Holidays— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be careful with verb tense, redundancy and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence in past simple, correct nouns (historical sites), avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Add one or two specific details (what site you visited, one memorable experience) using a linking word.

Example: I went to Victoria for my last holiday. It is a beautiful island with many historical sites, such as the old lighthouse. While I was there, I enjoyed walking along the coastal cliffs and watching the sunset, which was very memorable.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and use correct modal/infinitive forms (I can, I don't have to). Avoid contradictions and false statements ("I just can't do whatever I want" likely meant "can"). Replace fillers and give one specific example of how you spend holidays, linked with a connector.

Example: Yes, I enjoy holidays because they give me a break from work. For example, I often travel for a few days, but sometimes I prefer staying home and relaxing by watching YouTube or reading articles on my phone.

Suggestion: Give a concise topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar errors (people, I really enjoy). Explain briefly why with a specific reason or tradition, using a linking word like "because" or "since".

Example: My favourite public holiday is Christmas because the atmosphere is warm and relaxed. For instance, we decorate the house, meet family and enjoy a special meal together, which makes the holiday feel cozy.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and use parallel structure and correct plurals (vacations -> short trips, wells -> wells? likely 'views'). Be specific: mention one activity and give a brief example, using linking words such as "for example" or "also."

Example: It depends, but generally I prefer short trips or shopping. For example, I might visit Victoria to see historical sites and enjoy scenic views, and I often eat at local restaurants while I'm there.

Suggestion: Clarify your meaning and correct grammar ("if I'm busy that week I will rest at home"), avoid odd phrasing and repetitions. Use one or two specific activities you do at home, linked with a reason.

Example: It depends. If I had a busy week, I prefer to stay at home to rest. I usually relax by scrolling my phone and listening to chilled jazz because it helps me unwind.

Suggestion: Use correct forms ("to get relaxed" -> "to relax and unwind") and avoid informal fillers. Provide one specific activity you do on leisurely holidays and use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Example: I prefer a leisurely holiday because work stresses me out. For example, I like to spend quiet days reading books and going for slow walks to relax and recharge.

Suggestion: Good flexibility in answer. Improve grammar ("if I'm very busy"), word order ("prefer to go hiking"), and reduce fillers. Use linking words ("however") and give one clear example for each preference.

Example: It depends. If I'm very busy, I prefer a peaceful holiday at home, reading and listening to mellow music. However, if I have lots of energy, I would choose an active holiday like hiking or skiing.

× For my last holiday I have been to Victoria, which is a really beautiful island with a lot of historical size and also very beautiful natural natural views and umm, I'm really happy going there.

✓ For my last holiday I went to Victoria, which is a really beautiful island with a lot of historical sites and very beautiful natural views, and I was really happy to go there.

The original uses 'have been' (present perfect) which is inappropriate with a specific finished past time expression 'For my last holiday'; simple past 'went' is correct. 'Historical size' is nonsensical; 'historical sites' is intended (noun plural). 'Natural natural views' repeats 'natural' and should be 'natural views'. 'I'm really happy going there' mixes present state with past experience; use 'I was really happy to go there' or 'I was really happy I went there' to match past tense. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past events and check noun choice and repetition.

× I like holidays of course. I think most of the people in the world like holidays because in the holidays I don't have to worry about my works. I just can't do whatever I want to do. I can either go for a trip, go for vacation, or staying at home and enjoy my free time with UMM. By watching YouTube or scrolling my phones, I can fill the free.

✓ I like holidays, of course. I think most people in the world like holidays because during holidays I don't have to worry about my work. I can do whatever I want. I can either go on a trip, go on vacation, or stay at home and enjoy my free time. By watching YouTube or scrolling my phone, I can fill my free time.

Problems: 'most of the people' is better as 'most people' (quantifier usage). 'in the holidays' should be 'during holidays' or 'on holidays'. 'my works' is incorrect; 'my work' is uncountable. 'I just can't do whatever I want to do' contradicts meaning and uses 'can't' incorrectly; remove 'just can't' to indicate ability. 'go for vacation' should be 'go on vacation'. 'staying at home' needs base form 'stay' to parallel verbs. 'UMM' filler removed. 'scrolling my phones' should be 'scrolling my phone' (singular) and 'fill the free' should be 'fill my free time'. Suggestion: use correct quantifiers and uncountable nouns, parallel verb forms, and common collocations like 'go on vacation'.

× I would say that Christmas holiday is the holiday I like best Umm. I really like the vibe umm in Christmas holiday because all peoples they just enjoy the holiday in having a really chill and relaxed atmosphere in this holiday. So I am really enjoy this holiday.

