Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng nhiều cụm từ khó hiểu, lặp từ và dùng sai cấu trúc như “when I on”, “when I watching” và “keep it in time”. Em nên trả lời trực tiếp rằng em thường thấy quảng cáo khi xem video hoặc lướt mạng xã hội, sau đó nêu cảm xúc và lý do. Hãy dùng hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và liên từ như “especially”, “because” để nối ý rõ ràng.

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer, especially on social media and YouTube. They usually appear while I am watching videos or checking my news feed. I find them annoying because they interrupt what I am doing.

Suggestion: Em đã cố gắng kể về một quảng cáo siêu anh hùng, nhưng câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng và có nhiều từ không rõ nghĩa như “When I were dry” và “very prey”. Cần mở đầu bằng một câu hoàn chỉnh ở thì quá khứ, ví dụ “Yes, I remember an advertisement about a superhero.” Sau đó giải thích quảng cáo có nội dung gì và vì sao nó gây ấn tượng hoặc ảnh hưởng đến ước mơ của em.

Example: Yes, I remember an advertisement for a superhero toy when I was a child. It showed a superhero saving people and fighting villains. I was fascinated by it, and for a while, I even wanted to become a superhero.

Suggestion: Em trả lời đúng chủ đề nhưng chưa phân biệt rõ quảng cáo trên phương tiện giao thông và trên mạng xã hội. Cụm “want to dominating” và “expand their advertisements level” không tự nhiên. Em nên nói cụ thể em thường thấy quảng cáo ở đâu, chẳng hạn trên xe buýt, tàu điện hoặc nhà ga, rồi đưa ra lý do ngắn gọn bằng “because” hoặc “as a result”.

Example: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertisements on public transport. They are usually placed inside buses, on train platforms, or on the walls of stations. I think companies use these locations because many commuters see the ads every day.

Suggestion: Em đã nêu rõ quan điểm không thích quảng cáo và có lý do phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa lỗi hòa hợp chủ ngữ–động từ: “it makes”, “sometimes”, và dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên “ 광고 interrupt my movies” hoặc “advertisements interrupt my viewing”. Hãy tránh lặp “because” và hoàn thành câu cuối bằng cảm xúc cụ thể như “annoyed” hoặc “frustrated”.

Example: I’m not really into advertisements because they often interrupt the videos or movies I am watching. I also find some of them annoying when they appear repeatedly. However, I do not mind short advertisements if they are relevant to me.

Suggestion: Ý tưởng về quảng cáo đồ ăn khá phù hợp, nhưng em cần dùng từ chính xác: “food advertisements” thay vì “the career of advertising”, “they help me discover” thay vì “it also help me can see”, và “give me energy” thay vì “make me more energy”. Câu trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng loại quảng cáo em thích, sau đó nêu lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể về món ăn hoặc công thức.

Example: I like advertisements for food, especially those showing restaurants or new dishes. They often use attractive pictures, so I feel hungry when I see them. Sometimes, they also inspire me to try a new restaurant or cook a different recipe.

Suggestion: Em đã trả lời đúng dạng câu hỏi trải nghiệm và đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể là một chiếc váy. Tuy nhiên, cần dùng “advertisements” thay cho “assignments”, nói “I have bought” thay vì “I have ever ever bought”, và sửa “it looks beautiful” तथा “it has my favorite color”. Hãy sắp xếp câu theo trình tự: sản phẩm, nơi nhìn thấy quảng cáo, đặc điểm yêu thích và quyết định mua.

Example: Yes, I once bought a dress because of an advertisement on social media. It looked beautiful and came in my favorite color, so it immediately caught my attention. After checking the price and the reviews, I decided to buy it.

× when I watching movie in YouTube

✓ when I am watching a movie on YouTube

The present participle watching must be used with the auxiliary verb am in the present continuous tense. A singular countable noun also needs the article a, and the usual preposition is on YouTube.

