Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and complete your ideas. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid sentence fragments and ensure grammar (tense, articles, and subject-verb agreement) is correct. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly to connect reasons and results.

Ejemplo: I work at a Japanese restaurant in Old Town Edinburgh as a waitress and social media coordinator. Because the area is popular with tourists, we get customers from all over the world, which helps me practice speaking with many different people.

Sugerencia: Give a concise location statement, then add one or two specific details. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct small errors (use 'in Old Town' or 'on Cockburn Street' correctly). Replace vague phrases like "they are so multicultural" with a clear description of the customers.

Ejemplo: I work at a Japanese restaurant on Cockburn Street in Old Town, Edinburgh. Because the street attracts many tourists, our customers are very multicultural, from Europe, Asia and the Americas.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: state your opinion, give specific reasons and an example. Fix grammar (remove extra words like 'I because', use plural/singular correctly) and avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words such as 'because', 'however', and 'so' properly to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is. As a supervisor, I sometimes train new colleagues, which can be challenging because it requires patience and extra time. However, my teammates are supportive and hardworking, so the atmosphere at work is positive.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and natural. State your main reason clearly, then add one or two supporting details with appropriate linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and clarify unclear parts (e.g., 'talk with my colleague in Japan'—do you mean colleagues from Japan or colleagues who are Japanese?).

Ejemplo: Yes, I like it because I live in Edinburgh by myself and the restaurant feels like a little community. I enjoy sharing meals with colleagues and sometimes speaking Japanese with coworkers from Japan, which makes me feel less lonely.

Sugerencia: This answer is mostly clear but can be tightened and made more natural. Start with a topic sentence about your plan, add a specific detail (which university or focus), and correct small grammar issues ("a master's degree in marketing" and avoid extra words like 'it'). Use linking words like 'after' and 'then' appropriately.

Ejemplo: From this autumn I will start a master's degree in marketing at university. After I graduate, I hope to work as a marketer, preferably in digital marketing for hospitality businesses.

× The area is popular for tourists so we got so many customers from all over the world.

✓ The area is popular with tourists, so we get many customers from all over the world.

Use of 'got' is incorrect for habitual present; use simple present 'get' to describe regular occurrences (present tense issue, but listed here as adjective/adverb error because 'so many' -> 'many' is more natural). 'Popular for tourists' is not idiomatic; use 'popular with tourists'. Remove 'so' before 'many' for formality and clarity. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and 'popular with' for idiomatic phrasing.

× That's why they are very.

✓ That's why they are very diverse.

Sentence fragment: 'very' needs an adjective to complete meaning. Add an adjective that fits context, e.g. 'diverse' or 'multicultural'. Ensure sentences are complete and convey clear meaning.

× I work at a Japanese restaurant which is located in Oldham, Edinburgh on Cookman St.

✓ I work at a Japanese restaurant located in Old Town, Edinburgh, on Cockburn Street.

Place names must be accurate and idiomatic: 'Old Town' (not Oldham) and 'Cockburn Street' (common Edinburgh street) or keep original if accurate. Use commas to separate locality. Use 'located in' followed by area. Ensure correct prepositions and proper nouns.

× That's why we get guests from all over the world.

✓ That's why we get guests from all over the world.

This sentence is correct in simple present to describe habitual situation. No change needed. Included for completeness.

× They are so multicultural, that's why.

✓ They are very multicultural, which is why we have customers from many countries.

Using 'so multicultural, that's why' is informal and incomplete. Replace 'so' with 'very' and link clauses properly using 'which is why' to explain reason. This makes sentence grammatically complete and clear.

× I because I work as a supervisor, that's why sometimes I need to train my colleague.

✓ Because I work as a supervisor, I sometimes need to train my colleagues.

Word order is incorrect: 'Because' clause should come before the main clause or be connected correctly. Use plural 'colleagues' if referring to more than one. Remove redundant 'that's why'. Use simple present for habitual duties.

× That sounds very hard work.

✓ That sounds like very hard work.

Missing preposition 'like' before noun phrase 'very hard work'. Use 'seems' or 'sounds like' to describe impression. Alternatively say 'That is very hard work.' for direct statement.

× However, my colleagues are very supportive and hard working.

✓ However, my colleagues are very supportive and hardworking.

'Hard working' should be one word 'hardworking' as an adjective. Sentence otherwise correct. Keep parallel adjectives.

× So my work.

✓ So I enjoy my work.

'So my work.' is a fragment and unclear. Add a verb and subject to make a complete sentence that matches intended meaning, e.g. 'I enjoy my work' or 'It suits me'.

× I like my workplace, uh, because I live in Edinburgh alone, then I sometimes feel lonely.

✓ I like my workplace because I live in Edinburgh on my own, so sometimes I feel lonely.

Use 'on my own' or 'alone' idiomatically; connect clauses with 'so' rather than 'then'. Remove filler 'uh' in written answer. Ensure logical connector: 'because... so...' is clearer.

× So it's good to me to have Japanese food at the restaurant and sometimes talk with my colleague in Japan.

✓ So it's good for me to have Japanese food at the restaurant and to be able to sometimes talk with my colleagues in Japan.

Use 'good for me' instead of 'good to me'. Use plural 'colleagues' if applicable and include infinitive 'to be able to' or parallel structure 'to have... and to talk'. 'Talk with' is acceptable but 'talk to' or 'talk with my colleagues in Japan' is clearer.

× Actually, from this autumn I plan to go university for my master degree in marketing area.

✓ Actually, from this autumn I plan to go to university for my master's degree in marketing.

Add preposition 'to' after 'go', use possessive 'master's degree', and 'in marketing' is more idiomatic than 'in marketing area'. Keep future plan phrased with 'plan to' and time expression 'from this autumn' is acceptable.

× So after I graduate it, I hope to be a marketer.

✓ So after I graduate, I hope to be a marketer.

Do not use object pronoun 'it' after 'graduate' when referring to completing university; 'graduate' is intransitive here. Remove 'it'. Keep comma after subordinate clause for clarity.