✓ I would say that the Christmas holiday is the holiday I like best. I really like the vibe at Christmas because all the people just enjoy the holiday and have a really chill and relaxed atmosphere. So I really enjoy this holiday.

Errors: missing definite article 'the Christmas holiday'. 'in Christmas holiday' should be 'at Christmas' or 'during the Christmas holidays' (preposition). 'all peoples they' is wrong; use 'all the people' or 'people' (pronoun error). 'enjoy the holiday in having' is ungrammatical; use 'enjoy the holiday and have' to coordinate verbs. 'I am really enjoy' mixes 'am' with base verb; correct to 'I really enjoy' (third person singular issue/form mismatch). Suggestion: use correct articles and verb forms; avoid redundant pronouns and use simple coordinated verbs.

× It depends on which holidays but generally I'll go to different shopping malls for shopping or maybe go for a short vacations like go to Victoria or Worcester for visiting some historical sites or doing some sightseeing for beautiful natural wells and also like do some shopping or eating in the restaurant.

✓ It depends on which holiday it is, but generally I'll go to different shopping malls to shop or maybe go on a short vacation, like to Victoria or Worcester, to visit some historical sites or do some sightseeing to see beautiful natural wells, and also do some shopping or eat in restaurants.

Issues: 'which holidays' should be 'which holiday' (singular/plural agreement). 'go for a short vacations' mixes preposition and plural; use 'go on a short vacation' (collocation and singular). 'for visiting' should be 'to visit' (verb infinitive after purpose). 'doing some sightseeing for beautiful natural wells' awkward; use 'do some sightseeing to see beautiful natural wells' or simply 'sightsee'. 'eating in the restaurant' better as 'eat in restaurants' (article and plural). Suggestion: use parallel infinitives for purposes (to visit, to do), correct collocations ('go on vacation'), and ensure noun-number agreement.

× It depends, if I'm being busy on that week I will eat as well. Staying at home instead of going outside and then going to a really cold shopping mall. I'd rather stay at my home and then strolling my phone or enjoy some chilled music with a jazz that's already chilled.

✓ It depends. If I'm busy that week, I will stay at home instead of going outside to a cold shopping mall. I'd rather stay at home and scroll my phone or enjoy some chilled jazz music.

Problems: 'being busy on that week' should be 'busy that week' (preposition 'on' unnecessary). 'I will eat as well' makes no sense; likely intended 'I will stay at home' so corrected. Sentence fragments: 'Staying at home instead of...' is a fragment; combine into full sentence. 'stay at my home' more natural as 'stay at home'. 'strolling my phone' wrong verb; use 'scroll my phone'. 'enjoy some chilled music with a jazz that's already chilled' is awkward; 'chilled jazz music' is natural. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, avoid sentence fragments, choose correct verbs for actions (scroll), and simplify phrasing.

× I would prefer a leisurely holiday because I feel a little bit stressed in my work. So holidays are really good moments for me to getting relaxed and unwind, like I can finally try to do something I like to do in my life, yeah.

✓ I would prefer a leisurely holiday because I feel a little bit stressed from my work. So holidays are really good moments for me to get relaxed and unwind; I can finally do things I like to do in my life.

'stressed in my work' should be 'stressed from my work' or 'stressed at work' (preposition). 'for me to getting relaxed' mixes 'to' with gerund; use the infinitive 'to get relaxed' or better 'to relax'. 'unwind' should be paired consistently. 'try to do something I like to do' is redundant; simplify to 'do things I like to do'. Suggestion: use infinitive after 'for ... to', avoid gerund where infinitive is required, and simplify redundant phrases.

× It depends, if I'm being pretty stressed or busy on the work day, I would prefer a peaceful relaxed holiday like UMM, enjoy reading and listening chilled music in my home. But if I have a lot of energy in that week I will prefer go outside, go for hiking or doing some exciting sports like skiing on that.

✓ It depends. If I'm quite stressed or busy on a workday, I would prefer a peaceful, relaxed holiday, enjoying reading and listening to chilled music at home. But if I have a lot of energy that week, I would prefer to go outside, go hiking, or do some exciting sports like skiing.

Problems: 'being pretty stressed' phrasing fine but 'on the work day' should be 'on a workday'. Sentence fragments and comma issues; use full sentences. 'enjoy reading and listening chilled music' needs preposition 'to' after 'listening' and 'chilled music' as noun. 'in my home' better 'at home'. 'I will prefer go outside' needs infinitive 'to go'. 'go for hiking' should be 'go hiking'. 'doing some exciting sports' should be 'do some exciting sports'. 'skiing on that' incorrect; remove 'on that'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, infinitives after 'prefer', and standard verb patterns like 'go hiking'.