Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I’m a university student”) then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors (use present simple or present continuous correctly) and unnecessary words. Use linking words when adding details (for example, “because” or “so”).

Ejemplo: I’m a student at Etakania University. I’m studying a course in [subject], and I enjoy it because it helps me learn practical skills and new ideas that I can use in my future career.

Sugerencia: Answer the question asked — say clearly that you don’t work but study, and then give one brief, specific detail about where and what you study. Correct grammar (use “I study” and “I really enjoy” and countable/uncountable nouns). Avoid filler sounds (‘uh’).

Ejemplo: I don’t work at the moment; I study at Ethacania University in Musuna. I’m studying [subject], and I really enjoy it because the lectures and projects have taught me practical skills.

Sugerencia: Make your response clearer and more appropriate to the question. If you are a student, reinterpret politely (“a good place to study or work”). Use full sentences, avoid hesitations, and give specific reasons with examples. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. ‘staff’ or ‘teachers’ instead of ‘mistress’).

Ejemplo: Yes, it’s a good place to work and study because the staff are friendly and supportive. For example, lecturers and administrative staff help students with course advice and practical problems.

Sugerencia: Give a fuller, natural answer: state your feeling clearly and explain why with one specific reason. Keep it within 1–3 sentences and avoid fillers. If you mean you like the place where you study, say so.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like it there. I enjoy the friendly atmosphere and the opportunities to join clubs and projects, which help me develop skills beyond my classes.

Sugerencia: Be clear and specific about your future plans. Use correct sentence structure (“In the future, I want to…”) and provide one or two concrete details (job role, industry, study plans). If you’re unsure of exact words, choose clear, common terms. Avoid unclear or invented words.

Ejemplo: In the future, I want to work as a civil engineer (or specify the intended profession) in a construction company. I plan to complete an internship during my studies and then apply for graduate positions to gain experience.

× Yes, I am a student.

✓ Yes, I am a student.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct and pronoun use is appropriate.

× I study in the Etakania University UH.

✓ I study at Etakania University.

Use 'at' for institutions and omit the definite article 'the' before most university names. Also remove extraneous 'UH'. Suggestion: say 'I study at Etakania University.'

× I enjoy for my UH course because it's helped me to learn new things.

✓ I enjoy my course because it has helped me learn new things.

Do not use 'enjoy for'; 'enjoy' takes a direct object. Use present perfect 'has helped' for past actions affecting the present and omit unnecessary 'to' after 'helped'. Remove 'UH' if redundant. Suggestion: 'I enjoy my course because it has helped me learn new things.'

× I study in the Ethacania University in Musuna uh.

✓ I study at Ethacania University in Musuna.

Use 'at' for institutions. Keep 'in' before the place name 'Musuna'. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary 'the' before the university name. Suggestion: 'I study at Ethacania University in Musuna.'

× I am really enjoy my course uh because it's helped me to learn a new things.

✓ I really enjoy my course because it has helped me learn new things.

After 'I' the verb should be base form 'enjoy' (not 'am enjoy'). Use present perfect 'has helped' and plural 'new things' without article 'a'. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary 'to' after 'helped'. Suggestion: 'I really enjoy my course because it has helped me learn new things.'

× Yes, that, uh, that's a good place to work because, uh, people are friendly and, uh, mistress helped students there.

✓ Yes, that's a good place to work because people are friendly and the staff help students there.

Remove fillers 'uh' and extra comma. Use 'the staff' or 'staff members' instead of 'mistress' unless a specific person is meant. Use present simple 'help' for habitual actions (subject-verb agreement: 'staff' can take plural verb 'help' or 'helps' depending on whether treated as plural or singular; 'staff help' is natural). Add 'the' before 'staff' for clarity. Suggestion: 'Yes, that's a good place to work because people are friendly and the staff help students there.'

× Yes, I like it. Uh, my work.

✓ Yes, I like it. I like my work.

Fragment 'my work' is incomplete; it should be a full sentence with a verb. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: 'Yes, I like it. I like my work.'

× My plans in the future I want to give Piccolarius.

✓ In the future, I want to become a Piccolarius.

The original has word order and verb choice problems. Begin with a time phrase 'In the future,' then use 'I want to' plus a base verb. If 'Piccolarius' is a job title, use 'become' or 'work as' before it. Suggestion: 'In the future, I want to become a Piccolarius.'