Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có vài lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không chính xác (ví dụ "LATI trends", thiếu từ sau "organizations are interested in"). Nên: 1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (viết đúng cấu trúc), 2) Dùng từ cụ thể hơn (e.g., "latest trends"), 3) Rút gọn để không lặp ý và giữ trong 3–4 câu, 4) Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g., "so", "and").

Example: I often visit social media sites like Facebook and online news platforms to keep up with the latest trends and current events. I usually scan headlines quickly and follow updates from people and organizations that interest me.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc nhưng hơi dài và có cụm từ thừa ("and moreover", "also"). Hãy dùng một câu chủ đề rõ rệt, thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: việc tương tác hoặc một tính năng cụ thể) và tránh lặp từ để đạt hiệu quả hơn.

Example: My favourite website is Facebook because it helps me stay in touch with family and friends. I also follow interest groups and pages for news and photos, which makes it easy to stay informed and connected.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng nhiều lỗi cấu trúc và từ sai chỗ (e.g., "used to mainly the", "news technical information", "English news science", "building translation tools"). Nên: 1) Sử dụng thì đúng (used to + V), 2) Dùng cụm từ chính xác (e.g., "news websites and technical forums"), 3) Giải thích ngắn cách bạn dịch nội dung bằng công cụ dịch. Viết 2–3 câu ngắn và rõ ràng.

Example: I used to visit news websites and technical forums mainly. Now I often read English science news, and I use online translation tools to translate articles into Vietnamese when I need to understand them better.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu mạch lạc, nhiều lặp từ, vấp và lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên: 1) Tổ chức ý rõ ràng (mở đầu, ví dụ cho thanh niên, ví dụ cho người cao tuổi), 2) Tránh tiếng ằ, "um", lặp từ, 3) Dùng từ đúng (e.g., "news sites", "TikTok", "educational websites"), 4) Giữ 3–4 câu, mỗi câu rõ ý. Viết câu đơn giản, có liên từ để nối ý.

Example: In Vietnam, news sites and social media platforms are very popular. Young people mainly use Facebook and TikTok for updates and entertainment, while older people often visit educational and news websites to learn and stay informed.

Suggestion: Rất tốt: câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có so sánh hợp lý. Để hoàn thiện hơn, thêm một ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ chủ đề bạn tra cứu trên web và sách bạn dùng) và một liên từ chuyển ý. Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

Example: I prefer getting information from websites because they are up-to-date and easily accessible. However, for in-depth study—such as learning theory or fundamentals—I use books because they explain concepts more thoroughly.

Suggestion: Ý tốt nhưng có vài lỗi nhỏ ("I would use to share") và hơi lặp. Nên: 1) Sửa cấu trúc sai, 2) Nêu rõ mục đích và một tính năng cụ thể bạn muốn có trên website, 3) Giữ 2–3 câu. Tránh lặp từ như "maybe" và "for people who are interested" cùng lúc.

Example: Yes, I would like to create my own website to showcase my work and publish articles. I plan to share tutorials, personal stories, and photo galleries to help and inspire others.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng có tiếng lặp "uh" và thiếu sự cô đọng. Nên: 1) Loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng, 2) Nêu 1–2 ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ một kỹ năng hoặc một bài học cụ thể), 3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., "for example", "and").

Example: Websites have taught me many useful things; for example, I read the latest research to support my studies. I also watch videos that teach study techniques and practical skills, such as time management and note-taking methods.

× I mainly use them to read headlines quickly and follow updates from people and organizations are interested in.

✓ I mainly use them to read headlines quickly and follow updates from people and organizations I am interested in.

The sentence lacks a relative pronoun and a correct subject for the clause 'are interested in'. Use 'I am interested in' or 'that I am interested in' to show who has the interest. This fixes the pronoun/reference and completes the clause. Suggestion: Add 'I am' or 'that I am' before 'interested in' to form a full relative clause.

× Actually I used to mainly the news websites and some forums that focus on news technical information.

