Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid redundancy and incorrect word forms, and limit to 2–4 short sentences. Use linking words if you add reasons. Be careful with word choice (e.g., 'shocking' is inappropriate) and grammar (use correct verb forms and articles).

Example: Yes, I like shopping because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, when I buy clothes that fit well, I feel more confident, so I often enjoy browsing stores on weekends.

Suggestion: Provide a concise topic sentence and follow with a clear reason using linking words. Use correct comparative forms and smoother phrasing. Give a brief example to support your point. Avoid repetition and ungrammatical fragments.

Example: Yes, I usually compare prices because the same product can cost quite different amounts in different shops. For instance, last month I compared two stores online and saved 20% on a pair of headphones.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and then explain briefly with specific reasons or an example. Avoid filler words and unfinished thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and be specific about what factors influence your choices (price, quality, function).

Example: Honestly, it's not difficult for me because I know what I need and focus on practical factors. For example, when buying a phone I choose the one with the battery life and camera I need, rather than browsing every model.

Suggestion: Express your opinion directly and support it with a clear reason and a specific example. Avoid unclear metaphors and hesitations. Use linking words ('however', 'for example', 'because') and proper sentence structure to explain when cheaper items can be better.

Example: I don't think expensive products are always better because price doesn't always reflect suitability. For example, a cheaper sneaker might be more comfortable for me than an expensive designer pair, so I compare features and reviews before buying.

× Yes, I really like shopping shocking often give me some happy moods and give me so satisfaction feeling.

✓ Yes, I really like shopping; it often shocks me, gives me happy moods, and gives me a very satisfying feeling.

The sentence misuses 'shocking' as an adjective and has awkward adverb placement and noun phrases. Use a clause 'it often shocks me' for correct verb form, 'gives me happy moods' (plural or 'a good mood') and 'a very satisfying feeling' for natural adjective-noun order. Improve by using clear verbs and correct adjective use.

× So I always shopping and you know shopping is some most girl like things.

✓ So I am always shopping, and you know shopping is one of the things most girls like.

Missing auxiliary verb for continuous tense ('I am always shopping'). 'Some most girl like things' is ungrammatical; use 'one of the things most girls like' and include the plural 'girls'. Also include commas and correct word order.

× You know, a different shop and different mall maybe have a different price, maybe if you have a lowest price, get the same item.

✓ You know, different shops and malls may have different prices; if you find the lowest price for the same item,

Use plural 'shops' and 'malls' and modal 'may'. 'Have a different price' should be 'have different prices'. 'If you have a lowest price, get the same item' is unclear; rephrase 'if you find the lowest price for the same item'. Prepositions and noun forms were incorrect.

× I think is so clever and it's a good choice.

✓ I think that is very clever and it's a good choice.

Missing subject 'that' after 'think'. 'So clever' is informal; use 'very clever'. Ensure complete clause 'I think that...' to fix sentence structure.

× Honestly, it's not difficult. It's so easy for me. Maybe I will have some uh. Different feeling and function and the importance is.

✓ Honestly, it's not difficult. It's very easy for me. Maybe I will have different feelings and consider the function and importance of items.

'Maybe I will have some uh. Different feeling' is fragmented and 'function and the importance is' lacks a verb and agreement. Use plural 'feelings' and add verbs: 'consider the function and importance'. Maintain present/future consistency.

× I don't think so. Umm, you know, products, maybe, uh shoot ball is very important and prioritizing maybe expensive not to shoot you, but cheaper.

✓ I don't think so. Umm, you know, for products, maybe quality is very important when prioritizing; sometimes expensive doesn't suit you, but cheaper ones do.

Original is unclear and uses incorrect nouns ('shoot ball') and word order. Replace with 'quality' and clarify comparative idea: 'expensive doesn't suit you' and 'cheaper ones do'. Use plural 'ones' for pronoun reference.

× This one very suits you. So I think uh, uh, you need umm, compare and uh decide very perfect.

✓ This one suits you very well. So I think you need to compare and make a good decision.

'This one very suits you' uses incorrect adverb placement; adverb 'very well' should follow verb. 'Decide very perfect' is incorrect; use 'make a good decision' or 'decide well'. Remove filler words for clarity.