Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 応答は肯定的で意図は伝わりますが、言い回しが不自然で冗長です。主題文を明確にし、理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べ、繋ぎ言葉（for example, because）を使って論理的に繋げてください。また発音や語句選択（"blowing into online shopping" は不適切）を正し、文の長さは最大5文に収めましょう。例：オンラインショッピングが好きな理由（便利さ、比較がしやすい）を具体的に述べる。

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially online. I find online stores convenient because I can compare many items quickly and read reviews before buying. For example, I often check ratings to choose the best product for my needs.

Suggestion: 意図は伝わりますが語彙の誤用（"plies"）や不明瞭な表現（"feel really devoting", "but quite is still big"）が多く、論理の流れが乱れています。まず明確なトピック文（Yes, I compare prices）を述べ、その後に理由を簡潔に一つか二つ具体例で示してください。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使って文をつなげ、感情表現は簡潔にしてください。

Example: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to get the best value. For instance, I check several online stores and use price comparison sites so I can save money without sacrificing quality.

Suggestion: 回答は短く明確で良いですが文法と語順の誤りが目立ちます（"finced on the fence", "clear mind"）。もっと自然な表現で理由を一文で述べ、必要なら具体例を一つ加えてください。接続語（so, because）を正しく使い、冗長な繰り返しを避けましょう。

Example: No, I’m usually decisive when I shop because I know what I need. For example, I make a quick list before shopping so I can choose between items without hesitation.

Suggestion: 良いポイント（場合によるという意見）を示していますが、語順や語法の誤りがあり、例がわかりにくい（"cheap wine" の使い方）。理由を2点程度で具体化し、比較のための接続語（however, although）を使って自然に述べてください。また例は明確な状況を提示しましょう。

Example: I think it depends on the product. For items like electronics I might pay more for better quality, but for everyday items like wine I prefer cheaper options unless I’m buying for a special occasion.

× I really like shopping, especially on the online store because I'm just sometimes I'm just blowing into online shopping but I literally choose what I want those applications.

✓ I really like shopping, especially on online stores, because sometimes I just browse online and then I choose what I want from those apps.

'Blowing into online shopping' is incorrect and unclear; the intended verb is 'browse', which is the present participle form used with 'just' to indicate a habitual action. Also use plural 'online stores' or 'apps' and correct word order for clarity. Suggestion: use 'browse online' for casual looking and 'choose what I want from those apps' for selecting items.

× Then I like to choose the best one for me.

✓ Then I like to choose the best one for me.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. No article change is necessary. Keep 'the best one' because it refers to a specific best option among choices.

× Yes, I do compare the plies all the time because I like to pick up the best price for me as the reason is I feel really devoting when I picked the best one, but quite is still big.

✓ Yes, I compare prices all the time because I like to find the best price for me; I feel really satisfied when I pick the best one, although the differences can still be large.

Original sentence has multiple issues: 'plies' should be 'prices', 'pick up the best price' is unnatural (use 'find the best price'), tense consistency (use present 'pick' not past 'picked'), and incoherent phrase 'I feel really devoting' should be 'I feel really satisfied'. Also 'but quite is still big' is unclear — rephrase to 'although the differences can still be large.' Suggestion: keep consistent present tense and use clear vocabulary like 'compare prices' and 'find the best price.'

× No, I think I'm a relatively decisive person so I'm not finced on the fence because I'm very clear mind what I want when I go shop.

✓ No, I think I'm a relatively decisive person, so I'm not on the fence because I'm very clear about what I want when I go shopping.

Problems: 'finced on the fence' is a mistaken phrase for 'on the fence'; use the preposition 'on'. 'clear mind' should be 'clear about' and 'go shop' should be 'go shopping' (gerund after 'go' for activities). Maintain present simple 'I think' and 'I am' forms. Suggestion: use common expressions 'on the fence', 'clear about', and 'go shopping.'

× So I don't I did not debating between A and B.

✓ So I don't debate between A and B.

Mixed tense: 'don't' (present) followed by 'did not debating' is incorrect. Use present simple 'debate' after 'do/does' (do not + base verb). Remove 'did not' and use base form 'debate'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent: 'I don't debate between A and B.'

× It totally depends on purchase product.

✓ It totally depends on the product I am purchasing.

Missing article and incorrect word order: use 'the product' or 'the product I am purchasing' or 'what I am buying.' 'Purchase product' is not idiomatic. Suggestion: use 'the product I'm purchasing' or 'what I'm buying.'

× If I feel this is worth paying, I like to choose expensive one, but I like to save money.

✓ If I feel something is worth paying for, I like to choose the expensive one, but I also like to save money.

Missing 'for' after 'worth paying' and article before 'expensive one' ('the expensive one' or 'an expensive one'). The sentence needs 'also' to show contrast. Suggestion: use 'worth paying for' and include proper articles: 'the expensive one' or 'an expensive one.'

× Of course I'm going to pick cheap wine.

✓ Of course I'll often choose the cheaper option.

'Pick cheap wine' is oddly specific and may not match intended meaning. Use comparative 'cheaper option' or 'cheaper products' to contrast with expensive items. Also match contraction for future 'I'll' if appropriate. Suggestion: use 'choose the cheaper option' or 'choose cheaper products' to express general preference.