Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接，但有明显语法和用词问题。应说“a lot of advertisements”或“a lot of ads”，并将“when I watch... or researching...”改为平行结构“when I watch... or research...”。“It's really disturbed me”应改为“It really disturbs me”，“difficulty to close”应改为“it is difficult to close them”。最后一句“the key is really headed”表达不清，可以具体说明关闭按钮很小或不明显。

Example: Definitely. I see a lot of ads when I watch videos on TikTok or research diet plans on my laptop. They can be quite annoying, especially when the close button is tiny or difficult to find.

Suggestion: 内容完整，有童年记忆、原因和结果，逻辑较清楚。不过“could still remember”应改为“I can still remember”，“never seemed in the supermarket”应改为“was never available in the supermarket”。可以补充广告中的具体画面或音乐，使描述更生动；“So”后面应加逗号。

Example: Yes. I can still remember a juice commercial from my childhood because that brand was never available in the supermarket near my house. The colorful packaging and catchy music made a strong impression on me, so I bought it online when I grew up.

Suggestion: 回答了问题，也提供了地点和广告形式，但句子过长，且“on subway and buses”应改为“on the subway and on buses”。“these places have many car motors”不符合语境；应表达为“many people see them”或“there is a large amount of passenger traffic”。建议拆分句子，并用“because”清楚说明原因。

Example: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertising on public transport, especially on the subway and on buses. There are posters inside the vehicles and digital screens at stations. Advertisers use these spaces because millions of passengers see them every day.

Suggestion: 观点明确，但“advertisement”在泛指时通常用复数“advertisements”或“ads”。“disturbed me thinking”应改为“interrupt my viewing”或“disturb me”，因为广告打断的是观看体验，而不是“thinking”。“always suddenly come”应改为“suddenly appear”。可以加入例外情况，例如有用或有创意的广告，以体现“It depends”。

Example: It depends, but generally I do not like advertisements because they often interrupt the videos I am watching. This is especially annoying when they suddenly appear in the middle of a film on apps like Bilibili or Xiaohongshu. However, I do appreciate ads that are short and informative.

Suggestion: 回答有明确偏好和原因，但“and why”和“I will pay for the products”表达不自然，且最后一句过于绝对。应说明喜欢明星广告的具体原因，例如吸引注意力、制作有趣，或者会提高尝试产品的可能性。可以使用“especially”或“for example”连接细节。

Example: I like advertisements that feature pop stars because I am a big fan of pop music. Seeing my favorite singers in an ad immediately catches my attention, especially when the commercial has a memorable song or stylish visuals. I may be more willing to try the product, although I would not buy it automatically.

Suggestion: 这是本组中较完整的回答，有明确例子、广告内容、购买原因和结果，结构自然。需要修正“ATV advertisement”，如果是品牌名称应使用正确拼写；“make smooth”应改为“make smoothies”或“blend ingredients smoothly”，“highlight a special discount”应改为“highlighted a special discount”。建议说明广告如何展示产品功能，使细节更准确。

Example: Yes, I have. I bought a blender after seeing an advertisement for it on TV. The ad showed that it could make smoothies quickly and highlighted a special discount, so I decided to try it. It turned out to be very useful for preparing breakfast in the morning.

× I see a good deal of advertisements when I watch videos on Tiktok or researching food diets through notebook.

✓ I see a good deal of advertising when I watch videos on TikTok or research food diets on my laptop.

“A good deal of”通常修饰不可数名词，因此不能直接修饰复数名词“advertisements”。这里应使用不可数名词“advertising”，或者改为“many advertisements”。此外，“watch”和“research”由“or”连接，形式应保持一致，都使用动词原形。

× I see a good deal of advertisements when I watch videos on Tiktok or researching food diets through notebook.

✓ I see a good deal of advertising when I watch videos on TikTok or research food diets on my laptop.

“when”从句中，两个并列动作是“watch”和“research”，所以应使用两个动词原形，不能使用“researching”。并列结构中，动词形式要保持一致。

× I see a good deal of advertisements when I watch videos on Tiktok or researching food diets through notebook.

✓ I see a good deal of advertising when I watch videos on TikTok or research food diets on my laptop.

表示使用电脑或笔记本进行活动时，通常使用介词“on”，而不是“through”。因此应说“on my laptop”。

× It's really disturbed me but difficulty to close the advertisement because the key is really headed.

✓ It really disturbs me, but it is difficult to close the advertisement because the key is hard to find.

这里描述的是广告经常带来的影响，应使用一般现在时“disturbs”，不能使用过去式“disturbed”。“It’s really disturbed me”结构也不正确；应使用“It really disturbs me”。

× It's really disturbed me but difficulty to close the advertisement because the key is really headed.

