Work— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you work or are you a student?
Candidato
Well recently I have passed my senior secondary examination from Indian Public school client and currently I am working to improve my communication skills and have taken enrollment in the RKSD College Cathal for the my further education in BCA.
Examinador
Where do you work?>
Candidato
Well as I have told you earlier, currently I am studying and I have cleared my senior secondary examination. Now I have decided to take enrollment in our Cash D public College in Catholic and I will take enrollment in a Bachelor in computer application for my further education.
Examinador
Is it a good place to work?
Candidato
Well, till now I do not perform any kind of a physical activity such as the part time job. But in the future if I get a chance then I will never miss the opportunity that as the part times of health to get exposure to a new culture as well as also to gain experience and to generate income.
Examinador
Would you like the place where you work?
Candidato
Definitely yes. The place I would prefer to work in the future I like the most as I have decided it with the consultant of with my elders as well as also with the the interest in the particular field that I have decided to work in. So I love the place that I would prefer to work in.
Examinador
What are your future work plans?
Candidato
Well after completing my bachelors in computer application then I would do MCA and after that I will apply for internships in the software engineering field. Data would help me to become a software engineer and for the future I would do some task that are related to Python, Java as well as C plus.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “I’m currently a student”), then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct minor grammar (use ‘enrolled in’ and the college name once). Avoid unnecessary repetition.
Ejemplo: I’m currently a student. I recently finished my senior secondary exams and have enrolled in the BCA program at RKSD College to improve my communication skills and prepare for a tech career.
Where do you work?
Puntuación: 44.0Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repeating earlier points. Say clearly where you study and give one specific detail about the course or college. Fix phrasing: ‘I’m enrolled at…’ and ‘Bachelor of Computer Applications (BCA).’
Ejemplo: I’m not working at the moment; I’m a student enrolled in the Bachelor of Computer Applications (BCA) program at Cash D Public College.
Is it a good place to work?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: First, clarify whether you mean working at the college or a workplace. Give a direct opinion and one or two specific reasons. Use clear linking words like ‘however’ and ‘therefore’. Avoid unclear phrases like ‘part times of health.’
Ejemplo: I haven’t had a job yet, so I can’t judge a workplace, but I would welcome a part-time job in the future. It would help me gain work experience and exposure to different cultures, and it would also provide extra income.
Would you like the place where you work?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: Be clearer and more specific. Start with a direct answer (Yes/No) then give concise reasons using linking words like ‘because’ or ‘since.’ Avoid repeating phrases and mention one or two concrete factors that make the place attractive (e.g., supportive colleagues, good training).
Ejemplo: Yes, I would like the workplace I have chosen because my family and career advisors recommended it and it matches my interests in software development. I expect it to offer good mentorship and learning opportunities.
What are your future work plans?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: This is the strongest answer. Make it more concise and correct technical terms: ‘MCA’ is fine, but say ‘apply for internships in software engineering’ and list languages correctly as ‘C++’. Use linking words like ‘then’ or ‘after that’ to show sequence, and be specific about the kind of internships or roles you want.
Ejemplo: After completing my BCA, I plan to pursue an MCA and then apply for internships in software engineering. I want to work on backend development and practice languages such as Python, Java and C++ to build my programming skills.
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