Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 表达要更自然、流畅并注意时态与词汇使用。避免重复（多次使用“often”），并把观点按主题句+具体细节组织起来。此外注意单词选择与发音（例如“score”应为“watch/see”）。可以用链接词连接句子使衔接更好。

Example: I usually visit Bilibili to watch short videos for entertainment, and I use ChatGPT when I need help studying. For example, ChatGPT helps me understand difficult concepts and gives explanations step by step, so I can learn more efficiently.

Suggestion: 需要更准确的动词时态和更简洁的表达。避免重复（如两次提到“make a plan”）。可用具体例子说明为何“indispensable”，并使用连接词提高连贯性。

Example: My favourite website is ChatGPT because it helps me solve problems quickly and saves time when I make plans. For instance, it can generate a study schedule for my exams and suggest resources, which makes planning much faster.

Suggestion: 回答思路清晰，但比喻应更自然并用更准确的词（如"used to"而不是现在时），同时补充具体变化的例子增强内容。注意避免口头语（like, actually）过多。

Example: Yes. ChatGPT has improved a lot. It used to give incorrect answers sometimes, but now it provides much more reliable and detailed responses, such as explaining algorithms clearly and suggesting correct code fixes.

Suggestion: 表达不够清晰且有语法和词汇错误（如“doing”，“I I am often up on the most of the night to school doing”）。应先给主题句，然后用具体原因和例子支持，避免含糊与重复。练习使用正确词汇（TikTok/ Douyin）与完整句子。

Example: I think Douyin (Chinese TikTok) is very popular because it offers many short and engaging videos. For example, my friends and I often spend evenings watching clips about food, travel and life hacks, which makes the app very addictive.

Suggestion: 句子结构需更整洁，注意连接词和介词使用（例如“ask to ChatGPT”应为“ask ChatGPT”）。在比较时给出具体比较点（准确性、速度、深度）会更有说服力。

Example: It depends. For final exam preparation I prefer books because they provide structured and reliable summaries of key points. For everyday questions I use ChatGPT because it is faster and gives quick explanations or examples.

Suggestion: 表达总体清楚，但需减少口头填充词（like, actually）并更具体地说明功能或目标用户。使用一到两句阐述网站特色和用途即可。

Example: Yes. As a computer science student, I would like to create a website similar to ChatGPT that helps users with daily tasks. For example, it could answer common questions, generate schedules, and automate simple routines like email replies.

Suggestion: 内容明确但语法需改进（例如“imagine computer science”应为“I am majoring in computer science”）。建议提供更具体的例子，说明学到哪些技能和具体场景。使用连接词让句子更连贯。

Example: ChatGPT has taught me several practical study skills. For instance, when I encounter bugs in my code, it helps me debug step by step and explains algorithms clearly, which has improved my problem-solving and coding ability.

× In my first time, I often visit Bilibili, which is Chinese YouTube.

✓ The first time I used the internet, I often visited Bilibili, which is like Chinese YouTube.

句子问题在于时间短语和时态搭配不当，“In my first time” 用法不自然，且整句描述过去的习惯应使用过去时。建议改为“The first time I used the internet”或“When I first started using the internet”，并将动词改为过去式“visited”。（问题类型参考：10 — 现在分词形式错误，因为原句中短语误用，需调整。）

× I often score some interesting short videos and when I need to study, I often use ChatGPT.

✓ I often watch interesting short videos, and when I need to study I often use ChatGPT.

“score” 用法不当，应该用“watch”或“see”来表示“看视频”。另外连词后不需要逗号，保持时态一致。建议把动词改为恰当的实义动词。

× It's just like a tutor to teach me lots of knowledge.

✓ It's like a tutor that teaches me a lot of things.

原句中不定式“to teach”用法不自然，主语与动词时态要一致，改为关系从句“that teaches”。另外“lots of knowledge”更自然说法是“a lot of things”或“a lot of knowledge”。（问题类型：6 — 现在时问题）

× When I made some problems, ChatGPT can help me solve the problems and when I want to make a plan, ChatGPT can help me to save a lot of time to make a plan.