✓ It really disturbs me, but it is difficult to close the advertisement because the key is hard to find.

“difficulty to close”不能单独构成完整句子。应使用“It is difficult to...”表示“做某事很困难”。同时，句子中需要正确的主语、系动词和形容词结构。

× It's really disturbed me but difficulty to close the advertisement because the key is really headed.

✓ It really disturbs me, but it is difficult to close the advertisement because the key is hard to find.

“headed”不符合这里的意思。表示按钮不容易找到时，可以使用形容词短语“hard to find”。“difficult”也应作为表语，放在“It is”之后。

× I could still remember some details of juice advertisements from my childhood because this kind of juice never seemed in the supermarket near our house.

✓ I could still remember some details of juice advertisements from my childhood because this kind of juice was never seen in the supermarket near our house.

“juice never seemed”不能表达“这种果汁从未被看到”。这里需要使用被动语态“was never seen”，表示这种果汁没有出现在附近的超市里。

× I do actually often see a lot of advertisements on public transport, especially on subway and buses, including posters and the digital screens because these places have many car motors or so advertisers treat them.

✓ I do actually often see a lot of advertisements on public transport, especially on the subway and buses, including posters and digital screens, because these places have many car motors, so advertisers target them.

“subway”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词，因此应说“the subway”。“buses”是复数名词，可以不加冠词。

× I do actually often see a lot of advertisements on public transport, especially on subway and buses, including posters and the digital screens because these places have many car motors or so advertisers treat them.

✓ I do actually often see a lot of advertisements on public transport, especially on the subway and buses, including posters and digital screens, because these places have many car motors, so advertisers target them.

“because”和“so”不能在同一个因果结构中重复使用。可以使用“because”引导原因，也可以使用“so”连接结果。这里将结构改为“because..., so...”时，建议删除其中一个；更自然的表达是使用逗号和“so”连接结果。

× It depends, but usually I don't like advertisement because I think advertisement really disturbed me thinking and always suddenly come while just watching movies and uh videos through apps like Billy or Red Note.

✓ It depends, but usually I don't like advertisements because I think advertisements really disturb my thoughts and always suddenly appear while I am watching movies and videos through apps like Bilibili or RedNote.

这里泛指广告，不是某一个特定广告，所以应使用复数“advertisements”，而不是单数“advertisement”。表示多个广告出现时，动词也应使用复数形式“appear”。

× It depends, but usually I don't like advertisement because I think advertisement really disturbed me thinking and always suddenly come while just watching movies and uh videos through apps like Billy or Red Note.

✓ It depends, but usually I don't like advertisements because I think advertisements really disturb my thoughts and always suddenly appear while I am watching movies and videos through apps like Bilibili or RedNote.

这句话描述的是平时对广告的感受和广告经常出现的情况，应使用一般现在时“disturb”和“appear”，不能使用过去式“disturbed”。

× It depends, but usually I don't like advertisement because I think advertisement really disturbed me thinking and always suddenly come while just watching movies and uh videos through apps like Billy or Red Note.

✓ It depends, but usually I don't like advertisements because I think advertisements really disturb my thoughts and always suddenly appear while I am watching movies and videos through apps like Bilibili or RedNote.

“disturbed me thinking”结构不完整且搭配错误。应改为“disturb my thoughts”或“disturb me while I am thinking”。另外，“while just watching”缺少明确主语，改为“while I am watching”后句子结构更完整。

× I like ads with pop stars because I'm a big fan of pop music and why.

✓ I like ads with pop stars because I'm a big fan of pop music and I like seeing my favorite stars in advertisements.

“and why”不能连接两个完整的意思。“why”不能在这里作为并列连词使用。应使用“and”连接完整的分句，例如“and I like seeing...”来表达另一个原因。

× I remember I bought a blender because of ATV advertisement.

✓ I remember I bought a blender because of an ATV advertisement.

“advertisement”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。“ATV”以元音音素开头，因此使用“an”，而不是“a”。

× The ad showed how quickly it could make smooth and highlight a special discount.

✓ The ad showed how quickly it could make smoothies and highlighted a special discount.

整句话描述过去看到的广告内容，因此两个并列动词都应使用过去时。与“showed”并列时，应使用“highlighted”，不能使用现在时“highlight”。

× The ad showed how quickly it could make smooth and highlight a special discount.

✓ The ad showed how quickly it could make smoothies and highlighted a special discount.

“make smooth”后面缺少合适的名词，不能表达“制作冰沙”。应改为“make smoothies”。同时，“showed...”和“highlighted...”是两个并列的过去动作，结构应保持清晰。