× I feel very unhappy and comfortable

✓ I feel very unhappy and uncomfortable

Comfortable means feeling physically or emotionally at ease, which conflicts with the intended meaning. The adjective uncomfortable expresses a negative feeling.

× When I were dry

✓ When I was a child

The question refers to the past, so the past form was is required with the subject I. The corrected phrase also gives the sentence a complete and meaningful time expression.

× I am interested in the one advertisement

✓ I was interested in one advertisement

Because the speaker is describing a childhood experience, the past form was interested is needed instead of am interested.

× the one advertisements

✓ the one advertisement

One refers to a single item, so the noun after it must be singular: advertisement, not advertisements.

× the advertisement talk about the superhero

✓ the advertisement talks about a superhero

The singular subject advertisement takes the third-person singular verb talks. The article a is used because superhero is a singular countable noun mentioned generally.

× when I see it, I want to become a superhero

✓ when I saw it, I wanted to become a superhero

The speaker is describing a past childhood reaction, so both see and want should be changed to their past forms saw and wanted.

× like see and see very prey

✓ like the superhero I saw in the advertisement

The original phrase does not form a grammatically complete or meaningful clause. The corrected relative clause clearly identifies the superhero the speaker saw.

× I often see a lot of advertising on transport and on social media because in this in a because on social media, many people want to dominating and social usually expand their advertisements level for us.

✓ I often see a lot of advertising on public transport and on social media. On social media, many companies usually expand their advertising to reach more people.

The original sentence contains repeated and incomplete clauses, making the structure difficult to follow. The correction separates the ideas into complete sentences and uses a clear subject and verb in each clause.

× many people want to dominating

✓ many companies want to dominate

After want, use the to-infinitive, not an -ing form: want to dominate. The verb dominate is therefore used in its base form.

× it make me feel uncomfortable

✓ it makes me feel uncomfortable

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must end in -s: makes.

× sometime I also angry with advertisements

✓ sometimes I am also angry with advertisements

Sometimes is the correct adverb for an action or feeling occurring occasionally. The adjective angry requires the linking verb am with the subject I.

× it's disruptive my watching my movies

✓ it disrupts my movie-watching

The verb disrupt must be used as disrupts because the subject it is singular. The noun phrase movie-watching is also a grammatically suitable object after disrupts.

× sometimes make me feel

✓ sometimes they make me feel uncomfortable

The subject advertisements is plural, so it should be replaced by the plural pronoun they. The sentence also needs a complement after feel to express the speaker's reaction.

× I think the career of advertising and I eat that's is that's about food

✓ I think the kind of advertising I like is advertising about food.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. The correction uses a clear structure with the subject, verb, and complement in the correct order.

× it also help me can see many delicious food

✓ it also helps me see a lot of delicious food

The singular subject it requires helps. After helps, use the base verb see without can. Food is generally uncountable, so a lot of food is more appropriate than many food.

× sometime it make me more energy

✓ sometimes it makes me feel more energetic

Sometimes is the correct adverbial form, and the singular subject it requires makes. The adjective energetic is needed after feel; energy is a noun and cannot describe how someone feels in this structure.

× Yes, I have ever ever bought something because of advertisements. It is a dress

✓ Yes, I have bought something because of an advertisement. It was a dress.

The answer describes a completed past purchase, so was is more suitable than is when identifying the item. The unnecessary repeated word ever has also been removed, and the singular noun advertisement needs the article an.

× when I see it on social media I really like

✓ When I saw it on social media, I really liked it

The purchase happened in the past, so see and like should be changed to saw and liked. The pronoun it is needed as the object of liked.

× because it's look like very beautiful

✓ because it looked very beautiful

The sentence refers to the past, so looked is required. The verb look is followed directly by the adjective beautiful; look like very beautiful is not correct here.

× it have my favorite color

✓ it had my favorite color

The singular subject it requires has in the present tense or had in the past tense. Since the speaker is describing a past purchase, had is the appropriate form.

× I decide to buy it

✓ I decided to buy it

The decision was made in the past, so the regular past-tense form decided is needed.