Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は意図が伝わるが、文法ミスや冗長さ、不自然な表現が多いです。まずは簡潔な主題文を置き、その後に理由や具体例を一つ加える練習をしましょう。時制や語順（例："I really like shopping"、"I can't afford"）を正しく使い、あいまいな語（"wik"など）を避けて明確に話してください。文は最大3〜4文にまとめ、つなぎ語（"because", "so", "therefore"）で論理の流れを示しましょう。

Example: Yes, I do. I really enjoy shopping because I like looking for new styles and good deals. However, recently I can't always afford everything I want, so I often do window shopping or browse online to find ideas and compare prices.

Suggestion: 回答は明確で理由も示しているが、語彙や語順の誤り（"compare at employees"、"affordable price item"）や繰り返しが見られます。より自然な語句（"compare prices"、"affordable items"）を使い、接続詞（"for example", "so"）で文をつなげてください。具体的な方法（例：複数サイトを比べる、レビューを確認する）を一つ加えると説得力が増します。

Example: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to find affordable items. For example, when I shop online I check several websites and read reviews to make sure I'm getting the best deal.

Suggestion: 意図（決断しやすい）が伝わるが、冗長な繰り返し（"a decisive person"を二度）や不要な代名詞（"for you"）があり、語順の誤り（"quick make the decision"）があります。簡潔な主題文を使い、理由を一つ添え、接続詞（"because", "so"）でつなぎましょう。流暢さのために短いフレーズを練習してください。

Example: No, it's not difficult for me. I'm a decisive person, so I usually make quick decisions when I shop because I don't like spending too much time debating.

Suggestion: 考えは示されているが、語彙の誤り（"affordable plays","bleak shops"）や冗長表現（"then I like to make the choice the best choice"）があるため不自然です。まず結論を述べ、その後具体例や理由を一つ示しましょう。比較の方法（品質やレビューを確認するなど）を明確にすると説得力が増します。

Example: I think it depends on the product. Expensive items can be better in terms of quality, but I usually compare prices and reviews online to find the best value before deciding.

× Yes I do I'm really like shopping and more so over the time I do not afford to pay the purchase that I want.

✓ Yes, I do. I really like shopping, but over time I cannot always afford to buy the things I want.

The original sentence mixes present simple with incorrect verb forms and unnatural phrasing. 'I'm really like' is incorrect; 'like' should be used with present simple as 'I really like'. 'Do not afford to pay the purchase' is ungrammatical; use 'cannot afford to buy' and 'the things I want' is more natural than 'the purchase that I want'. Suggestion: keep present simple for likes/habits and use 'cannot afford to buy' for inability to purchase.

× So I just did the window shopping after the wik or it can't really lit up.

✓ So I just did window shopping after the week, but it didn't really cheer me up.

The original has unclear words ('wik') and incorrect verb forms. 'Did the window shopping' is awkward; use 'did window shopping'. 'It can't really lit up' mixes modal and past participle incorrectly; use past simple 'didn't really cheer me up' to match the completed action. Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions and clear vocabulary ('week', 'cheer me up').

× Yeah, of course I do compare at employees when I shop because I like to compare and I want to get affordable price item.

✓ Yeah, of course I compare prices when I shop because I like to compare and I want to get affordable items.

The phrase 'compare at employees' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'compare prices'. 'Affordable price item' has wrong word order and count; use 'affordable items' or 'items at an affordable price'. Suggestion: use the verb 'compare' with the object 'prices' and plural 'items' for general statements.

× Then on, for example, when I shop online, I always compare the prices.

✓ For example, when I shop online, I always compare prices.

The extra 'Then on' is unnecessary and awkward. The rest is present simple habit and is correct. Suggestion: remove filler words and use 'compare prices' (no article) for general meaning.

× No, I really don't feel that way for you.

✓ No, I really don't feel that way.

'For you' is incorrect here because the speaker is describing their own tendency; the pronoun is unnecessary and changes meaning. Suggestion: omit 'for you' to state personal opinion.

× I am decisive person, a decisive person, I mean so I'm really quick make the decision when I go shopping because I do not like the debating

✓ I am a decisive person, so I make decisions quickly when I go shopping because I do not like debating.

Missing article 'a' before 'decisive person' and awkward repetition. 'I'm really quick make the decision' is missing 'to' or needs rephrasing to 'make decisions quickly'. 'The debating' should be uncountable 'debating' or 'arguments' without 'the'. Suggestion: include articles, use plural or uncountable nouns appropriately, and correct word order for adverbs.

× I believe it depends on the purchase items, but I like to get affordable plays so I always compare the prices including online and bleak shops then I like to make the choice the best choice

✓ I believe it depends on the items I am buying, but I like to get affordable products, so I always compare prices online and in local shops. Then I choose the best option.

Several issues: 'purchase items' is awkward—use 'items I am buying' or 'products'; 'affordable plays' is a wrong word ('plays' -> 'prices' or 'products'); 'bleak shops' is likely 'brick-and-mortar' or 'local shops' — corrected to 'local shops'. Verb tenses should be present simple for habits: 'I always compare' and 'I choose'. Suggestion: use collocations 'compare prices', 'local shops', and clear sentence separation for readability.