Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatically accurate: use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting details. Limit yourself to up to 3–4 sentences. Replace awkward phrasing like “recover their illness” with “help them recover” and avoid repetition (e.g., “working this job”).

Ejemplo: I work as a doctor at a local hospital. I have been doing this for two years. My main responsibility is looking after patients and helping them recover from illnesses.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and use precise vocabulary. Say “working at this hospital” not “working this hospital.” Explain reasons clearly and avoid unclear phrases like “hear many people” or “community chart.” Use linking words (for example, because/so) to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I work at a general hospital about ten minutes from my home. I have worked at this hospital for two years, and I enjoy it because I meet many different patients and can serve my local community.

Sugerencia: Organise into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Fix grammar and unclear phrases: say “my commute is short, so I save time and feel less stressed.” Replace “My staff already freely” with something like “My colleagues are friendly and supportive.”

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a great place to work. My commute is short, so I save time and feel less stressed, and my colleagues are friendly and the hospital has good facilities.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a complete, specific example. Correct grammar (plural agreement and incomplete sentence). Use linking words such as “for example” and finish thoughts: “They help me when I have questions or a heavy workload.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because it is comfortable and close to home. For example, my colleagues are very friendly and help me when I have questions or a heavy workload.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, realistic plan with correct grammar and specific details. Avoid vague or ungrammatical phrases. Use linking words to show purpose (so that/to) and ensure verbs agree with subjects.

Ejemplo: In the future I plan to continue training and specialise in internal medicine so I can better help my patients recover and improve their quality of life.

× I've been working this job for two years.

✓ I've been working in this job for two years.

Preposition 'in' is required with 'working this job' to indicate employment context. Use 'working in this job' or better 'working in this hospital' or 'working as a doctor' to be natural. Suggestion: say 'I've been working as a doctor for two years' or 'I've been working at this hospital for two years.'

× My main responsibility is taking care of my patients and recover their illness.

✓ My main responsibility is taking care of my patients and helping them recover from their illnesses.

After 'is' followed by noun phrase use gerund 'taking'. Parallel structure requires 'helping them recover' rather than base verb 'recover'. Also use 'them' (pronoun) and plural 'illnesses' or 'their illness' consistently. Suggestion: use parallel gerunds and include pronoun: 'taking care of my patients and helping them recover from their illnesses.'

× I work at a hospital not far from where I live.

✓ I work at a hospital not far from where I live.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. (No preposition error.)

× I have been working this hospital for two years.

✓ I have been working at this hospital for two years.

The verb phrase 'working' needs the preposition 'at' to link to 'this hospital'. Without 'at' the sentence is ungrammatical. Suggestion: 'I have been working at this hospital for two years.'

× I enjoy the job because I can hear many people and the community chart.

✓ I enjoy the job because I can help many people and serve the community.

'Hear many people' and 'community chart' are incorrect collocations. Likely intended 'help many people' and 'serve the community' or 'community health chart' is unclear. Replace with natural verbs and nouns. Suggestion: 'I can help many people and serve the community.'

× Yes, it's great place to work because my commute is very short so I save time and feel less stressed each day.

✓ Yes, it's a great place to work because my commute is very short, so I save time and feel less stressed each day.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'great place'. Also add a comma before 'so' when joining clauses for clarity. Suggestion: 'It's a great place to work.'

× My staff already freely and the hospital has good facilities.

✓ My staff are very friendly, and the hospital has good facilities.

'Already freely' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'are friendly'. Use plural verb 'are' with 'staff' when referring to people. Insert comma and 'and' to connect clauses. Suggestion: 'My staff are very friendly.'

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

Examiner asked 'Would you like the place where you work?' which is uncommon; student answered 'Yes, I like...' so sentence itself is fine. No correction needed for student's response. (No verb error.)

× For example, my colleague is very friendly. They help me when I have.

✓ For example, my colleague is very friendly. They help me when I need it.

Second sentence is incomplete: 'when I have' needs an object. Use 'when I need help' or 'when I need it.' Using singular 'colleague' with 'they' is acceptable as a gender-neutral singular, but keep clarity. Suggestion: 'They help me when I need help.' or 'My colleagues are very friendly; they help me when I need help.'

× I will be a good doctor in the future because I want to help my patient recover from their illness and.

✓ I will be a good doctor in the future because I want to help my patients recover from their illnesses.

Sentence ends with 'and.' Remove the trailing conjunction and make 'patient' plural to agree with 'their'. Use 'recover from their illnesses' for grammatical agreement. Suggestion: 'I want to help my patients recover from their illnesses.'

× See them gets better and improve their quality of life.

✓ See them get better and improve their quality of life.

After verbs like 'see' (causative/ perception verb) the following verb should be base form 'get', not 'gets'. Also 'improve' should match plural subject 'they' and remains base form after 'see'. Suggestion: 'See them get better and improve their quality of life.'