Gifts— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更符合语法，简洁自然，并直接回应问题。建议使用简单完整的句子开头表明能力，然后补充频率和场合，避免填充词（如 uh）和冗长结构。

Example: Yes, I’m quite good at giving gifts. I usually give presents to my family and close friends on special occasions such as birthdays or celebrations.

Suggestion: 需要更准确的时态和更流畅的连接，避免句子未完成。可以先给出一般频率，然后举几个具体场合作为支持细节。

Example: I usually give gifts on family members’ birthdays. I also buy presents for friends on important days like graduations or weddings.

Suggestion: 注意主谓一致和代词使用，表达要更清晰具体。先给出主观点（实用性重要），然后用连词衔接理由和具体例子，避免语法错误。

Example: I consider practicality first because I want the recipient to use the gift. For example, I bought a coffee machine for my sister on her wedding day since she loves coffee and would use it every day.

Suggestion: 整体表达较好但注意时态一致与细节丰富。用过去时描述童年经历，补充一两句说明动机或感受可以更生动。

Example: Yes, I have. When I was a child I used to make handmade cards for my family and friends. I remember making a special card for my grandparents one year because I wanted to show my gratitude.

Suggestion: 回答观点明确，但需改进语法和连贯性。可先给出立场，再用原因和对比支持观点，使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

Example: I don’t think expensive gifts necessarily express feelings better. If a gift is costly but impractical, it won’t mean much to the recipient; a thoughtful, useful present often shows more care.

× Yes, of course I usually giving gifts for my friends and all my families and their special day like uh, birthday or the day we need to celebrate for something.

✓ Yes, of course. I usually give gifts to my friends and all my family on their special days, like birthdays or other occasions we need to celebrate.

原句中「usually giving」動名詞形式不符合一般現在時的陳述用法，主語為 I 時應使用動詞原形 give。另有介詞用法問題（應為 give something to someone），以及複數/集合名詞用法與數量詞順序的調整（all my family, special days, birthdays）。建議：在描述習慣時用一般現在時（主語+動詞原形或第三人稱單數用-s），使用慣用搭配 give ... to ...，並注意 family 作集合名詞時不加複數形式表示全家。

× Usually I send gifts to my families at their birthday and sometimes I will give the gifts to my friends and their big day like their graduation or.

✓ Usually I send gifts to my family on their birthdays, and sometimes I give gifts to my friends on big days like their graduation.

原句中時態和名詞數有問題：描述習慣應使用一般現在時（I send / I give），不應混用 will 表示未來。另外 family 不用複數形式 my families，birthday 應作複數 birthdays，並且介詞搭配用 on their birthdays/on big days。建議：用一般現在時描述習慣，注意 family 和 birthday 的單複數以及正確介詞 on。

× Usually I think practical is very important in our choosing a gift.

✓ Usually I think practicality is very important when choosing a gift.

原句中用詞和代詞不當：應使用名詞形式 practicality 而非形容詞 practical。片語 in our choosing a gift 不自然且多餘，應改為 when choosing a gift 或 in choosing a gift。建議：使用名詞化表達（practicality），並用 when/ in + 動名詞表達「在選擇禮物時」。

× Like I will send a coffee machine to my sister when he was she was wedding day because she is a coffee lover.

✓ For example, I gave a coffee machine to my sister on her wedding day because she is a coffee lover.

原句包含人稱代詞錯誤（he / she 混用），時態錯誤與介詞問題。描述過去事件應使用過去時（gave），並且應說 on her wedding day 而不是 when she was wedding day。建議：注意人稱代詞一致性（指 sister 用 she），事件如果已發生用過去式，並用介詞 on 表示特定日子。

× So I think it's worth.

✓ So I think it was worth it.

原句結構不完整，缺少賓語 it 及正確時態。因前句改為過去式描述過去的行為，這裏也應使用過去式 was，並使用短語 worth it 表示值得。建議：保持時態一致，使用完整短語 like worth it 或 worth the money/time。

× When I was a child, I'd like to send a handmade card to my friends or families, and I remember one year I sent a handmade card to my grandparents.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to give handmade cards to my friends and family, and I remember one year I sent a handmade card to my grandparents.

原句混用了條件式/習慣用法（I'd like）與過去習慣描述。描述過去習慣應使用過去式 liked，而不是 would 或 I'd like。family 不用複數形式 families。建議：用過去式描述兒時習慣（I liked to give / I used to give），並注意 family 的用法。

× As I say, practicality is very important when I choose a gift.

✓ As I said, practicality is very important when I choose a gift.

句首時態不一致：既然在前面已陳述，應用過去式說 As I said 而非 As I say。其他部分語法正常。建議：保持敘述時態一致，若指先前已說過的內容用 said。

× If a gift expensive but useless, I don't think it can express my feeling.

✓ If a gift is expensive but useless, I don't think it can express my feelings.

原句缺少系動詞 is 構成條件句（If clause），另外 feelings 較常用複數以表示情感。建議：在條件句中使用完整的主謂結構（If + 主語 + 動詞），並使用 feelings 表達情感。