Money— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 表达直接但有语法和用词问题，语句不够简洁流畅，含糊词（uh）和重复（lend lend）影响自然度。建议：1) 用一到两句直接回答并给出简短原因，例如“I've never borrowed money from others because I prefer to be financially independent.” 2) 避免填充词（uh、um），检查重复词汇。3) 用更自然的表达替换“rude truth”，例如“awkward”或“improper”。具体练习：把答案控制在2–3句内，句子之间用简单连词如 because 或 so 来衔接。

Example: No, I haven't. I prefer to handle my own expenses because I like to be financially independent, so I avoid borrowing money from others.

Suggestion: 内容具体但表达混乱，时态和句子结构有问题，出现语音填充（uh）、不完整句和不恰当短语（"cheered his biscuit"）。建议：1) 用一到三句叙述完整事件，说明时间、人物、原因和结果，使用连接词（for example, so, then）。2) 注意时态一致（past tense），用正确词汇（biscuit/biscuits；share）。3) 避免冗长无关评价，改用简洁感受描述。练习方法：写出事件的时间—人物—动作—结果四个要点，再连成自然句子。

Example: Yes, I have. Last term my classmate Eric wanted to buy a box of biscuits but he didn't have enough money, so I lent him about 6 RMB. He shared some biscuits with me afterwards, and I felt happy that I could help a friend.

× No, I haven't because I think it will be a rude truth each other uh, and I also don't like to borrow money and lend lend money to others. So yes, I also uh never borrowed money from others.

✓ No, I haven't because I think it would be rude between each other, and I also don't like borrowing or lending money to others. So yes, I have never borrowed money from others.

错误类型：12（代词使用不当）以及26（句子结构）和8（动名词形式）。 解释：原句中的 "each other" 用法不当，应该表达“彼此之间”时用 "between each other" 或更自然的 "to each other"，但这里更合适的表达是 "rude to each other" 或 "rude between us"。句子中还出现重复的动词 "lend lend"，应删除重复并使用动名词形式统一（borrow/borrowing, lend/lending 或 borrow or lend）。此外时态与助动词使用需一致，最后一句 "So yes, I also uh never borrowed money" 与前面否定现在完成时冲突，应改为现在完成时 "I have never borrowed"。建议：用更自然的表达方式，把重复词删掉，统一动词形式，用现在完成时描述过去到现在的经历。

× My classmate Eric wanted to buy a box of biscuit but he didn't have enough money and he uh. It's good to meet you whether I could give him about 6 RMB and I gave him and then he cheered his biscuit for me 1/2 and I feel a strong feeling of satisfaction and at this end.

✓ My classmate Eric wanted to buy a box of biscuits but he didn't have enough money. He asked me if I could give him about 6 RMB, and I gave it to him. He shared half of the biscuits with me, and I felt a strong sense of satisfaction at the end.

错误类型：8（动名词/动词 -ing 形式不当）、26（句子结构）、11（介词使用）和1（单复数）。 解释： - "a box of biscuit" 中名词应使用复数 "biscuits"。 - 原句断句混乱（多个短句连在一起且缺少主语或谓语），需要分成几句以清晰表达：先说明想买饼干、然后说明没钱、接着说明请求借钱、再说明借钱与分享的结果。 - "It's good to meet you whether I could give him" 语法错误且含义混乱，正确表达应该是 "He asked me if I could give him..."（间接疑问句），不需要 "It's good to meet you"。 - "he cheered his biscuit for me 1/2" 表达不清，应为 "he shared half of the biscuits with me"。 建议：注意名词单复数，使用完整句子并用合适的连接词（and, then, if），用 "asked me if" 引出请求，使用 "share" 表示分享并用具体数量表达（half）。