Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ хороший по содержанию, но в нём есть повторения и некоторые неточности. Постарайтесь сделать ответ короче (не более 3–4 предложений), убрать тавтологию («daily basis, like once a week» — противоречие) и добавить связку для плавности. Также используйте более точные выражения вместо «it brings me a lot of joy» — например, «I enjoy it» или «I find it relaxing».

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially with my mother and younger sister. It helps me relax after school, and we often go together once a week. I particularly like browsing for clothes and sometimes trying new styles.

Suggestion: Ответ понятен, но содержит разрывы и неверный порядок слов. Сократите заполнители («uh») и исправьте фразы типа «with much more with much lower cost». Добавьте связку причины и результата (because / so) и конкретный пример, чтобы обосновать ответ.

Example: Yes, I compare prices quite often because online shops often sell the same items cheaper than physical stores. For example, I recently bought a jacket online for half the price I saw in a mall, so now I always check websites before I buy.

Suggestion: Ответ показывает проблему, но содержит много колебаний и грамматических ошибок («ask for an advice», «I can't consider»). Уберите междометия, используйте простую структуру: утверждение + причина + пример. Исправьте фразы: «I often think about a purchase twice or three times» и «I usually ask my friend or my mother for advice».

Example: Yes, I find it difficult to decide. I often think about a purchase two or three times because I worry about whether I will wear it enough, so I usually ask my friend or my mother for advice before buying.

Suggestion: Идея ясна, но ответ перегружен звуками сомнения и повторениями. Сформулируйте позицию чётко в начале, затем приведите конкретную причину или пример. Используйте словосочетания «high-quality» и «expensive does not always mean better».

Example: No, I don't think expensive items are always better. In my experience, some affordable clothes are well made and last long, so price alone isn't a reliable indicator of quality.

× Yes, I really enjoy going shopping, especially with my mom and my little sister.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy going shopping, especially with my mom and my little sister.

Sentence is correct; present simple 'enjoy' properly describes a habitual preference.

× It brings me a lot of joy and helps me to relax from my daily routine, especially from my school life.

✓ It brings me a lot of joy and helps me relax from my daily routine, especially from my school life.

Use 'helps me relax' not 'helps me to relax' for natural English; 'relax from' is acceptable though 'relax after' or 'take a break from' might be clearer. Suggestion: use 'helps me relax' or 'helps me take a break from'.

× So I do it on a daily basis, like once a week and it's really enjoyable for me.

✓ So I do it regularly, about once a week, and it's really enjoyable for me.

Contradiction: 'on a daily basis' means every day, but 'once a week' contradicts it. Use 'regularly' or 'on a weekly basis' to match 'once a week'.

× Well, these days I started to do it uh quite often because the prices are different on the Internet and offline.

✓ Well, these days I have started to do it quite often because prices are different online and offline.

Use present perfect 'have started' for an action that began recently and continues. Also use 'online' not 'on the Internet' (both acceptable) and avoid filler words.

× So I usually find out the same clothes on the Internet uh, with much more with much lower cost.

✓ So I usually find the same clothes online at a much lower cost.

English uses 'find' not 'find out' for finding products; use 'online' and 'at a much lower cost' is the correct prepositional phrase. Remove redundant 'with much more'.

× So yes.

✓ So yes, I do compare prices.

One-word answer is acceptable in speech but for clarity and completeness add the full response: 'Yes, I do compare prices.'

× Yes, I always think uh about think of buying umm any clothes twice or even ever even three times before buying it because I can't consider and I always ask for an advice my friend or my mom.

✓ Yes, I always think about buying any clothes twice or even three times before buying them because I can't decide, and I always ask my friend or my mom for advice.

Use 'think about' not 'think of think of'; 'any clothes' with plural pronoun 'them'; 'decide' is the correct verb instead of 'consider' in this context; 'ask for advice' (no article) and include 'my friend or my mom' -> 'my friend or my mom'. Remove fillers and correct word order.

× Well, from my experience, I don't think that, uh, products that cost much, uh, much more, uh, much better than the cheapest one, uh, because sometimes, uh, you can find cheap clothes, uh, with the high quality.

✓ Well, from my experience, I don't think that products that cost much more are necessarily much better than the cheapest ones, because sometimes you can find cheap clothes of high quality.

Use 'are' to link subject and complement; 'the cheapest one' should be plural 'ones' to match 'products'; 'of high quality' is the natural prepositional phrase. Remove redundant fillers 'uh' and simplify word order.