precise language for ambition.

Ejemplo: I plan to continue advancing my career. Specifically, I aim to work in larger tertiary hospitals or institutions and to secure a higher salary that matches my experience and responsibilities.

× I'm actually a medical doctor in my profession.

✓ I am actually a medical doctor by profession.

The preposition 'in' with 'my profession' is incorrect; 'by profession' is the standard collocation to state one's occupation. Also contracting 'I'm' is acceptable in speech, but 'I am' is clearer in written correction. Use 'by profession' to be idiomatic.

× Currently I wear 2 hats.

✓ Currently I wear two hats.

Use words for small numbers in formal writing; the structure 'wear two hats' is idiomatic and correct. Replacing the digit with the word adheres to style and avoids possible formatting issues.

× I'm teaching UH students professionalism as I'm a member of academic staff and besides that I'm working in the clinic of the university practicing my clinical skills.

✓ I teach UH students professionalism as I am a member of the academic staff, and I also work in the university clinic where I practice my clinical skills.

Mixed tenses and missing articles cause coherence problems. Use present simple 'I teach' for habitual actions and 'I also work' for another regular activity. Add the definite article 'the' before 'academic staff' and reorder with a relative clause 'where I practice' for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× I'm working in academic institution Chief university which have both academic activities and clinical practice both of them.

✓ I work at Chief University, an academic institution that has both academic activities and clinical practice.

Use present simple 'I work' for a permanent job. Add the article 'an' and the relative pronoun 'that' with correct verb agreement 'has'. Also replace 'in' with 'at' for institutions, and remove redundant phrase 'both of them'.

× Actually, yes, it has a good environment, people dealing with each other friendly who's no who's a little conflicts almost absence or there is there is no conflicts at all.

✓ Actually, yes, it has a good environment; people interact with each other in a friendly way, and there are almost no conflicts, or sometimes no conflicts at all.

Original sentence mixes structures and has incorrect relative clause and quantifier use. Use 'people interact with each other in a friendly way' (verb + adverbial phrase) and 'there are almost no conflicts' for correct grammar and quantifier placement. Avoid 'who's no' which is ungrammatical.

× Facilities are are good and every necessary materials are affordable at any time.

✓ Facilities are good and all necessary materials are available at any time.

Use 'all' instead of 'every' with plural 'materials'; 'available' is more appropriate than 'affordable at any time' (which confuses cost and availability). Also remove the duplicated 'are'.

× The senior staff is so cooperative and they are excellent in management.

✓ The senior staff are very cooperative, and they are excellent at management.

Collective noun 'staff' can take plural verb 'are' in British English; ensure consistency. Use 'excellent at' rather than 'excellent in' for skills, and 'very' instead of 'so' for formality.

× Yes, I do like otherwise I will change my position.

✓ Yes, I do like it; otherwise I would change my position.

Mixes present preference with conditional future. Use conditional 'would change' to express hypothetical consequence. Add 'it' after 'like' to complete the verb's object.

× But I like my work it's it's capable with my my skills and it gives me a promotions in my career and they are being have a good facilities and materials which facilitate my works very easily.

✓ I like my work because it matches my skills and gives me opportunities for promotion in my career, and the workplace has good facilities and materials that make my work easier.

Original has run-on sentence, repeated words, incorrect collocations ('capable with my skills'), and incorrect verb forms ('gives me a promotions', 'they are being have'). Break into clauses, use 'matches my skills', 'opportunities for promotion', 'has good facilities', and 'make my work easier' for correct grammar and clarity.

× My ambitions in my career doesn't stop and I'm looking for better situations, bigger institutions, tertiary hospitals and definitely I'm looking for a higher salary.

✓ My ambitions in my career do not stop, and I am looking for better opportunities, larger institutions or tertiary hospitals, and definitely a higher salary.

Subject-verb agreement: 'ambitions' is plural, so use 'do not' not 'doesn't'. Replace 'situations' with 'opportunities' for correct collocation, 'bigger' with 'larger' for formality, and streamline the list. Keep present progressive 'I am looking' for current plans.