✓ When I have problems, ChatGPT can help me solve them, and when I want to make a plan, ChatGPT can help me save a lot of time.

原句时态混乱，“When I made some problems” 应为现在时“When I have problems”。此外重复“make a plan”累赘，去除不必要的词并简化结构。应使用代词“them”代替重复名词。

× Yeah, actually, yes, there are big changes in ChatGPT.

✓ Yes, actually, there have been big changes in ChatGPT.

描述从过去到现在发生的变化，应该用现在完成时“have been”来表示变化的结果和持续性，而不是一般现在时“are”。（问题类型：5 — 过去时问题，实际为完成时使用错误）

× In the past, it's just like a student who often made lots of mistakes and I felt annoyed, but now it is a really specialist who can give me lots of professional advice.

✓ In the past, it was like a student who often made lots of mistakes and I felt annoyed, but now it is a real specialist who can give me lots of professional advice.

描述过去的情况应使用过去时“was”。“really specialist” 搭配错误，应为“a real specialist”。保持主谓一致及形容词使用正确。

× MMM I would say it's doing which is Chinese TikTok.

✓ Hmm, I would say it's Douyin, which is the Chinese version of TikTok.

原句中“doing”拼写错误，应为“Douyin”（抖音）。并且需要说明“which is the Chinese version of TikTok”来解释。纠正拼写与代词搭配使表达清晰。（问题类型：12 — 代词/指示用法问题）

× Almost all of my friends have visited the website and because there are lots of interesting videos to attract people.

✓ Almost all of my friends have used the app because there are lots of interesting videos that attract people.

原句中“and because”结构重复且句子断裂，导致句子结构不完整。将句子合并并去掉多余连词，使用“that attract people”修饰“videos”。（问题类型：26 — 句子结构错误）

× For example I I am often up on the most of the night to school doing.

✓ For example, I am often up most of the night studying for school.

原句语序混乱且用词错误，“up most of the night studying” 是惯用表达，“to school doing” 非法搭配。调整为正确的动词短语和语序。

× Well it depends when I need to prepare my final exam, I often get information from books because there are lots of main points which relate to the exam.

✓ Well, it depends. When I need to prepare for my final exam, I often get information from books because they contain the main points related to the exam.

需要在“depends”后断句。固定搭配是“prepare for an exam”。“which relate to the exam” 可改为“related to the exam”或“that are related to the exam”。保持时态和表达自然。

× But when I in my day life I often ask to ChatGPT and it always can give me satisfied answer.

✓ But in my daily life I often ask ChatGPT, and it can always give me satisfactory answers.

原句中“ask to ChatGPT” 用法错误，应为“ask ChatGPT”。“satisfied answer” 语法错误，正确形容词是“satisfactory”修饰“answers”。调整复数和语序以符合习惯用法。

× You know, I'm majoring in computer science, so I also want to design a website just like ChatGPT, which can help people in their daily life, such as, such as answering questions and automating daily routines.

✓ You know, I'm majoring in computer science, so I want to design a website like ChatGPT that can help people in their daily lives, such as answering questions and automating daily routines.

重复“such as”。“daily life” 在此处应为复数“daily lives”。保持动名词形式“answering”及并列项一致性。

× You know, I imagine computer science. So I need to write lots of codes and when I made some problem, I always ask ChatGPT to get some answers such as debugging the codes and explaining the algorithm.

✓ You know, I study computer science, so I need to write a lot of code, and when I have a problem I always ask ChatGPT for help, such as debugging code and explaining algorithms.

“I imagine computer science” 用法错误，应为 “I study computer science”。“write lots of codes” 不自然，通常用“write a lot of code”。“when I made some problem” 应为现在时“when I have a problem”。“ask ChatGPT to get some answers” 不如“ask ChatGPT for help”。并调整不可数名词“code”和复数“一般算法”。（问题类型：5 — 过去时/时态错误）