✓ Actually, I used to mainly read news websites and some forums that focus on technical news and information.

The original is missing a verb after 'used to' (should be followed by base-form verb) and has awkward word order 'news technical information'. Use 'read' as the verb and reorder to 'technical news and information'. Suggestion: After 'used to' include the base verb 'read' and place adjectives before nouns in natural order.

× Now I read the English news science more often and use building translation tools to understand the content in Vietnamese.

✓ Now I read English science news more often and use built-in translation tools to understand the content in Vietnamese.

'The English news science' has wrong word order; correct is 'English science news'. 'Building translation tools' is incorrect; likely meant 'built-in translation tools'. Use the adjective 'built-in' for tools integrated into apps. Suggestion: Put adjective before noun ('English science news') and use correct compound adjective 'built-in'.

× In Vietnam are people often visit new new sites and social media platforms to keep up with the latest trends.

✓ In Vietnam, people often visit news sites and social media platforms to keep up with the latest trends.

The original has wrong word order ('are people often visit') and a duplicated word 'new new'. Correct word order is subject then verb and 'news' not 'new'. Suggestion: Use 'people often visit' and 'news sites'.

× Umm, for example, uh, young, young people especially used sites like Facebook or Tiktok to for updates and entertainment.

✓ For example, young people especially use sites like Facebook or TikTok for updates and entertainment.

Remove repeated filler words, use present tense 'use' to match general statement, and remove extra 'to' before 'for'. Suggestion: Keep statements concise, use present simple for habitual actions.

× Umm On the other hand, the senior citizens tend to umm assess through some websites related to educational.

✓ On the other hand, senior citizens tend to access some websites related to education.

'Assess' is wrong verb; should be 'access'. 'Related to educational' is incorrect form; use noun 'education' or adjective 'educational' with a noun (e.g., 'educational resources'). Suggestion: Use correct verb 'access' and correct noun 'education'.

× For all science websites to learn and broaden their horizons.

✓ They use science websites to learn and broaden their horizons.

Original is a fragment lacking subject and verb. Convert to a full sentence by adding subject 'They use'. Suggestion: Make sure each clause has a clear subject and verb.

× Moreover, are both umm generation are concerned about their news websites which indicates umm anything around them.

✓ Moreover, both generations are concerned about news websites, which keeps them informed about things around them.

Original has doubled 'are' and unclear pronoun 'their' and awkward phrase 'indicates anything around them'. Rephrase to 'both generations are concerned about news websites' and clarify purpose 'keeps them informed about things around them'. Suggestion: Avoid double verbs, use clear subjects, and express the result clearly.

× Yes, in the future I would definitely like to create my own website so I can showcase my work and publish articles. I would use to share my knowledge and personal stories with friends and family, or maybe post tutorials or photos for people who are interested.

✓ Yes, in the future I would definitely like to create my own website so I can showcase my work and publish articles. I would use it to share my knowledge and personal stories with friends and family, or maybe post tutorials or photos for people who are interested.

Second sentence misses object 'it' after 'use'. Add 'it' to refer to the website. Tense 'would' is fine for future desire. Suggestion: Include pronoun 'it' when referring back to 'my website'.

× Uh, actually there are many things I learn from websites because they provide up to date information.

✓ Actually, there are many things I learn from websites because they provide up-to-date information.

Hyphenate 'up-to-date' when used as adjective before noun. Remove extra filler 'Uh' and ensure natural word order. Suggestion: Use 'up-to-date' as adjective and keep sentences concise.

× For example, I can read the latest uh research findings to support my studies and find articles or videos to teach practical life skills and study methods which help me improve my learning.

✓ For example, I can read the latest research findings to support my studies and find articles or videos that teach practical life skills and study methods, which help me improve my learning.

Remove filler 'uh'; add 'that' to introduce the relative clause 'that teach'. Add comma before 'which' clause for clarity. Suggestion: Use relative pronoun 'that' for defining clauses and punctuation to separate clauses.